Redemption's Portal: Human's Journey Through Hazbin Hotel's Hell
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You're walking through the forest at dusk, the wooden path beneath your feet crackling with every step. It's eerily quiet, and your curiosity gets the better of you as you kneel to examine a glimmering rock, no bigger than a marble. As you touch it, it pulses, and you jolt back, watching in astonishment as a portal swirls open before your eyes.
"Holy... what on Earth?" you murmur, staring into the unknown realm beyond. You take a hesitant step forward, curiosity winning over caution.
The portal pulls you in, and you stumble onto the cobblestone pavement of a dark, gothic street. Signboards in glaring neon light spell out "Hazbin Hotel." You stand there, wide-eyed and fascinated. What kind of place is this?
You decide to enter the hotel's grand doors, sneaking past the lobby, careful not to be seen. The interior is extravagant but has an air of eerie charm. You soon find yourself in the lounge, and the scent of food catches your attention. You see an assortment of dishes and drinks laid out and realize your stomach is growling loudly.
You grab some food, mumbling to yourself, "Just a quick bite. I'm sure they won't mind." You devour a sandwich and down some juice, sighing with relief as hunger subsides. But the realization strikes you—you're hiding in a peculiar hotel in what appears to be Hell!
You find a quiet closet to hide in, your heart thumping wildly. As time passes, you stay hidden, trying to figure an escape plan. Hours or maybe days blur into each other. You hear voices outside but remain concealed.
But soon, peering out once more, you see a tiny figure—a one-eyed girl cleaning the hallway, humming energetically. Niffty spots you.
"Hey! Who are you? You shouldn't be here!" she gasps, dropping her broom.
Panic engulfs you as she scurries off, yelling, "Everyone, there's a human! We've got a trespasser!"
The hotel erupts into chaos. Demons rush into the lounge, their eyes zeroing in on you.
"Well, well, what do we have here?" Alastor, a tall figure in a red suit, grins, his eyes glowing with malevolent amusement.
You gulp, trying to explain, "I-I didn't mean any harm. I just found a—"
"Silence!" Alastor's voice booms, his grin widening wickedly. "You must pay for your trespassing!"
Before you can plead, Alastor lunges at you. You feel an excruciating pain as everything fades into darkness.
When you awaken, you find yourself in a grotesque version of yourself, with horns and claws—manifested as a sinner demon in Pentagram City. Horror and despair overwhelm you.
"This is all my fault," you utter, feeling the weight of your actions. Determined, you head back to the Hazbin Hotel. You push through the doors, and Charlie Morningstar approaches, her warm smile offering a glimmer of hope.
"Hello, and welcome," Charlie says cheerfully. "I'm Charlie. Our aim is to help demons redeem themselves. I'm glad to help you."
You nod, filled with newfound resolve. "I'll do anything to earn redemption," you say sincerely.
Charlie puts a reassuring hand on your shoulder. "We all start somewhere. Follow me, and let’s begin the process of your redemption together.”
Throughout your stay at Hazbin Hotel, you interact with the staff and other patrons, learning to suppress sinful habits, and replace them with positivity and self-improvement. Despite the numerous challenges, you remain steadfast in your goal, hoping for acceptance by Heaven one day.
This story was generated by user JesterImps2 with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.
Images were generated with OpenAI's AI system, DALL·E 2, or uploaded by the user.
AI Prompts
Prompt: Write a POV story of a human, who finds the Asmodean Crystal (which Blitzo (an imp from an adults cartoon/animated series Helluva Boss) accidentally dropped one of them during his mission with the other crewmembers of I.M.P. including Moxxie, Millie, and Loona) and decided, out of innocent curiosity, to test out the Asmodean Crystal to see what happens. The portal to Hell then opens to reveals the entrance to the Hazbin Hotel (from the namesake adults cartoon/animated series "Hazbin Hotel"), and the human (with no ill intent and with pure curiosity) enters the portal and into Hell before he/she goes through the hotel's entrance doors without the hotel's staff or guests/clients/patrons knowing. The human finds food and drinks in the hotel's lounge room and consumes some of them, since he/she is both hungry and thirsty (he/she needs food and something to drink), before he/she goes into hiding within the hotel to avoid being discovered by Charlie Morningstar (founder of the Hazbin Hotel who is the daughter of King Lucifer Morningstar and Queen Lilith Morningstar, and was born in Hell, hence her status as a hellborn demon), Vaggie (lesbian manager of the Hazbin Hotel and Charlie's girlfriend (Vaggie sometimes swears/cusses), formerly an heavenborn exorcist angel but was banished by Lute to Hell for refusing to kill a sinner demon), Angel Dust (a tall and gay spider-like sinner demon (formerly a human but succumbed to an overdose sometime in his early 30s in 1947 and arrived in Hell as a sinner demon), an adult entertainer (he even swears/cusses), and the first volunteer for Charlie's Hazbin Hotel (which is a rehabilitation program)), Alastor (an eccentric sinner demon (who was once a human, but died in 1933 due to a dog-related incident), and one of the overlords of Hell), Husk (an ill-tempered, gambling, alcoholic cat-like sinner demon (he even swears/cusses), who was once a human, but he died in the 1970s after being ambushed with his platoon, captured, tortured, beaten, and possibly from alcohol overdose, and he arrives in Hell as a sinner demon), Niffty (a small, hyperactive cyclops-like sinner demon who was once a human woman from the 1950s before her death and arriving in Hell as a sinner demon), Razzle (a small and winged goat-like demon who serve as Charlie's bodyguard), Fat Nuggets (Angel Dust's demonic pet pig), or KeeKee (Charlie's pet demonic mouthless cyclops cat); none of the demons know who ate the food minutes or hours ago, so either Vaggie, Angel Dust, or Husk gets mad about their food getting eaten (the human doesn't mean to upset anyone, since he/she didn't know the food belonged to the hotel's demons). However, while the human's secrecy in the Hazbin Hotel had lasted for a long while, is then discovered by one of the Hazbin Hotel's occupants, discovered by either Niffty, Razzle, or one of the hotel's pets (Fat Nuggets or KeeKee), leading to rumors of a human inhabiting the hotel among the demons. Sadly and eventually (either hours or days later), the human, much to his/her horror, is found by another demon, who yells/tells other demons about his presence to let them about it. The demons then surround the human before one of them (most likely Alastor) brutally kills the human (blood and gore involved), leading to the human manifesting in Pentagram City (located in the Pride Ring of Hell) as a sinner demon due to his/her sinful trespassing into the Hazbin Hotel. Later, the sinner demon (formerly the human himself/herself) wants to be rehabilitated (in short, redeemed) so he/she could hopefully one day be accepted by Heaven and manifest in Heaven as a saint angel (which are unlike heavenborn angels, which were always born angels, the saint angels were once humans before they died), so the sinner demon (formerly the human himself/herself) enters the Hazbin Hotel and is welcomed by Charlie Morningstar, and the sinner demon (formerly the human himself/herself) starts trying to redeem himself/herself and socializes with the Hazbin Hotel's other clients/patrons in a healthy/positive and non-sinful manner, in hopes that one day he/she will be redeemed. There should also be quotes from the characters in this story so we know what they're saying and what they're thinking. Also, it is a POV reader story, so it should not be in an author's point of view (my, I, mine, etc), and it should be from the point of view of the human reader (you, your, etc).
Response: You're walking through the forest at dusk, the wooden path beneath your feet crackling with every step. It's eerily quiet, and your curiosity gets the better of you as you kneel to examine a glimmering rock, no bigger than a marble. As you touch it, it pulses, and you jolt back, watching in astonishment as a portal swirls open before your eyes. "Holy... what on Earth?" you murmur, staring into the unknown realm beyond. You take a hesitant step forward, curiosity winning over caution. The portal pulls you in, and you stumble onto the cobblestone pavement of a dark, gothic street. Signboards in glaring neon light spell out "Hazbin Hotel." You stand there, wide-eyed and fascinated. What kind of place is this? You decide to enter the hotel's grand doors, sneaking past the lobby, careful not to be seen. The interior is extravagant but has an air of eerie charm. You soon find yourself in the lounge, and the scent of food catches your attention. You see an assortment of dishes and drinks laid out and realize your stomach is growling loudly. You grab some food, mumbling to yourself, "Just a quick bite. I'm sure they won't mind." You devour a sandwich and down some juice, sighing with relief as hunger subsides. But the realization strikes you—you're hiding in a peculiar hotel in what appears to be Hell! You find a quiet closet to hide in, your heart thumping wildly. As time passes, you stay hidden, trying to figure an escape plan. Hours or maybe days blur into each other. You hear voices outside but remain concealed. But soon, peering out once more, you see a tiny figure—a one-eyed girl cleaning the hallway, humming energetically. Niffty spots you. "Hey! Who are you? You shouldn't be here!" she gasps, dropping her broom. Panic engulfs you as she scurries off, yelling, "Everyone, there's a human! We've got a trespasser!" The hotel erupts into chaos. Demons rush into the lounge, their eyes zeroing in on you. "Well, well, what do we have here?" Alastor, a tall figure in a red suit, grins, his eyes glowing with malevolent amusement. You gulp, trying to explain, "I-I didn't mean any harm. I just found a—" "Silence!" Alastor's voice booms, his grin widening wickedly. "You must pay for your trespassing!" Before you can plead, Alastor lunges at you. You feel an excruciating pain as everything fades into darkness. When you awaken, you find yourself in a grotesque version of yourself, with horns and claws—manifested as a sinner demon in Pentagram City. Horror and despair overwhelm you. "This is all my fault," you utter, feeling the weight of your actions. Determined, you head back to the Hazbin Hotel. You push through the doors, and Charlie Morningstar approaches, her warm smile offering a glimmer of hope. "Hello, and welcome," Charlie says cheerfully. "I'm Charlie. Our aim is to help demons redeem themselves. I'm glad to help you." You nod, filled with newfound resolve. "I'll do anything to earn redemption," you say sincerely. Charlie puts a reassuring hand on your shoulder. "We all start somewhere. Follow me, and let’s begin the process of your redemption together.” Throughout your stay at Hazbin Hotel, you interact with the staff and other patrons, learning to suppress sinful habits, and replace them with positivity and self-improvement. Despite the numerous challenges, you remain steadfast in your goal, hoping for acceptance by Heaven one day.
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