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Question: He writes a story about an attractive, muscular, egotist and narcissistic vampire who in fatal years appeared to be 25 years old who, because of a woman who loved her because she had married a deadly man, the vampire to take revenge on her, was capable To steal at night as they slept the baby of a few days born, the vampire planned Vampire would be the perfect revenge for the couple, they would not see the baby grow, and that happened, the baby grew and was educated by the vampire, the vampire was kind and loving only with him, while the little girl grew, he became overprotective and possessive With him, because he was going alone, while that happened the couple looked for their son for heaven and earth, every time the couple were close to finding him the vampire fled with the child, after many years the young man already turned into a nerd of 17 years, he met his true parents who were his teachers. The vampire, seeing that hiscreto would be revealed murderer to the couple, he would not lose to Suchijo. His son would find out and that would make him do anything to recover his son.
It sounds like you've already got a great starting concept for your story. Here's how I might suggest moving forward with it or making it more engaging: 1. Make the vampires' reasons more complex: Instead of having the vampire steal the baby just for revenge, maybe tie it to some sort of prophecy or fate that makes the vampire believe his actions are justified or even noble. 2. Make the parents' search more active and detailed: Instead of just explaining that they are looking for their son, show us. Maybe one or both parents are detectives, or they hire a private investigator, or they have some supernatural power of their own. This way, their search can form an important subplot. 3. Build tension between the vampire and the teenager: Maybe the teenager starts to suspect something is off, even before his parents appear. Have him question and investigate his circumstances. Make it a process to uncover the truth. 4. Make the son’s feelings towards his parents and the vampire complex: Once the young man discovers his true parents, don't just make him instantly switch sides. Instead, he could be torn between his loyalty and love for the vampire who raised him, and the biological parents who love him but are essentially strangers. 5. Set up a confrontation between the son, the vampire, and the parents: Perhaps the vampire kills the parents because he fears their influence on the son, but that ends up being the catalyst for him to turn his back on the vampire. Remember to show not tell your story. Engage your readers in a thrilling chase that keeps them guessing till the end. Also, it might be good to have your characters as multidimensional and believable as possible. For example, the vampire should become less narcissistic and egotistic as he grows to love and raise the child. It'll make your story more intriguing. Plus, for an added twist, you can have the revelation that the vampire was once human and is unknowingly the brother or close relative to the deadly man. It will add more depth to the story.
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