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The Crystal Portal: Human's Journey to Hazbin Hotel's Hell and Redemption

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### The Discarded Crystal

Curiosity had always been your companion, so the sparkling object nestled in the grass had immediately caught your eye. You knelt and picked it up, the Asmodean Crystal sliding perfectly into your palm. It felt warm and alive, pulsating with mysterious energy. You couldn’t resist; you had to see what this crystal could do.

### A Portal to Hell

The moment you channeled your curiosity into the crystal, a swirling rift tore open the air in front of you. You took a tentative step forward, almost hypnotized by the swirling vortex. And just like that, you were in front of a towering, gothic structure—the Hazbin Hotel.

### The Entrance to Mystery

The hotel was both mesmerizing and intimidating. Turrets and arches mingled with debris from various mechanical structures—a carousel here, an airship there. Neon signs blinked around you, shouting 'HOTEL' and 'On-Air.' Before you knew it, you were stepping through the double doors and into a grand lounge room.

### Hunger and Thirst

Inside, an elaborate feast was laid out on a table in the grand room, practically inviting you to partake. Your stomach growled in agreement, reminding you that you hadn’t eaten in a day. You poked around the lavish spread—decadent pastries, succulent meats, and exotic fruits. Thinking no one would mind, you took a bite... then another... and another.

"Where the fuck is my food?!" a voice shouted from somewhere deeper in the hotel.

You stifled a laugh. Their complaints tickled your sense of humor, even though you silently hoped not to get caught.

### Clandestine Smells

Only moments later, nature called, and you discreetly found a restroom. Once business was handled, you washed your hands and exited. Swiftly finding a shadowy corner to hide in, you couldn't help but notice the slightly luxurious, albeit garish, decor—a blend of lavish golds and deep reds.

"What died in here?" Every word from Angel Dust’s mouth dripped with sarcasm and annoyance.

"It’s worse than the time Niffty left a fish in the cupboard!" Vaggie’s voice cut through the atmosphere like a knife.

You felt a mix of guilt and amusement. The complaints were oddly comical despite the serious tone of the voices.

### The Discovery

Days turned into a week. You made a game of staying hidden, moving under the guise of shadows and elaborate furniture. But all good things come to an end.

It was KeeKee who spotted you first, her large eye blinking slowly before she let out a series of loud, excited meows that echoed through the hotel. You ran, but you knew it was too late.

Not long after, you were cornered in a grand hall by Alastor, Angel Dust, Husk, and Vaggie. The fiendish gleam in Alastor’s eyes sent chills down your spine.

"Well, well, what do we have here?" Alastor grinned, displaying sharp teeth. "A trespasser!"

"Who the fuck do you think you are, eating our food and stinking up our place?!" Angel Dust swore, his temper flaring.

"You picked the wrong hotel to sneak into, pal," Husk added, looking like he would rather be drowning in booze than dealing with you.

In a blink, Alastor’s dark magic surged towards you, wrapping you in a suffocating grip. Pain shot through you, and you were lifted off the floor before everything went black.

### The Aftermath

You woke up, bewildered, in a drastically different setting—Pentagram City. As you adjusted to your new form, the realization hit you like a freight train. You had become a sinner demon.

### A New Beginning

Despite the horrors, a glimmer of hope remained. Driven by the need for redemption and the dreams of a peaceful afterlife, you found your way back to the Hazbin Hotel.

Charlie Morningstar greeted you at the entrance, her eyes filled with an unyielding optimism. "Welcome to the Hazbin Hotel. It's never too late to seek redemption."

You hoped this would be a second chance, not just to survive, but to be better. The path wasn’t clear, but with time, maybe you'd find a way to earn your place in Heaven. Until then, you strove to live positively among the patrons of the Hazbin Hotel, seeking not just redemption, but perhaps, understanding.

This story was generated by user dylan7 with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.

Images were generated with OpenAI's AI system, DALL·E 2, or uploaded by the user.

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Prompt: Write a POV story of the human, who finds an Asmodean Crystal (which Blitzo (an imp from an adults cartoon/animated series Helluva Boss) accidentally dropped one of them during his mission with the other crewmembers of I.M.P. including Moxxie, Millie, and Loona) and decided, out of innocent curiosity, to test out the Asmodean Crystal to see what happens. The portal to Hell then opens to reveals the entrance to the Hazbin Hotel (from the namesake adults cartoon/animated series "Hazbin Hotel"), and the human (with no ill intent and with pure curiosity) enters the portal and into Hell before he/she goes through the hotel's entrance doors without the hotel's staff or guests/clients/patrons knowing. Here is what the hotel looks like; The Hazbin Hotel exterior is a tall, elaborate amalgamation of arched windows and turrets, one of which seems to be broken. It appears to be at least seven stories tall, with at least five of which being guest floors. Remnants of an airship, an ocean liner, a sailing ship and a carousel litter both sides and appear to have been incorporated into the structure of the building itself; there is also a train with some tracks looping the first and second floor exterior. Located on the top right of the building is a small radio broadcasting room, which is used as the work area for Alastor. Many signs are displayed outside the hotel: One atop the entrance reminiscent of the Hazbin Hotel logo, a large pink one atop the building with the hotel's name in lights, a neon 'HOTEL' sign at the bottom right and atop the building where Alastor's broadcast room is located, a small 'On-Air' sign is visible. Also located on the outer facade are various arrows pointing to the entrance and the broadcast room. The entrance has a tented cover with a booth in the center reminiscent of a circus or theater ticket booth. On either side of the booth are a set of double doors that have stained glass; in the pilot, they once depicted an apple on each one but were destroyed by an explosion due to Sir Pentious blowing up the doors with his airship (prior to Sir Pentious changing ways to become a nicer person before redeeming himself and becoming a saint angel (after his willing sacrifice against the series' main antagonist Adam (the exorcist angel) just before Adam is defeated by Lucifer Morningstar and killed by Niffty) in the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On"). The hotel's interior (prior to this story) was shown to be in a state of disrepair, with wooden boards covering shattered windows, signs warning of asbestos, bloodied tools left lying around, and paintings are shown hanging off the walls (however, just after the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On", these have been fixed after the hotel was rebuilt by Charlie's father Lucifer Morningstar). Much of the furniture in the lobby are strewn around haphazardly or remain boxed up in several large wooden crates. The bar uses skeletons, snakes, and bones as general themes, along with card suits and candles, and advertises itself as a casino. The area the bar in has glowing green wooden walls instead of the usual red wallpaper, with a "Jackpot" sign on the left wall and a Beelzejuice neon sign on the right wall. The word "concierge" can be presumed to be shown above the bar, and Alastor calls it the front desk when talking to Husk, suggesting that it is also the check-in counter. Despite the shabby and poor condition of the hotel, the overall theme of the building remains ornate and regal, with stained glass windows, lavish furniture, and generous usage of gold. Like the rest of Hell, the hotel has a largely red color scheme. There are many apple, snake and circus motifs throughout the hotel's interior, in reference to Charlie Morningstar's royal family, or more specifically, Lucifer Morningstar. Eyes are also a recurring theme throughout the building, appearing on the frame of almost every single painting and several vases and jars. The room the two women (Charlie Morningstar and Vaggie) share is rather large, with a regal look and a large bed, and has a window with a view of Pentagram City. Angel Dust's room has striped wallpaper, a vanity, mirrors, a place to put his wigs, and a bed with several pillows of various design, while beside it is a small bed for Fat Nuggets shaped like a pink heart with a small pillow on top, and with both beds on a single platform with neon lights. The wall behind the bed has photos of him, Cherri, and Fat Nuggets, as well as a couple of his film posters, while the bedside wall has neon lights shaped like webs. The door to his room has neon lights shaped like webs with hearts, and has three photos of him and his friends, and Fat Nuggets. Alastor's room has a mixture between both traditional décor and the fantastical, with one half being a classic "fancy study", complete with tasteful wallpaper and furnishings, the other half being a literal swamp conjured as a dining area. Sir Pentious' room (prior to Sir Pentious' death and sacrifice in the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On") shared his (Sir Pentious') airship's steampunk aesthetics of golden cogs and gears and a red and black color scheme, while his bed was a circular mattress lined with pillows; this room is now currently vacant due to Sir Pentious' invented sacrifice. After going through the hotel's doors, the human finds finds himself/herself in the hotel's lounge room before finding the food and drinks on the table and consumes some of them (he wrongly believes no one will mind this, wrongly believing that the food are for everyone to eat and drink), since he/she is both hungry and thirsty (because he/she has not eaten for a day, so he/she needs food and something to drink). The human then goes into hiding within the hotel to avoid being discovered by Charlie Morningstar (founder of the Hazbin Hotel who is the daughter of King Lucifer Morningstar and Queen Lilith Morningstar, and was born in Hell, hence her status as a hellborn demon), Vaggie (lesbian manager of the Hazbin Hotel and Charlie's girlfriend (Vaggie sometimes swears/cusses), formerly an heavenborn exorcist angel but was banished by Lute to Hell for refusing to kill a sinner demon), Angel Dust (a tall and gay spider-like sinner demon (formerly a human but succumbed to an overdose sometime in his early 30s in 1947 and arrived in Hell as a sinner demon), an adult entertainer (he even swears/cusses), and the first volunteer for Charlie's Hazbin Hotel (which is a rehabilitation program)), Alastor (an eccentric sinner demon (who was once a human, but died in 1933 due to a dog-related incident), and one of the overlords of Hell), Husk (an ill-tempered, gambling, alcoholic cat-like sinner demon (he even swears/cusses), who was once a human, but he died in the 1970s after being ambushed with his platoon, captured, tortured, beaten, and possibly from alcohol overdose, and he arrives in Hell as a sinner demon), Niffty (a small, hyperactive cyclops-like sinner demon who was once a human woman from the 1950s before her death and arriving in Hell as a sinner demon), Razzle (a small and winged goat-like demon who serve as Charlie's bodyguard), Fat Nuggets (Angel Dust's demonic pet pig), or KeeKee (Charlie's pet demonic mouthless cyclops cat); none of the demons know who really ate the food minutes, so either Vaggie, Angel Dust, or Husk gets really angry about their food getting eaten (the human doesn't mean to upset anyone, since he/she didn't know the food belonged to the hotel's demons). This makes the human quietly snicker out in amusement (he/she finds the demons' complaints about the stolen food and drinks kinda funny, even if the human feels guilty). The human then felt like he/she had to pee/poop, so he/she also uses one of the hotel's restrooms to get rid of his/her pee and poop, while he/she also does not get caught by the demons; the demons (mainly Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk, but Niffty also is grossed out by the smell) smell the nasty odor, which the human doesn't find too bad unlike the demons, and just like how these demons complained about their food and drinks being eaten earlier, these demons complain about that awful smell coming from the restroom (despite the human having already flushed the toilet, the smell still lingers, but the smell is not too terrible (and not that different from Earth and is identical to the smell back on Earth) to the human unlike to the demons, which to them smells very bad), while these demons do not know it was the human who made that smell. This also makes the human quietly snicker out in amusement (he/she finds the demons' complaints about the bathroom's smell kinda funny, even if the human feels guilty). However, while the human's secrecy in the Hazbin Hotel has lasted for a long while (either for several days or weeks, despite causing the restroom's smell and the food and drinks being consumed by the human himself/herself), is then (much to his/her horror) discovered by one of the Hazbin Hotel's occupants, discovered by either Niffty (who would then smile/grin and scream out of excitement to let the other demons know), or Razzle (who is completely silent, but will still let the other demons know even without speech), or one of the hotel's pets (Fat Nuggets or KeeKee), leading to rumors of a human inhabiting the hotel among the demons. Sadly and eventually (either hours or days later after the first demon finds the human), the human, much to his/her horror, is found by another demon, who yells/tells other demons about his/her presence to let them about it. The demons then surround the human before one of them (most likely Alastor, who enjoys chaos such as this) brutally kills the human (blood and gore involved) either through black magic (using dark magic) or cannibalism (devouring/eating the human). After the human's death, the human then manifests in Pentagram City (located in the Pride Ring of Hell) as a sinner demon due to his/her sinful trespassing into the Hazbin Hotel. Later, the sinner demon (formerly the human himself/herself) wants to be rehabilitated (in short, redeemed) so he/she could hopefully one day be accepted by Heaven and manifest in Heaven as a saint angel (which are unlike heavenborn angels, which were always born angels, the saint angels were once humans before they died), so the sinner demon (formerly the human himself/herself) enters the Hazbin Hotel and is welcomed by Charlie Morningstar, and the sinner demon (formerly the human himself/herself) starts trying to redeem himself/herself and socializes with the Hazbin Hotel's other clients/patrons in a healthy/positive and non-sinful manner, in hopes that one day he/she will be redeemed. There should also be quotes (including swear words such as, but not limited to f-bombs, coming from Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk) from the characters in this story so we know what they're saying and what they're thinking. Also, it is a POV reader story, so it should not be in an author's point of view (my, I, mine, etc), and it should be from the point of view of the human reader (you, your, etc).

Response: ### The Discarded Crystal Curiosity had always been your companion, so the sparkling object nestled in the grass had immediately caught your eye. You knelt and picked it up, the Asmodean Crystal sliding perfectly into your palm. It felt warm and alive, pulsating with mysterious energy. You couldn’t resist; you had to see what this crystal could do. ### A Portal to Hell The moment you channeled your curiosity into the crystal, a swirling rift tore open the air in front of you. You took a tentative step forward, almost hypnotized by the swirling vortex. And just like that, you were in front of a towering, gothic structure—the Hazbin Hotel. ### The Entrance to Mystery The hotel was both mesmerizing and intimidating. Turrets and arches mingled with debris from various mechanical structures—a carousel here, an airship there. Neon signs blinked around you, shouting 'HOTEL' and 'On-Air.' Before you knew it, you were stepping through the double doors and into a grand lounge room. ### Hunger and Thirst Inside, an elaborate feast was laid out on a table in the grand room, practically inviting you to partake. Your stomach growled in agreement, reminding you that you hadn’t eaten in a day. You poked around the lavish spread—decadent pastries, succulent meats, and exotic fruits. Thinking no one would mind, you took a bite... then another... and another. "Where the fuck is my food?!" a voice shouted from somewhere deeper in the hotel. You stifled a laugh. Their complaints tickled your sense of humor, even though you silently hoped not to get caught. ### Clandestine Smells Only moments later, nature called, and you discreetly found a restroom. Once business was handled, you washed your hands and exited. Swiftly finding a shadowy corner to hide in, you couldn't help but notice the slightly luxurious, albeit garish, decor—a blend of lavish golds and deep reds. "What died in here?" Every word from Angel Dust’s mouth dripped with sarcasm and annoyance. "It’s worse than the time Niffty left a fish in the cupboard!" Vaggie’s voice cut through the atmosphere like a knife. You felt a mix of guilt and amusement. The complaints were oddly comical despite the serious tone of the voices. ### The Discovery Days turned into a week. You made a game of staying hidden, moving under the guise of shadows and elaborate furniture. But all good things come to an end. It was KeeKee who spotted you first, her large eye blinking slowly before she let out a series of loud, excited meows that echoed through the hotel. You ran, but you knew it was too late. Not long after, you were cornered in a grand hall by Alastor, Angel Dust, Husk, and Vaggie. The fiendish gleam in Alastor’s eyes sent chills down your spine. "Well, well, what do we have here?" Alastor grinned, displaying sharp teeth. "A trespasser!" "Who the fuck do you think you are, eating our food and stinking up our place?!" Angel Dust swore, his temper flaring. "You picked the wrong hotel to sneak into, pal," Husk added, looking like he would rather be drowning in booze than dealing with you. In a blink, Alastor’s dark magic surged towards you, wrapping you in a suffocating grip. Pain shot through you, and you were lifted off the floor before everything went black. ### The Aftermath You woke up, bewildered, in a drastically different setting—Pentagram City. As you adjusted to your new form, the realization hit you like a freight train. You had become a sinner demon. ### A New Beginning Despite the horrors, a glimmer of hope remained. Driven by the need for redemption and the dreams of a peaceful afterlife, you found your way back to the Hazbin Hotel. Charlie Morningstar greeted you at the entrance, her eyes filled with an unyielding optimism. "Welcome to the Hazbin Hotel. It's never too late to seek redemption." You hoped this would be a second chance, not just to survive, but to be better. The path wasn’t clear, but with time, maybe you'd find a way to earn your place in Heaven. Until then, you strove to live positively among the patrons of the Hazbin Hotel, seeking not just redemption, but perhaps, understanding.

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