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Question: Rewrite this and please make me cry. Good afternoon, [Name], My name is Eiden Siso, and I am an incoming sophomore. I recently attended a superintendent hardship meeting and was informed that my school choices are at full capacity. Given these circumstances, I have compiled a list of additional school options. There is something I didn't mention during the hardship meeting because it was too painful to discuss. However, I feel this is my last opportunity to explain my situation. This past year at my current high school, I have experienced bullying, been threatened, and endured numerous lockdowns. One particular lockdown profoundly impacted my life to what feels like an irreversible extent. The fear I felt that day still haunts me. Every time I set foot in the school, I am overwhelmed by the memories of that day. I remember hiding in the bathroom, trembling, while sending a message to my parents saying "I love you," just in case it would be the last time. I understand that this could happen at any school. For me, it really happened, and I know that a fresh start is what I need. Before the incident, school was my safe harbor, a place where I could build my educational prowess and socialize freely. But ever since the incident, I've had a lot of trouble finding that same connection with my current school environment. The emotional toll from that day has been devastating. Gratefully, no one was physically injured, but that doesn't mean the fear was fake. These experiences have left me suffering from PTSD and depression. Looking back at the experience, I felt there was no coming back mentally. Although it is difficult, I am trying to think of ways to recover instead of letting the fear win. I strongly believe that my first step in recovery is to start fresh. I don't want to lose my chance at a normal life or be held back by these painful memories any longer. This is my last chance to rebuild what I had, both academically and mentally. Please, I kindly ask for your understanding and support. With research and consideration, I have created a list of schools in order of preference. I know these schools will provide me with the fresh start I am yearning for. If there is no availability at the start of the year, I would also be grateful for a position at any time during the year. (This list is formatted with 1 being the most preferred and 5 being the least preferred. However, I am grateful for any opportunities available.) 1. Cooper City High School 2. Cypress Bay High School 3. West Broward High School 4. Everglades High School 5. Coral Glades High School
Good afternoon, [Name], My name is Eiden Siso, and I am soon to be a sophomore. Recently, I attended a superintendent hardship meeting where I was informed that my school choices are at full capacity. Despite this, I felt compelled to share a part of my story that I was too pained to disclose during the meeting. This feels like my last opportunity to explain my situation and plead for your understanding. The past year at my current high school has been nothing short of a nightmare. I have endured relentless bullying, received threats, and lived through numerous lockdowns. One particular lockdown has left an indelible scar on my soul. The terror of that day continues to haunt me. The memory of hiding in the bathroom, paralyzed with fear, sending what I thought might be my final "I love you" to my parents, is a shadow that follows me relentlessly. Each time I walk through the school doors, I am overwhelmed by a crushing wave of fear and memories of that day. School used to be my sanctuary—a place where I felt safe, where I could focus on learning and building friendships. But that sense of security has been shattered. I cannot reconcile my current school environment with the place that once felt like home. Surviving that lockdown day physically intact doesn’t diminish the emotional impact. The terror was real, and its consequences have been devastating. I now suffer from PTSD and depression, and the once-stable foundation of my academic and social life has crumbled. I am desperate for a fresh start. I need to escape the haunting memories and rebuild my life. This is not just about transferring schools; it’s about saving my future. The fear that grips me cannot be vanquished by sheer willpower alone—I need a new environment to heal and grow. I have put a great deal of thought and research into identifying schools that could provide me with the fresh start I so desperately need. Listed below are my preferences, from most to least preferred, but I am grateful for any chance of a new beginning, even if it means transferring mid-year. 1. Cooper City High School 2. Cypress Bay High School 3. West Broward High School 4. Everglades High School 5. Coral Glades High School I am at a crossroads where a decision in my favor could very well determine my ability to recover and lead a normal, fulfilling life. Please, I beg of you, understand the gravity of my situation and extend your support. Sincerely, Eiden Siso
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