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Question: Story: Write me a story about 14 year old Garrett watching his 6 year old sister Eva while his mom was out of town. It was nighttime and Garrett and Eva were sleeping when Garrett woke up startled by a loud noise. Quietly tiptoeing out of his room only wearing a white t-shirt and shorts, he heard the noises coming from downstairs. Peering down the stairs, Garrett spotted a large group of people rummaging through everything. Afraid and thinking about Eva, Garrett snuck to her room. Checking inside, Garrett was relieved to see Eva still asleep in her bed wearing her yellow fairy princess dress. Garrett had left his phone in his room but decided he was gonna wake Eva up. Trying his best to, he couldn't get Eva to budge. As he turned to leave the room, he accidentally slipped his feet into Eva's flowery strap-on sandals. Way too small for his feet, Garrett immediately kicked them off grossed out that he wore them even accidentally. Shortly though, his feet began to shrink and change into Eva's complete with her cracked nail polish. Trying to resist, he tried to wake Eva up and find a way to reverse his transformation but the changes accelerated. His arms, legs and body got shorter and turned into Eva's. His head and hair turned into Eva's with her short brown curls and his eyes turned into Eva's childlike innocent brown eyes. His teeth reverted and changed into Eva's baby teeth and his voice raised all the way to Eva's 6 year old pitch. Garrett looked at a family photo of him, Eva and their mom. He freaked as he noticed he was disappearing from the photo leaving only Eva and his mom. He turned to Eva's bed and noticed she was evaporating into a mist until she was gone from the bed completely. Garrett's heart stopped as he realized he no longer existed and history rewrote itself to where his mom had left Eva home by herself while she was away. Soon, Eva's yellow fairy princess dress formed on Garrett. His memories quickly started rewriting, changing, altering, and simplifying Garrett's experiences with Eva's until he could only remember being Eva. He also started involuntarily floating to Eva's bed forcibly landing in the position she was in when she was sleeping and uncontrollably falling back to sleep. Seconds later, the new Eva opened her eyes before yawning and stretching as she got out of bed. Her childlike innocence prominent, she no longer had any memory of the encounter with intruders downstairs when she was still Garrett and simply looked around her room before standing up. As she looked down at her dress, she started dancing and galloping around slightly very happy to be a princess. She was also happy her mommy trusted her enough to be home alone for a couple days while she was out on business. She walked over to her flowery sandals and slipped them on and grabbed a wand from her toy box and then grabbed a tiara from her closet putting it on. The new Eva walked back over to the mirror admiring how she loved being a girl. The new Eva said the quote "I am pwincess Eva. Bwing me mow Skittles" in her childlike lisp. She calmly walked to her door with her wand in her hand and her crown on her head as she headed to the stairs to get ready to grab herself a snack. She stopped like a deer in headlights spotting all the big people downstairs going through all the stuff. Her heart pounding fast, the new Eva ran fast back to her room almost losing grip of her wand on the hardwood floor. As she closed her door, her dress got caught in the door. On the verge of tears, the new Eva pulled on her dress as hard as she could with her tiny hands eventually pulling it all the way through. Her attention span shorter, the new Eva walked over to her bedroom mirror and checked her dress to make sure it was still okay. As she innocently looked her reflection in her brown eyes, Eva grabbed all her baby dolls and Barbie dolls and My Little Pony figures lining them up and aiming them at her door. As she nervously crawled under her bed, she blocked her bed with her 4 beanbag chairs she had in her room. The new Eva clutched her wand tight as she said the quote "Mommy! Whei aw you?" She really regretted begging her mom to stay home alone and wondered why she was home alone not knowing she used to be 14 year old Garrett.
Rewrite: In a quiet suburban house, a 14-year-old named Garrett awoke with a start. He was home alone, babysitting his little sister, Eva, while their mom was out of town for a few days. A loud noise coming from downstairs drew him from his slumber and he immediately felt a surge of adrenaline. All he was wearing was his white t-shirt and shorts. As his heart pounded in his chest, he tiptoed out of his room and towards the noise, praying Eva hadn't been disturbed by it as well. Peering down the stairs, his fears were realized. There was a group of people, unknown to him, rummaging through their belongings. His first thought was Eva - he had to make sure she was safe. With quick silent steps, he moved to her room to find her peacefully sleeping in her yellow fairy princess dress, blissfully unaware of the chaos unfolding downstairs. His phone was back in his room but he decided against leaving Eva alone even for a minute. He tried to rouse her gently, but to no avail. As he made his way around the foot of her bed, he accidentally slipped his feet into her flowery strap-on sandals. They were too small and he immediately kicked them off, disgusted at even having worn them briefly. But something strange began to happen. His feet contorted and shrunk, and when they finished, they looked precisely like Eva’s, right down to her cracked nail polish. Shock turned into panic as the transformation started accelerating. His body, his arms, his legs – everything was being replaced by Eva’s physique, right down to her short brown curls and her innocent brown eyes. His teeth even reshaped into that of a child’s, and his once deep adolescent voice was now replaced by a high-pitched sound. Running to the family portrait that hung on the wall, he looked at it and gasped as he saw his own image vanishing from it, leaving only Eva and their mom. In a frantic desperation, he whipped around, only to watch as Eva dissolved into thin air, leaving the bed empty. As his clothing transformed into Eva’s yellow fairy princess dress, his heart pounded with a sick realization. History was being rewritten: it was Eva who was left home alone, not him. Memories started overlaying each other as he soon only remembered being Eva, having her experiences, her thoughts, and her mind. Even his agency wasn’t his own, he found himself floating towards Eva’s bed, forced into a sleeping pose as he drifted off to sleep. When she woke up seconds later, she had no recollection of the intrusion downstairs. Happily dancing and galloping around the room in her princess dress, she took pride in being trusted enough to be left home alone. She adorned herself with her tiara, picked up her magic wand, and after admiring herself in the mirror, she walked out of the room chanting, "I am Princess Eva. Bring me more Skittles." As she reached the top of the stairs, she froze. There were strangers in the house! In fear, she rushed back into her room, nearly tripping over her wand. After a scare with her dress getting caught in the door, she quickly checked to make sure it was okay. Reassured, she lined up an assortment of toys along the door and barricaded herself under the bed with beanbag chairs. Clutching her wand tight, she whimpered, "Mommy, where are you?" As the truth set in, she longed for her mother and felt regret about staying home alone. Little did she know, she had used to be a 14-year-old boy named Garrett only moments ago.
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