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Portals of Redemption: Human Duo's Journey Through Hazbin Hotel

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You and your best friend, Jonathan, were stumbling through the old forest at dusk, trying to find your way back to the main road when you noticed something sparkling amidst the underbrush. Curious, you knelt and parted the leaves to reveal an Asmodean Crystal, glinting with an otherworldly light.

“Whoa, what's that?” Jonathan asked, bending over beside you to get a closer look.

“No idea,” you replied, reaching out to touch it. The cool surface of the crystal seemed to pulse beneath your fingertips. “Let’s take it back and figure out what it is.”

Minutes later, back at your apartment, you both sat at the kitchen table with the crystal placed carefully on a napkin. Jonathan opened his laptop and began searching for images that might match.

“Hey, look at this,” he said, swivelling the screen to show you. “It’s an Asmodean Crystal. Apparently, they’re used to open portals.”

You raised a skeptical eyebrow. “Portals to where?”

“Hell, it seems,” Jonathan answered, eyes wide with excitement.

“Well, there’s only one way to find out,” you said, grinning. “Let’s give it a shot.”

With no ill intent and pure innocent curiosity, you held the crystal between your palms and whispered the words Jonathan had found online. A swirling vortex of fiery light erupted in front of you. You stared at it, then at Jonathan, whose mouth hung open in shock.

“Should we?” you asked, heart pounding.

“Might as well,” Jonathan replied, trying to sound nonchalant but failing miserably.

The portal pulled at you, and before long you found yourselves tumbling through. You landed in front of a seven-story tall, elaborate building with a neon sign that read “Hazbin Hotel.”

“Oh my God, is this…?” Jonathan began.

"I think it is," you answered, thrilled and slightly apprehensive. You glanced around and noted airship remnants, train tracks, and a circus tent-like entrance. “This place is wild.”

The two of you walked up to the double stained glass doors and pushed them open, stepping into another world entirely.

The hotel’s interior was a bizarre mix of regal grandeur and almost grotesque decay. Cracked paintings, lavish furniture, and stained glass windows filled the space. There was an odd sense of opulence fighting against a backdrop of utter ruin.

“This is creepy,” Jonathan whispered, looking around the lounge room where you both found an assortment of food laid out on the table—a bizarre buffet that featured skeleton-themed decor.

“You think this is for anyone?” you asked, already picking up a sandwich.

“Not sure, but I’m starving,” Jonathan replied. He hesitated, then grabbed a piece of fruit. “Let’s just eat quickly.”

After gorging yourselves on demonic delights, you found a corner to hide in, snickering at the absurdity of the situation. Your laughter was short-lived when you overheard a loud, angry voice.

“Who the fuck ate my food?!” Vaggie’s sharp voice cut through the lobby.

“Calm your tits, Vaggie,” Angel Dust chimed in. “I thought it was for everyone.”

“No, it fucking wasn’t!” Husk snarled, his voice quickly followed by the sound of him chugging a drink.

You and Jonathan couldn’t help but quietly snicker again, even though you felt pangs of guilt.

Your amusement was replaced by urgency as you both suddenly needed to use the restroom—a necessity after all the food and drink. The two of you hurried to one of the hotel’s restrooms, and while inside, you still managed not to get caught.

“Ugh, who died in here?” Angel Dust’s voice wafted in from the hallway, making Jonathan stifle a laugh.

“That smell is fucking gross,” Vaggie agreed, making exaggerated gagging noises.

Again, you couldn’t help but feel amused by their reactions, even if it was wrong.

Days turned into weeks as you and Jonathan managed to stay hidden, but you knew it couldn’t last forever. One day, as you both hid behind a large curtain, Niffty came bouncing into the room.

“Oh, new friends! New friends!” she squealed, her eye lighting up at the sight of you and Jonathan. She darted away before either of you could react.

“Crap, we’ve been spotted,” Jonathan muttered.

Soon after, a loud, echoing voice called out. “Intruders! We’ve got ourselves some human intruders!” Alastor’s laugh was dark and chilling.

Before you knew it, the hotel’s occupants surrounded you. Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk looked particularly unhappy.

“What the fuck are humans doing in Hell?” Vaggie snarled, eyes glaring daggers at you.

“We were just... curious,” you stuttered, terrified.

“What gives you the right to eat our food and stink up our restroom?” Husk demanded, his claws twitching in irritation.

Charlie stepped forward with a confused expression. “How did you even get here?”

Alastor’s manic grin widened as he stepped closer. “This is going to be fun,” he chuckled darkly, raising a hand swirling with dark magic.

The last thing you saw was his face, filled with cruel joy, as you and Jonathan screamed in anguish. Blood and gore darkened your vision, and you felt every agonizing second of your death.

When you awoke, everything was different. Your hands looked demonic, and you felt… different. Looking around, you found yourselves in Pentagram City, now as sinner demons.

“We’re... dead,” Jonathan murmured.

“And in Hell,” you finished. The reality hit hard but ignited a new determination.

“We need to get redeemed,” you said firmly. “It’s the only way we can make it to Heaven.”

Returning to the Hazbin Hotel, you approached Charlie Morningstar with renewed purpose.

“We want to be rehabilitated,” you told her.

Charlie’s face lit up with a warm, welcoming smile. “Welcome to the Hazbin Hotel,” she greeted you. “I’m Charlie, and I’m here to help.”

Thus began your journey, trying desperately to redeem yourselves, engaging positively with other patrons. Despite the surreal circumstances, you hoped that someday, you'd find your place in Heaven.

This story was generated by user Fizzarolli-Attack-3 with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.

Images were generated with OpenAI's AI system, DALL·E 2, or uploaded by the user.

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Prompt: Write the POV story of two humans (one who is the reader and the other who is his/her friend or sibling), who finds an Asmodean Crystal (which Blitzo (an imp from an adults cartoon/animated series Helluva Boss) accidentally dropped one of them during his mission with the other crewmembers of I.M.P. (Immediate Murder Professionals) including Moxxie, Millie, and Loona) and both humans decided, out of innocent curiosity (with no ill intent), to test out the Asmodean Crystal to see what happens. The portal to Hell then opens to reveals the entrance to the Hazbin Hotel (from the namesake adults cartoon/animated series "Hazbin Hotel"), and both humans (with no ill intent and with pure curiosity) enter the portal and into Hell before they both go through the hotel's entrance doors and enter inside the Hazbin Hotel without the hotel's staff or guests/clients/patrons knowing. Here is what the hotel looks like; The Hazbin Hotel exterior is a tall, elaborate amalgamation of arched windows and turrets, one of which seems to be broken. It appears to be at least seven stories tall, with at least five of which being guest floors. Remnants of an airship, an ocean liner, a sailing ship and a carousel litter both sides and appear to have been incorporated into the structure of the building itself; there is also a train with some tracks looping the first and second floor exterior. Located on the top right of the building is a small radio broadcasting room, which is used as the work area for Alastor. Many signs are displayed outside the hotel: One atop the entrance reminiscent of the Hazbin Hotel logo, a large pink one atop the building with the hotel's name in lights, a neon 'HOTEL' sign at the bottom right and atop the building where Alastor's broadcast room is located, a small 'On-Air' sign is visible. Also located on the outer facade are various arrows pointing to the entrance and the broadcast room. The entrance has a tented cover with a booth in the center reminiscent of a circus or theater ticket booth. On either side of the booth are a set of double doors that have stained glass; in the pilot, they once depicted an apple on each one but were destroyed by an explosion due to Sir Pentious blowing up the doors with his airship (prior to Sir Pentious changing ways to become a nicer person before redeeming himself and becoming a saint angel (after his willing sacrifice against the series' main antagonist Adam (the exorcist angel) just before Adam is defeated by Lucifer Morningstar and killed by Niffty) in the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On"). The hotel's interior (prior to this story) was shown to be in a state of disrepair, with wooden boards covering shattered windows, signs warning of asbestos, bloodied tools left lying around, and paintings are shown hanging off the walls (however, just after the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On", these have been fixed after the hotel was rebuilt by Charlie's father Lucifer Morningstar). Much of the furniture in the lobby are strewn around haphazardly or remain boxed up in several large wooden crates. The bar uses skeletons, snakes, and bones as general themes, along with card suits and candles, and advertises itself as a casino. The area the bar in has glowing green wooden walls instead of the usual red wallpaper, with a "Jackpot" sign on the left wall and a Beelzejuice neon sign on the right wall. The word "concierge" can be presumed to be shown above the bar, and Alastor calls it the front desk when talking to Husk, suggesting that it is also the check-in counter. Despite the shabby and poor condition of the hotel, the overall theme of the building remains ornate and regal, with stained glass windows, lavish furniture, and generous usage of gold. Like the rest of Hell, the hotel has a largely red color scheme. There are many apple, snake and circus motifs throughout the hotel's interior, in reference to Charlie Morningstar's royal family, or more specifically, Lucifer Morningstar. Eyes are also a recurring theme throughout the building, appearing on the frame of almost every single painting and several vases and jars. The room the two women (Charlie Morningstar and Vaggie) share is rather large, with a regal look and a large bed, and has a window with a view of Pentagram City. Angel Dust's room has striped wallpaper, a vanity, mirrors, a place to put his wigs, and a bed with several pillows of various design, while beside it is a small bed for Fat Nuggets shaped like a pink heart with a small pillow on top, and with both beds on a single platform with neon lights. The wall behind the bed has photos of him, Cherri, and Fat Nuggets, as well as a couple of his film posters, while the bedside wall has neon lights shaped like webs. The door to his room has neon lights shaped like webs with hearts, and has three photos of him and his friends, and Fat Nuggets. Alastor's room has a mixture between both traditional décor and the fantastical, with one half being a classic "fancy study", complete with tasteful wallpaper and furnishings, the other half being a literal swamp conjured as a dining area. Sir Pentious' room (prior to Sir Pentious' death and sacrifice in the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On") shared his (Sir Pentious') airship's steampunk aesthetics of golden cogs and gears and a red and black color scheme, while his bed was a circular mattress lined with pillows; this room is now currently vacant due to Sir Pentious' invented sacrifice. After going through the hotel's doors, both of the humans (the reader and his/her friend or sibling) find themselves in the hotel's lounge room before finding the food and drinks on the table and consumes some of the food (they both wrongly believes no one will mind this, wrongly believing that the food are for everyone to eat and drink, although the reader's friend/sibling is initially concerned about it being someone else's food before the reader tells his/her friend or sibling that this table may be a buffet table hence why there's so much food, so the reader's friend or sibling is no longer worried), since both of the humans are hungry and thirsty (because they have not eaten for a day, so they need food and something to drink). The human duo then go into hiding within the hotel to avoid being discovered by Charlie Morningstar (founder of the Hazbin Hotel who is the daughter of King Lucifer Morningstar and Queen Lilith Morningstar, and was born in Hell, hence her status as a hellborn demon), Vaggie (lesbian manager of the Hazbin Hotel and Charlie's girlfriend (Vaggie sometimes swears/cusses), formerly an heavenborn exorcist angel but was banished by Lute to Hell for refusing to kill a sinner demon), Angel Dust (a tall and gay spider-like sinner demon (formerly a human but succumbed to an overdose sometime in his early 30s in 1947 and arrived in Hell as a sinner demon), an adult entertainer (he even swears/cusses), and the first volunteer for Charlie's Hazbin Hotel (which is a rehabilitation program)), Alastor (an eccentric sinner demon (who was once a human, but died in 1933 due to a dog-related incident), and one of the overlords of Hell), Husk (an ill-tempered, gambling, alcoholic cat-like sinner demon (he even swears/cusses), who was once a human, but he died in the 1970s after being ambushed with his platoon, captured, tortured, beaten, and possibly from alcohol overdose, and he arrives in Hell as a sinner demon), Niffty (a small, hyperactive cyclops-like sinner demon who was once a human woman from the 1950s before her death and arriving in Hell as a sinner demon), Razzle (a small and winged goat-like demon who serve as Charlie's bodyguard), Fat Nuggets (Angel Dust's demonic pet pig), or KeeKee (Charlie's pet demonic mouthless cyclops cat); none of the demons know who really ate the food minutes, so either Vaggie, Angel Dust, or Husk gets really angry about their food getting eaten (the human doesn't mean to upset anyone, since he/she didn't know the food belonged to the hotel's demons). This makes both of the humans quietly snicker out in amusement (they both find the demons' complaints about the stolen food and drinks kinda funny, even if the human duo feel guilty). The human duo then feel like they have to pee/poop, so they both then use one of the hotel's restrooms to get rid of their pee and poop, while they also do not get caught by the demons; the demons (mainly Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk, but Niffty also is grossed out by the smell) smell the nasty odor, which the human duo don't find too bad unlike the demons, and just like how these demons complained about their food and drinks being eaten earlier, these demons complain about that awful smell coming from the restroom (despite the human duo having already flushed the toilet, the smell still lingers, but the smell is not too terrible (and not that different from Earth and is identical to the smell back on Earth) to the human duo unlike to the demons, which to the demons smells very bad), while these demons do not know it was the human duo who made that smell. This also makes both of the humans quietly snicker out in amusement (they find the demons' complaints about the bathroom's smell kinda funny, even if both the humans feel guilty). However, while both of the humans' secrecy in the Hazbin Hotel have lasted for a long while (either for several days or weeks, despite causing the restroom's smell and the food and drinks being consumed by both of the humans themselves), are then (much to their horror) discovered by one of the Hazbin Hotel's occupants, discovered by either Niffty (who would then smile/grin and scream out of excitement before running off to let the other demons know about the humans being in the hotel), or Razzle (who is completely silent, but will still let the other demons know even without speech), or one of the hotel's pets (Fat Nuggets or KeeKee), leading to rumors of the humans inhabiting the hotel among the demons. Sadly and eventually (either hours or days later after the first demon finds both of the humans), the humans, much to their horror, are found by another demon, who yells/tells other demons about their presence to let them about it. The demons then surround both of the humans (with Charlie Morningstar being confused while Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk being unhappy with the human duo eating their food and stinking up the restroom, whilst also just as confused about the humans being in Hell, just as all other demons being confused about the humans being in Hell, since no human has ever visited or lived in Hell) before one of the demons (most likely Alastor, who enjoys chaos such as this) brutally kills both of the humans (blood and gore involved) either through black magic (using dark magic) or cannibalism (shredding the human duo with his teeth and devouring/eating the human duo). After both of the humans' death, the human duo then manifests in Pentagram City (located in the Pride Ring of Hell) as sinner demons (confirming that they had both died, hence why they are no longer mortal) due to their sinful trespassing into the Hazbin Hotel. Later, both the sinner demon duo (formerly the human reader and his/her friend or sibling) want to be rehabilitated (in short, redeemed) so they both could hopefully one day be accepted by Heaven and manifest in Heaven as saint angels (which are unlike heavenborn angels, which were always born angels, since the saint angels were once humans before they died), so the sinner demon duo (formerly the human duo) enter the Hazbin Hotel (now with purpose) and are welcomed by Charlie Morningstar, and the sinner demon duo (formerly the human duo) start trying to redeem themselves and socialize with the Hazbin Hotel's other clients/patrons in a healthy/positive and non-sinful manner, in hopes that one day they will be redeemed. There should also be quotes (including swear words such as, but not limited to f-bombs, coming from Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk) from the characters in this story so we know what they're saying and what they're thinking. Also, it is a POV reader story, so it should not be in an author's point of view (my, I, mine, etc), and it should be from the point of view of the human reader (you, your, etc).

Response: You and your best friend, Jonathan, were stumbling through the old forest at dusk, trying to find your way back to the main road when you noticed something sparkling amidst the underbrush. Curious, you knelt and parted the leaves to reveal an Asmodean Crystal, glinting with an otherworldly light. “Whoa, what's that?” Jonathan asked, bending over beside you to get a closer look. “No idea,” you replied, reaching out to touch it. The cool surface of the crystal seemed to pulse beneath your fingertips. “Let’s take it back and figure out what it is.” Minutes later, back at your apartment, you both sat at the kitchen table with the crystal placed carefully on a napkin. Jonathan opened his laptop and began searching for images that might match. “Hey, look at this,” he said, swivelling the screen to show you. “It’s an Asmodean Crystal. Apparently, they’re used to open portals.” You raised a skeptical eyebrow. “Portals to where?” “Hell, it seems,” Jonathan answered, eyes wide with excitement. “Well, there’s only one way to find out,” you said, grinning. “Let’s give it a shot.” With no ill intent and pure innocent curiosity, you held the crystal between your palms and whispered the words Jonathan had found online. A swirling vortex of fiery light erupted in front of you. You stared at it, then at Jonathan, whose mouth hung open in shock. “Should we?” you asked, heart pounding. “Might as well,” Jonathan replied, trying to sound nonchalant but failing miserably. The portal pulled at you, and before long you found yourselves tumbling through. You landed in front of a seven-story tall, elaborate building with a neon sign that read “Hazbin Hotel.” “Oh my God, is this…?” Jonathan began. "I think it is," you answered, thrilled and slightly apprehensive. You glanced around and noted airship remnants, train tracks, and a circus tent-like entrance. “This place is wild.” The two of you walked up to the double stained glass doors and pushed them open, stepping into another world entirely. The hotel’s interior was a bizarre mix of regal grandeur and almost grotesque decay. Cracked paintings, lavish furniture, and stained glass windows filled the space. There was an odd sense of opulence fighting against a backdrop of utter ruin. “This is creepy,” Jonathan whispered, looking around the lounge room where you both found an assortment of food laid out on the table—a bizarre buffet that featured skeleton-themed decor. “You think this is for anyone?” you asked, already picking up a sandwich. “Not sure, but I’m starving,” Jonathan replied. He hesitated, then grabbed a piece of fruit. “Let’s just eat quickly.” After gorging yourselves on demonic delights, you found a corner to hide in, snickering at the absurdity of the situation. Your laughter was short-lived when you overheard a loud, angry voice. “Who the fuck ate my food?!” Vaggie’s sharp voice cut through the lobby. “Calm your tits, Vaggie,” Angel Dust chimed in. “I thought it was for everyone.” “No, it fucking wasn’t!” Husk snarled, his voice quickly followed by the sound of him chugging a drink. You and Jonathan couldn’t help but quietly snicker again, even though you felt pangs of guilt. Your amusement was replaced by urgency as you both suddenly needed to use the restroom—a necessity after all the food and drink. The two of you hurried to one of the hotel’s restrooms, and while inside, you still managed not to get caught. “Ugh, who died in here?” Angel Dust’s voice wafted in from the hallway, making Jonathan stifle a laugh. “That smell is fucking gross,” Vaggie agreed, making exaggerated gagging noises. Again, you couldn’t help but feel amused by their reactions, even if it was wrong. Days turned into weeks as you and Jonathan managed to stay hidden, but you knew it couldn’t last forever. One day, as you both hid behind a large curtain, Niffty came bouncing into the room. “Oh, new friends! New friends!” she squealed, her eye lighting up at the sight of you and Jonathan. She darted away before either of you could react. “Crap, we’ve been spotted,” Jonathan muttered. Soon after, a loud, echoing voice called out. “Intruders! We’ve got ourselves some human intruders!” Alastor’s laugh was dark and chilling. Before you knew it, the hotel’s occupants surrounded you. Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk looked particularly unhappy. “What the fuck are humans doing in Hell?” Vaggie snarled, eyes glaring daggers at you. “We were just... curious,” you stuttered, terrified. “What gives you the right to eat our food and stink up our restroom?” Husk demanded, his claws twitching in irritation. Charlie stepped forward with a confused expression. “How did you even get here?” Alastor’s manic grin widened as he stepped closer. “This is going to be fun,” he chuckled darkly, raising a hand swirling with dark magic. The last thing you saw was his face, filled with cruel joy, as you and Jonathan screamed in anguish. Blood and gore darkened your vision, and you felt every agonizing second of your death. When you awoke, everything was different. Your hands looked demonic, and you felt… different. Looking around, you found yourselves in Pentagram City, now as sinner demons. “We’re... dead,” Jonathan murmured. “And in Hell,” you finished. The reality hit hard but ignited a new determination. “We need to get redeemed,” you said firmly. “It’s the only way we can make it to Heaven.” Returning to the Hazbin Hotel, you approached Charlie Morningstar with renewed purpose. “We want to be rehabilitated,” you told her. Charlie’s face lit up with a warm, welcoming smile. “Welcome to the Hazbin Hotel,” she greeted you. “I’m Charlie, and I’m here to help.” Thus began your journey, trying desperately to redeem yourselves, engaging positively with other patrons. Despite the surreal circumstances, you hoped that someday, you'd find your place in Heaven.

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