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Question: If needed re-read the story, "Everyday Use" by Alice Walker and prepare to choose and re-write a specific "scene" from either Maggie OR Dee's perspective. Rewrite a scene from "Everyday Use" to be told from the first person perspective of Dee or Maggie. Your writing should be at least 3 paragraphs long! Be sure to utilize the 3-D Narrative Writing notes to help you create a strong, descriptive piece!
Certainly! Below is a scene rewritten from the perspective of Maggie from Alice Walker's "Everyday Use." I'll focus on the moment when Dee arrives at the house with her new identity, Wangero. --- I stood at the window, hidden behind the thin curtain, peering out at the cloud of dust approaching on the gravel road. The sun beat down without mercy, and for a moment, I squinted against its glare, trying to make out who was coming. A tall figure, vibrant and loud with colors that seemed to clash against the sky, became clearer. Of course, it was Dee—or rather, Wangero, as she demanded to be called these days. My heart tightened, not quite with jealousy, but with a tingling sensation of awe mixed with relief that I was not in her whirlwind of noise and color. As she stepped out of the car, she swung the strap of her bright purse over her shoulder, her smile wide with the kind of confidence I never understood. It filled the small, dusty yard like the church choir fills the air on Sundays. Her companion, a man who seemed as sculpted as the statues I saw in magazines, followed. Dee surveyed the house as if she had come to see it for the first time, eyes skimming across the familiar roof, the chipped paint on the porch, and finally settling on me. Her gaze softened, just briefly, before she raised her arms in a dramatic gesture, declaring her affection for home in a voice that rang with a tone I could never quite imitate. Mama's voice called me from the kitchen, shattering my moment of watching from a distance. As I moved toward the door, my steps seemed heavy compared to Dee’s light, bounding strides. I was always aware of the difference—her aliveness, her vibrant presence contrasting my soft whispers and fading footsteps. But standing in the shadow of the entrance, I took a breath and remembered that I knew this house like my own skin. Unlike Dee, I understood the stories of every worn step and cracked wall. Mama and I lived here, quietly weaving our stories into each stitch of the quilts, into the floors that creaked our secrets. When Dee marched inside, eyes alight with a hunger to claim, I steadied myself, remembering I wasn’t invisible—I simply held a different kind of power, one deeply rooted in the quiet strength of my everyday life.
(Dee's perspective) The clanky driveway bell rings, heralding our arrival. Mama and Maggie stand timidly at the doorstep, squinting as if the sunlight itself was a stranger. The sight of them in their simplicity and rawness fanned a familiar flame of rebellion in me - towards them, towards what they represented but, more significantly, towards the ungraceful version of myself that I shed years back. I watch Mama carefully, as she unconsciously covers a burn scar tracing her wrist with her other hand. The mere sight overwhelmed me with an uncomfortable mix of disdain and sympathy. Oh, how I had tried to rise beyond these unsophisticated emblems of my past; Mama's scars, the rustic house, my own birth name, "Dee". I am Wangero Leewanika Kemanjo now, my name - the vibrant marker of our African heritage, a heritage that my family had willingly forgotten, trapped in traces of a bygone era that were tattooed onto their/our lives. Stepping out of my car, I find myself in an uncanny land of familiarity. The whiff of the dust, the dry summer heat, the lurching ghost of the past - they are all an intimate part of me, though I might deny it. 'How can a daughter of a mighty continent, an incarnate voice of my people, carry these unpolished, rural elements?' I ask myself. Glittering with overdone enthusiasm to veil my internal turmoil, I raise my hand and wave. Like the people they are, simple and unassuming, they wave back, eyes wide and expectant. The old house stands a silent witness to this strange reunion, a reminder of what I shunned and what, unknown to me, continued to shape me - the heritage I pushed into the backroom of my existence and labeled 'Everyday Use'. Walking closer to them with a forced smile, I prepare myself to confront my past, a past which I had valiantly replaced with colors of Africa. Little did they know, the real battle was me against myself, against Dee, against everyday use.
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