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Question: Story: Write a story about 5 year old Jace spending the night at his friend Cam's house. Cam and Jace had never had a sleepover before. Cam's 35 year old mom Sandra was not the best though. She often drank a lot of alcohol constantly passing out on the couch and in her bedroom. She was a single mom who had been since Cam was born. Cam often wished his mom was a little bit more like the other moms of his friends at school. Sandra's long curly brown hair and brown eyes looked friendly enough. She often wore very short dresses, lots of jewelry, short shorts and heels, platforms or wedges and sometimes flip flops. While playing downstairs, Cam felt himself getting hungry. His mom would sometimes make some type of dinner for him but tonight she hadn't come downstairs yet. Getting hungrier, Cam begged Jace to go upstairs and ask Cam's mom to come down and make dinner. Jace was never the most excited to do things like this but obliged his friend. As Jace approached the bedroom, he opened the door. He was immediately hit with the loud sound of Sandra snoring and the strong smell of alcohol in the room. Grossed out at the state of the messy room, Jace nervously got closer to Sandra in her bed until he gently shook her to try to wake her up. Feeling pointless, Jace decided to leave the room. As he walked, his tiny feet accidentally slipped into a pair of black platform sandals belonging to Sandra. Before he had a chance to remove them, his tiny feet immediately cracked and aged into a perfect fit for the sandals. Looking down at his new feet, he freaked as he recognized they looked like his friend's mom's feet now. He tried to remove the platform sandals but they wouldn't budge. Shortly, the changes accelerated. His hair grew long brown and curly. His eyes turned brown and alluring. His arms, legs and body feminized as he gained his friend's mom's breasts. His teeth turned crooked and yellow from the alcohol. His voice turned into Sandra's voice. His outfit turned into a pair of very short shorts and a black belly top. Suddenly, the real Sandra evaporated into mist and disappeared. This terrified Jace as he realized he was becoming the new Sandra. He only hoped that he would be a better mom than the real Sandra. Suddenly, his memories started altering. He started seeing visions of himself drinking, sleeping and puking. His heart started pounding from fear as he realized he was becoming the same horrible Sandra. Eventually, his memories were completely altered, changed and worsened until he only remembered being Sandra. The new Sandra squinted as she yawned and stretched. Looking down at her outfit, she rubbed her eyes and felt a throbbing headache come on as she rubbed her head with her hands. Sandra stumbled over the garbage in her room and tripped causing her to curse loudly. She then puked all over the floor in her room before eventually shrugging it off and ignoring the puke. Sandra said "Oh God! My head! Do I really have to leave my room?" Sandra then grabbed an unopened beer and started drinking it. She then tossed the empty can on the ground in her room. After moaning and groaning at her reflection in her mirror, Sandra struggled to stay balanced. She gripped the rail on the stairs tightly as she carefully made her way to the bottom. Sandra then told her son he could figure out dinner himself if he wanted so badly before heading back upstairs and locking her bedroom door before throwing herself on her bed with her platform sandals still clung to her feet having no memory of being a 5 year old named Jace.
That's an unusual story, but I have few suggestions to improve the coherence and structure: Story: Five-year-old Jace was spending the night at his friend Cam's house. This was their first sleepover, and both of them were thrilled. Cam lived with his single mom, Sandra, a 35-year-old woman with a bit of a wavering lifestyle. Despite Sandra's pleasant appearance, with her curly brown hair and gentle brown eyes, her drinking habit was a concern for Cam. One evening, while playing downstairs, a pang of hunger struck Cam. He used to get dinner made by his mom if she was sober enough, but tonight, there was no sign of her. Unable to bear hunger anymore, Cam asked Jace to go upstairs and request Sandra to make them some dinner. With a slight reluctance, Jace agreed and slowly made his way to the room. The noise of loud snoring ushered him in along with a strong aroma of alcohol. The sight shook him a bit, but summoning courage, he reached Sandra's bed and tried to wake her up to no avail. As he was leaving the room, his feet, by accident, slipped into a pair of black platform sandals that laid on the floor. Suddenly, a strange occurrence took place - Jace's feet changed and perfectly fit into the sandals. Taken aback, he tried to remove them, but all efforts were in vain. Slowly, he watched in horror as his body morphed into the likeness of Sandra's. His short hair grew into long, curly brown locks, his eyes turned brown, and he even gained her feminine figure. In the blink of an eye, the original Sandra evaporated, filling him with terror as he realized he was becoming the new Sandra. Not just physically, but he could also feel his memories altering. Visions of drinking, slumbering, and being sick filled his mind, shrouding his pure memories. The sudden rush proved too much for him, making his heart pound with fear. Yet, he held onto the faint hope of being a better mother than the first Sandra. Despite his thoughts, Jace's transformation didn't stop. His boyish innocence slowly faded, replacing by the persona of Sandra. The physical changes were unsettling, but the mental transformation was terrifying. A sense of dread filled him when his childhood memories disappeared, replaced by Sandra's life experiences. Once the transformation ended, Jace, now completely Sandra, woke up from the stupor. Rubbing her head, she complained about a severe headache and clumsily picked herself up from the bed. She made her way downstairs, falling and cursing along the way. After telling Cam tersely to sort his own dinner, she struggled back to her room and collapsed onto her bed, platform sandals still on her feet. Her room now a mess with vomit and an empty beer can, Sandra's transformation was complete. As she lay there on her bed, she no longer remembered being a boy named Jace, only the troubled life of Sandra lived on.
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