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Human Duo's Redemption Through the Asmodean Portal to Hazbin Hotel

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You and your sister Sarah huddle close together in the dimly lit attic of your grandmother's old house, where you've been spending the summer. The musty smell of dust and the faint beams of sunlight filtering through the small window make the air almost magical. Sarah's eyes gleam with curiosity as she opens an old, leather-bound chest, revealing an assortment of trinkets and oddities from various eras.

“Check this out,” she whispers, pulling out a multifaceted crystal that shimmers with an otherworldly light. “What do you think it is?”

You glance over, intrigued. “I don't know, but it looks important.”

As you both examine the crystal, an old inscription in a language neither of you recognize reveals itself. Below the script, a faintly glowing symbol begins to pulse rhythmically.

“I wonder what it does,” you muse.

“Only one way to find out,” Sarah says, with a mischievous grin.

Holding the crystal between you, you both feel a sudden rush of energy. The room distorts around you, colors bleeding and bending until everything snaps back into focus. You find yourself standing in front of a tall, bizarrely constructed building with arched windows, turrets, and what seemed to be remnants of various modes of transportation.

The sign above reads "Hazbin Hotel."

“Oh crap, where are we?” Sarah asks, wide-eyed.

“Looks like a hotel…” you say, just as bewildered. “But I don’t think we’re in Grandma’s attic anymore.”

Driven by curiosity and a faint gnawing of hunger in your stomachs, you and Sarah head through the hotel’s double doors, which surprisingly let you in without resistance.

Inside, the hotel is a peculiar mix of regal and rundown. Elaborate chandeliers and opulent furniture stand in stark contrast to the grime and cobwebs. There’s a table nearby, laden with food and drinks that appear untouched.

“We shouldn’t…” Sarah starts, but her voice trails off as your stomach growls.

“It looks like a buffet,” you reason. “I bet it's meant for everyone staying here. Besides, we're starving and who knows how long we're stuck here.”

Reluctantly, Sarah nods. You both quickly grab plates and start sampling the array of food. It isn't long before you feel a bit more like yourselves again.

You wipe your mouth with the back of your hand and glance around. “We should find somewhere to hide. Just in case.”

You and Sarah sneak through the corridors, finding a small storage room that seems as good a hiding spot as any. Hours pass, but you both manage to stay undetected. There’s a shared sense of amusement when you hear distant complaints from the hotel's occupants about missing food.

“What the hell happened to my damn sandwich?!” an unfamiliar voice booms through the halls.

“Language, dear.” Another, softer voice chides.

“Like I give a f-” The response is cut off abruptly, and you and Sarah snicker quietly.

The urge to use the restroom cannot be ignored for long, and during a rare quiet moment, you and Sarah make your way to the nearest one. The smell afterwards isn't pleasant, but you both manage to get in and out without being caught.

However, the smell drifts through the halls.

“Who took a crap and didn’t open a window?!” a frustrated voice yells. It’s followed by a cacophony of disgruntled complaints.

“Hell’s sake, smells like a fucking corpse,” another growls.

You and Sarah bite back laughter at how these demons, in hell, could be so put off by a natural bodily function.

Days pass in this manner, but one moment of letting your guard down proves too many. You hear a cheerful scream and find yourself face-to-face with a small cycloptic demon.

"Humans! Real humans!" she squeals in delight before dashing off. It's not long before the entire hotel knows.

A tall spider-like demon, Angel Dust, eyes you skeptically. "Well ain't this a motherfucking surprise. What are two fresh meats like you doing down here?"

You start to explain but are cut off by a more imposing, dapper demon, Alastor. He smiles, a sinister gleam in his eye. “What a delightful bit of chaos. However, we can't have word of our little establishment reaching the mortal realm. I'm afraid... this is where your story ends.”

Before you can react, dark magic surges through the room. Your body feels like it's being torn apart molecule by molecule. The last thing you hear is Sarah screaming.

When you come to, you're different. No longer human. You look at each other, horrified and changed.

"We became demons," Sarah whispers with a mix of horror and fascination.

“Yeah,” you say, still processing the transformation. The urge to be better, to undo your sin of trespassing propels you both back to the Hazbin Hotel.

Charlie Morningstar greets you warmly this time, unaware of your previous stable condition as humans. “Welcome. Looking to find redemption?”

You nod earnestly. “Yes, please.”

And so, your journey in Hell begins anew, not as curious trespassers, but as souls seeking redemption.

This story was generated by user MeganAndy with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.

Images were generated with OpenAI's AI system, DALL·E 2, or uploaded by the user.

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Prompt: Write the POV story of two humans (one who is the reader and the other who is his/her friend or sibling), who finds an Asmodean Crystal (which Blitzo (an imp from an adults cartoon/animated series Helluva Boss) accidentally dropped one of them during his mission with the other crewmembers of I.M.P. (Immediate Murder Professionals) including Moxxie, Millie, and Loona) and both humans decided, out of innocent curiosity (with no ill intent), to test out the Asmodean Crystal to see what happens. The portal to Hell then opens to reveals the entrance to the Hazbin Hotel (from the namesake adults cartoon/animated series "Hazbin Hotel"), and both humans (with no ill intent and with pure curiosity) enter the portal and into Hell before they both go through the hotel's entrance doors and enter inside the Hazbin Hotel without the hotel's staff or guests/clients/patrons knowing. Here is what the hotel looks like; The Hazbin Hotel exterior is a tall, elaborate amalgamation of arched windows and turrets, one of which seems to be broken. It appears to be at least seven stories tall, with at least five of which being guest floors. Remnants of an airship, an ocean liner, a sailing ship and a carousel litter both sides and appear to have been incorporated into the structure of the building itself; there is also a train with some tracks looping the first and second floor exterior. Located on the top right of the building is a small radio broadcasting room, which is used as the work area for Alastor. Many signs are displayed outside the hotel: One atop the entrance reminiscent of the Hazbin Hotel logo, a large pink one atop the building with the hotel's name in lights, a neon 'HOTEL' sign at the bottom right and atop the building where Alastor's broadcast room is located, a small 'On-Air' sign is visible. Also located on the outer facade are various arrows pointing to the entrance and the broadcast room. The entrance has a tented cover with a booth in the center reminiscent of a circus or theater ticket booth. On either side of the booth are a set of double doors that have stained glass; in the pilot, they once depicted an apple on each one but were destroyed by an explosion due to Sir Pentious blowing up the doors with his airship (prior to Sir Pentious changing ways to become a nicer person before redeeming himself and becoming a saint angel (after his willing sacrifice against the series' main antagonist Adam (the exorcist angel) just before Adam is defeated by Lucifer Morningstar and killed by Niffty) in the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On"). The hotel's interior (prior to this story) was shown to be in a state of disrepair, with wooden boards covering shattered windows, signs warning of asbestos, bloodied tools left lying around, and paintings are shown hanging off the walls (however, just after the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On", these have been fixed after the hotel was rebuilt by Charlie's father Lucifer Morningstar). Much of the furniture in the lobby are strewn around haphazardly or remain boxed up in several large wooden crates. The bar uses skeletons, snakes, and bones as general themes, along with card suits and candles, and advertises itself as a casino. The area the bar in has glowing green wooden walls instead of the usual red wallpaper, with a "Jackpot" sign on the left wall and a Beelzejuice neon sign on the right wall. The word "concierge" can be presumed to be shown above the bar, and Alastor calls it the front desk when talking to Husk, suggesting that it is also the check-in counter. Despite the shabby and poor condition of the hotel, the overall theme of the building remains ornate and regal, with stained glass windows, lavish furniture, and generous usage of gold. Like the rest of Hell, the hotel has a largely red color scheme. There are many apple, snake and circus motifs throughout the hotel's interior, in reference to Charlie Morningstar's royal family, or more specifically, Lucifer Morningstar. Eyes are also a recurring theme throughout the building, appearing on the frame of almost every single painting and several vases and jars. The room the two women (Charlie Morningstar and Vaggie) share is rather large, with a regal look and a large bed, and has a window with a view of Pentagram City. Angel Dust's room has striped wallpaper, a vanity, mirrors, a place to put his wigs, and a bed with several pillows of various design, while beside it is a small bed for Fat Nuggets shaped like a pink heart with a small pillow on top, and with both beds on a single platform with neon lights. The wall behind the bed has photos of him, Cherri, and Fat Nuggets, as well as a couple of his film posters, while the bedside wall has neon lights shaped like webs. The door to his room has neon lights shaped like webs with hearts, and has three photos of him and his friends, and Fat Nuggets. Alastor's room has a mixture between both traditional décor and the fantastical, with one half being a classic "fancy study", complete with tasteful wallpaper and furnishings, the other half being a literal swamp conjured as a dining area. Sir Pentious' room (prior to Sir Pentious' death and sacrifice in the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On") shared his (Sir Pentious') airship's steampunk aesthetics of golden cogs and gears and a red and black color scheme, while his bed was a circular mattress lined with pillows; this room is now currently vacant due to Sir Pentious' invented sacrifice. After going through the hotel's doors, both of the humans (the reader and his/her friend or sibling) find themselves in the hotel's lounge room before finding the food and drinks on the table and consumes some of the food (they both wrongly believes no one will mind this, wrongly believing that the food are for everyone to eat and drink, although the reader's friend/sibling is initially concerned about it being someone else's food before the reader tells his/her friend or sibling that this table may be a buffet table hence why there's so much food, so the reader's friend or sibling is no longer worried), since both of the humans are hungry and thirsty (because they have not eaten for a day, so they need food and something to drink). The human duo then go into hiding within the hotel to avoid being discovered by Charlie Morningstar (founder of the Hazbin Hotel who is the daughter of King Lucifer Morningstar and Queen Lilith Morningstar, and was born in Hell, hence her status as a hellborn demon), Vaggie (lesbian manager of the Hazbin Hotel and Charlie's girlfriend (Vaggie sometimes swears/cusses), formerly an heavenborn exorcist angel but was banished by Lute to Hell for refusing to kill a sinner demon), Angel Dust (a tall and gay spider-like sinner demon (formerly a human but succumbed to an overdose sometime in his early 30s in 1947 and arrived in Hell as a sinner demon), an adult entertainer (he even swears/cusses), and the first volunteer for Charlie's Hazbin Hotel (which is a rehabilitation program)), Alastor (an eccentric sinner demon (who was once a human, but died in 1933 due to a dog-related incident), and one of the overlords of Hell), Husk (an ill-tempered, gambling, alcoholic cat-like sinner demon (he even swears/cusses), who was once a human, but he died in the 1970s after being ambushed with his platoon, captured, tortured, beaten, and possibly from alcohol overdose, and he arrives in Hell as a sinner demon), Niffty (a small, hyperactive cyclops-like sinner demon who was once a human woman from the 1950s before her death and arriving in Hell as a sinner demon), Razzle (a small and winged goat-like demon who serve as Charlie's bodyguard), Fat Nuggets (Angel Dust's demonic pet pig), or KeeKee (Charlie's pet demonic mouthless cyclops cat); none of the demons know who really ate the food minutes, so either Vaggie, Angel Dust, or Husk gets really angry about their food getting eaten (the human doesn't mean to upset anyone, since he/she didn't know the food belonged to the hotel's demons). This makes both of the humans quietly snicker out in amusement (they both find the demons' complaints about the stolen food and drinks kinda funny, even if the human duo feel guilty). The human duo then feel like they have to pee/poop, so they both then use one of the hotel's restrooms to get rid of their pee and poop, while they also do not get caught by the demons; the demons (mainly Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk, but Niffty also is grossed out by the smell) smell the nasty odor, which the human duo don't find too bad unlike the demons, and just like how these demons complained about their food and drinks being eaten earlier, these demons complain about that awful smell coming from the restroom (despite the human duo having already flushed the toilet, the smell still lingers, but the smell is not too terrible (and not that different from Earth and is identical to the smell back on Earth) to the human duo unlike to the demons, which to the demons smells very bad), while these demons do not know it was the human duo who made that smell. This also makes both of the humans quietly snicker out in amusement (they find the demons' complaints about the bathroom's smell kinda funny, even if both the humans feel guilty). However, while both of the humans' secrecy in the Hazbin Hotel have lasted for a long while (either for several days or weeks, despite causing the restroom's smell and the food and drinks being consumed by both of the humans themselves), are then (much to their horror) discovered by one of the Hazbin Hotel's occupants, discovered by either Niffty (who would then smile/grin and scream out of excitement before running off to let the other demons know about the humans being in the hotel), or Razzle (who is completely silent, but will still let the other demons know even without speech), or one of the hotel's pets (Fat Nuggets or KeeKee), leading to rumors of the humans inhabiting the hotel among the demons. Sadly and eventually (either hours or days later after the first demon finds both of the humans), the humans, much to their horror, are found by another demon, who yells/tells other demons about their presence to let them about it. The demons then surround both of the humans (with Charlie Morningstar being confused while Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk being unhappy with the human duo eating their food and stinking up the restroom, whilst also just as confused about the humans being in Hell, just as all other demons being confused about the humans being in Hell, since no human has ever visited or lived in Hell) before one of the demons (most likely Alastor, who enjoys chaos such as this (plus, Alastor doesn't want the humans to spread tales of either Hazbin Hotel or all of Hell's existence)) brutally kills both of the humans (blood and gore involved) either through black magic (using dark magic) either that or through cannibalism (shredding the human duo's flesh with his teeth and devouring/eating the human duo). After both of the humans' death, the human duo then manifests in Pentagram City (located in the Pride Ring of Hell) as sinner demons (confirming that they had both died, hence why they are no longer mortal) due to their sinful trespassing into the Hazbin Hotel. Later, although both the sinner demon duo (formerly the human reader and his/her friend or sibling) no longer could come back home on Earth, they both want to be rehabilitated (in short, redeemed) so they both could hopefully one day be accepted by Heaven and manifest in Heaven as saint angels (which are unlike heavenborn angels, which were always born angels, since the saint angels were once humans before they died), so the sinner demon duo (formerly the human duo) enter the Hazbin Hotel (now with purpose) and are welcomed by Charlie Morningstar, and the sinner demon duo (formerly the human duo) start trying to redeem themselves and socialize with the Hazbin Hotel's other clients/patrons in a healthy/positive and non-sinful manner, in hopes that one day they will be redeemed and be accepted by Heaven so that they both will be converted into saint angels and they both will live forever in peace in the heavenly afterlife. There should also be quotes (including swear words such as, but not limited to f-bombs, coming from Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk) from the characters in this story so we know what they're saying and what they're thinking. Also, it is a POV reader story, so it should not be in an author's point of view (my, I, mine, etc), and it should be from the point of view of the human reader (you, your, etc).

Response: You and your sister Sarah huddle close together in the dimly lit attic of your grandmother's old house, where you've been spending the summer. The musty smell of dust and the faint beams of sunlight filtering through the small window make the air almost magical. Sarah's eyes gleam with curiosity as she opens an old, leather-bound chest, revealing an assortment of trinkets and oddities from various eras. “Check this out,” she whispers, pulling out a multifaceted crystal that shimmers with an otherworldly light. “What do you think it is?” You glance over, intrigued. “I don't know, but it looks important.” As you both examine the crystal, an old inscription in a language neither of you recognize reveals itself. Below the script, a faintly glowing symbol begins to pulse rhythmically. “I wonder what it does,” you muse. “Only one way to find out,” Sarah says, with a mischievous grin. Holding the crystal between you, you both feel a sudden rush of energy. The room distorts around you, colors bleeding and bending until everything snaps back into focus. You find yourself standing in front of a tall, bizarrely constructed building with arched windows, turrets, and what seemed to be remnants of various modes of transportation. The sign above reads "Hazbin Hotel." “Oh crap, where are we?” Sarah asks, wide-eyed. “Looks like a hotel…” you say, just as bewildered. “But I don’t think we’re in Grandma’s attic anymore.” Driven by curiosity and a faint gnawing of hunger in your stomachs, you and Sarah head through the hotel’s double doors, which surprisingly let you in without resistance. Inside, the hotel is a peculiar mix of regal and rundown. Elaborate chandeliers and opulent furniture stand in stark contrast to the grime and cobwebs. There’s a table nearby, laden with food and drinks that appear untouched. “We shouldn’t…” Sarah starts, but her voice trails off as your stomach growls. “It looks like a buffet,” you reason. “I bet it's meant for everyone staying here. Besides, we're starving and who knows how long we're stuck here.” Reluctantly, Sarah nods. You both quickly grab plates and start sampling the array of food. It isn't long before you feel a bit more like yourselves again. You wipe your mouth with the back of your hand and glance around. “We should find somewhere to hide. Just in case.” You and Sarah sneak through the corridors, finding a small storage room that seems as good a hiding spot as any. Hours pass, but you both manage to stay undetected. There’s a shared sense of amusement when you hear distant complaints from the hotel's occupants about missing food. “What the hell happened to my damn sandwich?!” an unfamiliar voice booms through the halls. “Language, dear.” Another, softer voice chides. “Like I give a f-” The response is cut off abruptly, and you and Sarah snicker quietly. The urge to use the restroom cannot be ignored for long, and during a rare quiet moment, you and Sarah make your way to the nearest one. The smell afterwards isn't pleasant, but you both manage to get in and out without being caught. However, the smell drifts through the halls. “Who took a crap and didn’t open a window?!” a frustrated voice yells. It’s followed by a cacophony of disgruntled complaints. “Hell’s sake, smells like a fucking corpse,” another growls. You and Sarah bite back laughter at how these demons, in hell, could be so put off by a natural bodily function. Days pass in this manner, but one moment of letting your guard down proves too many. You hear a cheerful scream and find yourself face-to-face with a small cycloptic demon. "Humans! Real humans!" she squeals in delight before dashing off. It's not long before the entire hotel knows. A tall spider-like demon, Angel Dust, eyes you skeptically. "Well ain't this a motherfucking surprise. What are two fresh meats like you doing down here?" You start to explain but are cut off by a more imposing, dapper demon, Alastor. He smiles, a sinister gleam in his eye. “What a delightful bit of chaos. However, we can't have word of our little establishment reaching the mortal realm. I'm afraid... this is where your story ends.” Before you can react, dark magic surges through the room. Your body feels like it's being torn apart molecule by molecule. The last thing you hear is Sarah screaming. When you come to, you're different. No longer human. You look at each other, horrified and changed. "We became demons," Sarah whispers with a mix of horror and fascination. “Yeah,” you say, still processing the transformation. The urge to be better, to undo your sin of trespassing propels you both back to the Hazbin Hotel. Charlie Morningstar greets you warmly this time, unaware of your previous stable condition as humans. “Welcome. Looking to find redemption?” You nod earnestly. “Yes, please.” And so, your journey in Hell begins anew, not as curious trespassers, but as souls seeking redemption.

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