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Question: Rewrite this and please make me cry. Good afternoon, [Name], My name is Eiden Siso, and I am an incoming sophomore. I recently attended a superintendent hardship meeting and was informed that my school choices are at full capacity. Given these circumstances, I have compiled a list of additional school options. There is something I didn't mention during the hardship meeting because it was too painful to discuss. However, I feel this is my last opportunity to explain my situation. This past year at my current high school, I have experienced bullying, been threatened, and endured numerous lockdowns. One particular lockdown profoundly impacted my life to what feels like an irreversible extent. The fear I felt that day still haunts me. Every time I set foot in the school, I am overwhelmed by the memories of that day. I remember hiding in the bathroom, trembling, while sending a message to my parents saying "I love you," just in case it would be the last time. I understand that this could happen at any school. For me, it really happened, and I know that a fresh start is what I need. Before the incident, school was my safe harbor, a place where I could build my educational prowess and socialize freely. But ever since the incident, I've had a lot of trouble finding that same connection with my current school environment. The emotional toll from that day has been devastating. Gratefully, no one was physically injured, but that doesn't mean the fear was fake. These experiences have left me suffering from PTSD and depression. Looking back at the experience, I felt there was no coming back mentally. Although it is difficult, I am trying to think of ways to recover instead of letting the fear win. I strongly believe that my first step in recovery is to start fresh. I don't want to lose my chance at a normal life or be held back by these painful memories any longer. This is my last chance to rebuild what I had, both academically and mentally. Please, I kindly ask for your understanding and support. With research and consideration, I have created a list of schools in order of preference. I know these schools will provide me with the fresh start I am yearning for. If there is no availability at the start of the year, I would also be grateful for a position at any time during the year. (This list is formatted with 1 being the most preferred and 5 being the least preferred. However, I am grateful for any opportunities available.) 1. Cooper City High School 2. Cypress Bay High School 3. West Broward High School 4. Everglades High School 5. Coral Glades High School
Good afternoon, [Name], My name is Eiden Siso, and I am an incoming sophomore. Recently, I attended a superintendent hardship meeting and learned that my preferred school choices are at full capacity. Despite this, I have compiled a list of alternative options in hopes of finding a place where I can finally feel safe again. There is a part of my story that I couldn't bring myself to share during the hardship meeting—it was too excruciating to voice aloud. However, I realize now that it’s crucial for you to understand the depth of my situation before it’s too late. Over the past year at my current high school, I have endured relentless bullying, received threats, and lived through multiple lockdowns. One lockdown in particular left an indelible scar on my soul. The horror of that day is something I cannot shake, and it continues to haunt me mercilessly. The terror I felt in that moment still surges through my veins every time I walk through those school doors. I can still feel the rough edges of the bathroom stall where I hid, my body quivering uncontrollably as I messaged my parents a simple "I love you," fearing it might be my last words. That gut-wrenching fear and the sense of my life hanging by a thread has never left me. I am aware that such dreadful events can happen in any school, but for me, it was a harsh reality that happened here, and it has shattered my sense of safety entirely. A new beginning is not just a desire but a dire necessity for my sanity and well-being. Before the incident, school was a sanctuary for me, a place to nurture my intellect and form meaningful friendships. That day changed everything. Now, the very thought of returning to that environment ties my stomach in knots and floods my mind with an unbearable sense of dread. The emotional toll has been devastating, leaving me grappling with PTSD and depression. Physically, no one was injured, but the fear we endured was palpable and far from imaginary. I have been struggling with these crippling emotions every single day since that traumatic event. Reflecting on it, I often wonder if I will be able to reclaim the pieces of my shattered soul. Despite the darkness, I am determined to not let fear conquer me. I genuinely believe that starting over at a new school is my first crucial step toward recovery. I am desperately reaching out, not wanting to lose my chance at normalcy or to be forever haunted by these memories. Thus, I am imploring for your understanding and support. After extensive research and consideration, I have identified a list of schools that I believe could offer me the fresh start I desperately need. If there is no availability at the beginning of the year, I would be immensely grateful for consideration at any point during the school year. Here is the list, ranked in order of my preference: 1. Cooper City High School 2. Cypress Bay High School 3. West Broward High School 4. Everglades High School 5. Coral Glades High School Please, I kindly beg you to consider my request. Your support can help me reclaim a sense of safety and normality that was violently taken from me. With sincere gratitude, Eiden Siso
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