Mirror of Shadows: Transformation into Moxxie's Identical Twin Brother

Prompt: Write a POV transformation story of the human reader turning into Moxxie (a character, voiced by Richard Steven Horvitz, from an adults cartoon/animated series Helluva Boss), complete with art style shift (the reader now being in a cartoon world of the Helluva Boss series, and the reader now becoming a cartoon character with the same art style as the other Helluva Boss characters, rather than being a real life person), gender change (if the reader is a female, her breasts vanish as her throat gains an Adam's apple to give her a more masculine voice identical to Moxxie (as heard from the Helluva Boss series) and her female privates (vagina, ovaries, and uterus) invert itself and pushes out into male private parts (a penis and testicles); however, this is optional and only if the reader is female), clothes change (the reader's clothes becoming the exact same outfit as Moxxie's outfit), age change, height regression (shrinking from an average 5.7 foot or 6 foot height of an average human to only a 3.9 feet tall height of Moxxie, leaving the reader the same height and eye-level as Moxxie), reality change (the reader's real (live-action) world becoming the animated world of Helluva Boss), and mind/mental change (with the reader's personalities and memories being completely replaced with Moxxie's personality and memories, despite the reader's best efforts of fighting his/her new personality and memories, making the reader completely forget he was a normal person, even forgetting that the transformation that just occurred seconds ago, and only remembered ever being a male imp and a husband to Millie, always being an imp named Moxxie). For Moxxie's appearance (after the reader turned into his clone), he is an imp with red skin and white freckles on his cheeks, and he is shorter than Blitzo (Moxxie's boss and the founder of I.M.P) since he (Moxxie) is 3.9 feet tall. Like all imps, he has a short reptilian-looking snout filled with white sharp teeth and without a nose, as well as having four fingered hands, with an opposable thumb and three other fingers (rather than a human's five-fingered hands (an opposable thumb and four other fingers)), and he lacks any visible ears. His white pointy hair leads up to his curvy black and white striped horns. He also has yellow sclera with black vertical slit pupils. Moxxie has a long red thin devil-like imp tail with a quadrilateral barb at the end, as well as lanky digitigrade legs ending in cloven red hoofed feet, reminiscent of artiodactyls. Moxxie's usual outfit consists of a navy-black coat with red buttons and white cuffs, black toe-less pants a white shirt that has a black turtleneck, a large red bow-tie, and fingerless gloves. Moxxie is the I.M.P's weapon specialist; and as such, has a vast knowledge of weapons and often brings a variety of them along during jobs. He is often the most vocal and realistic of the employees of I.M.P (with Blitzo being the boss) regarding the company as a whole despite its dysfunctional environment and is bullied consequently. He is also shown to be insured about himself since he’s not physically strong since Striker, Lin and Joe was giving him a hard time since they believe physical strength is what makes a person strong. Moreover, he is an imp who is easily annoyed and rather clumsy, as he trips over their ritualistic book on the way through the portal to the living world. Despite being a murder-for-hire imp, it seems Moxxie is queasy with unnecessary killing beyond their targets. He also is uncomfortable with the idea of killing targets who have families, and attempts to give people second chances, as seen in "Murder Family". Moxxie is also shown to have a comical side, as when he talks about killing an entire family, he claims it might be alright if it was just a shitty dad or a mob family, saying "That's understandable" in an accent. When finding out Blitzo used to date Verosika Mayday, he asked if she had suffered blindness or brain damage, implying that a pop star such as her wouldn't usually date Blitzo unless they had some form of mental disability. When intoxicated (due to some human tourists shoving him into one of the kegs), he loses all common sense and becomes quite delusional, as shown when he asks Millie why she has "four heads", and high-fived her instead of grabbing her hand straightaway. He also is shown to become increasingly flirtatious with her when drunk. Here is Moxxie's abilities; Earthly fire immunity (As shown in the episode "Unhappy Campers", Moxxie is completely unharmed by the effects of human world fires), musical talent (Moxxie is a gifted singer and guitar player), bilingualism - (in addition to English, Moxxie is also fluent in a little Yiddish), acrobatics (Moxxie is nimble and agile in terms of fighting, as he swiftly dodged all the arrows shot at him while swinging away on a strand of rope to intervene in Keenie and Millie's fighting), songwriting (Moxxie is able to compose music, having written "Oh, Millie" in honor of his wife), weapon proficiency (Moxxie is proficient in the use of several weapons, most especially sniper rifles), disguise (just like Blitzo and Millie, Moxxie can utilize multiple earthly outfits to pass off as humans on Earth), cooking (Moxxie is shown to be good at cooking), climbing, swimming, and diving. Here is Moxxie's history; Moxxie was born in the Wrath Ring to Crimson and a unnamed female imp, but was raised and spent most of his life in the Greed Ring. Moxxie's relationship with his father and mother was bleak, with Crimson unhappy of Moxxie's lack of commitment to his criminal lifestyle, and his mother's attempts to steer him away from said lifestyle. It is hinted that Crimson ordered Moxxie's mother (Crimson's wife) to be murdered. Crimson continued to force Moxxie to accept his criminal obligations, such as forcing him to execute imps and participate in violent skirmishes. Moxxie was eventually elevated as a fully fledged member of his father's mafia. During his elevation to full member of the mafia, Moxxie met and immediately fell in love with Chazwick Thurman. The two dated for some time and were even involved in gang wars together, but their relationship ended when in a heist gone wrong Moxxie's leg was trapped and Chaz fled leaving Moxxie to be arrested. In prison, Moxxie met Blitzo and presumably helped him with his escape plan. At unknown points of time before the beginning of the series, Moxxie met and married Millie and joined I.M.P. In the episode "Murder Family" and at I.M.P Headquarters Moxxie aims his crossbow at a picture of an "innocent" family held by Loona, but worries about ever having to kill a human family. When Blitzo enters the room to introduce their client, Moxxie is startled and shoots a bolt that ricochets around the room, knocking over a tank of eels and setting the building on fire. When they reach the targets house Blitzo is about to shoot the target until Moxxie purposely makes him miss because she had her family with her. Blitzo berates Moxxie but after getting shot in the arm he flees to the forest while Moxxie stays hiding in the bushes leading leading to his capture by the kids as he attempts to flee. Moxxie awakens tied to a chair where attempts to make peace with them, but then they creepily tell him "it's nice to have a new critter to play with", disturbing him. When Moxxie sees around the room the remains of human used for decoration and begins to struggle in his restraints then sees a fire through the window. The girl pulls out a knife but Moxxie knocks over the chair onto her and uses her knife to get free and races into the forest. Moxxie arrives and saves Blitzo and Millie by shooting Martha. Moxxie apologizes to his boss for interfering with the mission and after being untied Blitzo threatens Moxxie to never hesitate again or else he'll sexually assault him and Millie as punishment. As Blitzo has a portal created by Loona, Moxxie says he has to get something from the house and runs off. At the house, Moxxie berates Ralphie and his children for being monsters, but instead of killing them he calls the human authorities. At the portal back to Hell, Moxxie watches as the police arrive and is horrified when the house is obliterated with the family still inside by a missile fired from a police helicopter. Then, Moxxie is dragged back to Hell. Later, Blitzo and the rest of the gang congratulate Moxxie on a successful job, but Moxxie has a distressed expression on his face. In the episode "Loo Loo Land", Moxxie, along with the rest of I.M.P, go to Loo Loo Land as hired guards to protect Stolas and Octavia. Millie takes Moxxie to ride on "The Lawsuit" roller-coaster, which makes him throw up afterwards, and the pair end up at a shooting gallery carnival game. Moxxie enters to win Millie a "Thing?" and shoots a bullseye but the target doesn't go down, and the operator goads him into continuing to buy further games. Millie attempts to shoot the target but despite missing the target goes down, leading Moxxie to call out the operator, but is pushed aside so the operator could flirt with Millie. Suddenly, Blitzo falls through the roof of the shooting gallery and Moxxie takes a "Thing?" as he and his wife run off to guard Stolas. Later, Moxxie rides upon a dragon that eats the Robo Fizz attacking Blitzo. Then, he, Blitzo, and Millie are sent flying outside Loo Loo Land, commenting that Blitzo ruined another good thing before passing out. In the episode "Spring Broken", and after the I.M.P carpark is stolen, Moxxie exits the company van shocked that Blitzo had dated a popstar. Inside the I.M.P Headquarters building Moxxie enters Verosika's office to try to reason with her and her fellow succubi demon posse, but they take on full demonic forms to sexually assault him. Later, Moxxie criticizes Blitzo's plan to win his bet and his plan to get clients. On Earth, Moxxie helps kill several targets and ends up hiding on a table of kegs where he prepares to take out a target with a crossbow, but when a drunk partygoer flips the table he lands amongst the crowd, is mistaken for a possum and stuffed into one of the kegs where he involuntarily swallows large portions of the alcohol. After a catfish mutated into a monster (caused by being exposed to Verosika Mayday's flask of Beelzejuice), it makes easy prey of the drunken Moxxie, grabbing him with its tongue and swallowing him whole. Millie rescues Moxxie and kills the monster. Later, when Verosika tries to reprimand the imps for not being in disguise, Moxxie drunkenly hisses that he was mistaken for a possum. Then, Millie carries the drunken Moxxie through the portal and back to hell. In the episode "C.H.E.R.U.B", and in the I.M.P meeting room, Blitzo was entertaining himself shooting televisions whenever Moxxie found an annoying program until Loopty Goopty breaks into the building through the wall that crushes Moxxie. Blitzo, Moxxie, and Millie go to Earth and watch their target, Lyle Lipton, with snacks in hand as he is tying a noose for himself until the cherubs interrupt with a flash. The three imps attempt to convince Lyle to continue the process of taking his own life by showing him the worst of the world as they refute against the cherubs attempt to convince him to stay alive. When the cherubs take Lyle to an opera and Blitzo attempts to ruin the show, the imps and cherubs begin fighting and Moxxie shoots a sandbag to stop Keenie from fighting Millie. Moxxie then swings over and catches Millie the pair begin making out as they swing above the stage and removing pieces of their clothing. After Lyle dies from a falling piano and I.M.P are back in their meeting room, Moxxie avoids being crushed again but another escalator crashes through the wall and squashes him. As Moxxie is trapped, frothing at the mouth and groaning in agony, Blitzo yells that Moxxie's gonna have to fix all the damages. In the episode "The Harvest Moon Festival", and in bed in his home, Moxxie is awoken by a call from Blitzo who was found to be watching him and his wife sleep. I.M.P arrives at Rough n' Tumbleweed Ranch in the Wrath Ring for the Harvest Moon Festival. Millie reintroduces Moxxie to her parents, Joe and Lin, who give him a cold welcome and taunt him. While Millie complains about not being able to compete in the Pain Games, Moxxie says that she can cheer for him as he intends to enter. Moxxie then attempts to wrangle one of the demon hogs for dinner but ultimately fails, and Striker leaps in and pushes him out of the way to quickly and easily kill the beast. The next day in the Pain Games, Moxxie fails every event and is attacked by a hell shark in several. After the games are done, Moxxie's resentment of Striker grows as he performs a victory song and is visibly hurt when he finds out Blitzo offered Striker a job. When Striker tells Moxxie to "go fuck himself" in his song Moxxie tears up, and at the suggestion of Millie leaves to get cleaned up. Back at the ranch, Moxxie discovers in Striker's room a Carmine-crafted blessing-tipped rifle. Striker attacks Moxxie and strangles him intending to kill him, but in the struggle Millie appears and begins repeatedly stabbing Striker in the back to save Moxxie. Striker takes the incapacitated Moxxie and Millie and tosses them into the farmhouse cellar to deal with later. Moxxie uses a gun to break free and goes to confront Striker, and while Blitzo has Striker distracted Moxxie grabs the holy rifle. Moxxie, alongside Blitzo, fight against Striker and the pair manage to corner him, but when Moxxie gets inadvertently knocked aside by a door being kicked into his face, Striker takes the opportunity and escapes. The next day, outside the ranch, when Lin berates Millie for letting Striker get the drop on her Moxxie stands up for her, telling her parents that they should be ashamed for hiring Striker in the first place and that Millie has enough strength for both of them. Joe acknowledges Moxxie's input for the first time with a simple nod, which Millie comments on. In the episode "Truth Seekers", Moxxie and Blitzo are captured by a pair of agents and later awaken tied to chairs. Moxxie attempts to get free until the agents appear and begin questioning them, but are stopped by Blitzo wanting coffee and Moxxie explaining at length what beverage he wants. The imps don't take them seriously and begin to make jokes towards the agents, much to the agents' frustration. The agents, sick of the mocking, leave the room and fill it with gas that makes the imps start telling the truth and begin hallucinating. In Moxxie's hallucination he walks up stairs in a The Phantom of the Opera-style music number and confronts Blitzo on how he acts to those around him, and admits to Blitzo that he tries to please everyone and keeps his true feelings hidden away. In Blitzo's hallucination Moxxie appears as a sludge-like creature before turning into a paper version of himself and begins tormenting Blitzo about his toxic and selfish personality. Millie and Loona arrive and free Blitzo and Moxxie, but before they can escape numerous D.H.O.R.K.S. agents appear and surround them. I.M.P begin slaughtering the humans, Moxxie using a multitude of firearms, but when the building goes into lockdown they become trapped within the interrogation room until Stolas arrives to bring them back to Hell. In the episode "Ozzie's", and after a day of killing lumberjacks on Earth, I.M.P returns to Hell and Moxxie announces his reservations to take Millie to Ozzie's to celebrate their first wedding anniversary. Later, Moxxie takes Millie on the Elevator to the Lust Ring and enter Ozzie's, unaware that Blitzo followed them. At the club, Fizzarolli introduces Moxxie to the stage. On stage Moxxie begins to sing a love song to Millie, much to the dismay of the other guests and the club owner. As he sings his song, Fizzarolli and Asmodeus interject with their own song of lust, taunting Moxxie. The pair try to push Moxxie to sing about his sexual desires, but when he doesn't Fizzarolli and Asmodeus turn to insulting him. When Blitzo speaks up to defend Moxxie, Fizzarolli and Asmodeus continue to sing about lust until Millie uses Moxxie's guitar to knock out Fizzarolli to let Moxxie finish his song. As Moxxie finishes his song, Asmodeus holding an injured Fizzarolli angrily tells Moxxie and Millie to get the fuck out. In the episode "Seeing Stars", and at the I.M.P office, Moxxie and Millie sit together on a couch with mugs in hand and supports Blitzo in his efforts to talk to Loona about her attitude with clients. After Loona storms off Moxxie rubs Blitzo's shoulders, then when a light flashes in Blitzo's office the three imps rush in prepared to fight. Later, along with Stolas, I.M.P go to Los Angeles on Earth in order to find Octavia after she stole her fathers grimoire. While the rest of the group go off to look for Octavia, Moxxie gets distracted by people who want to to sell him art and he begins to make money by singing with Millie in order to pay for it, much to the annoyance of the artists. Later still, Moxxie has amassed a huge amount of art paraphernalia in a heavy bag that he's attempting to drag back to Hell. Just as another artist comes to sell Moxxie a CD, Millie kills the human and forces Moxxie to return to Hell without his bag of art, but while walking sadly towards the portal Millie picks him up and carries him through. In the episode "Exes and Oohs", and in the I.M.P office while Moxxie attempts to brag about losing weight to an uncaring Loona, Millie barges in and in fury punches over a cabinet full of pictures that Blitzo makes Moxxie pick up. When a helicopter arrives, the three imps get aboard and are taken to Crimson's mansion in the Greed Ring where he nervously introduces his father, Crimson, to his coworkers. Inside the mansion Moxxie sits in awkward silence until Chazwick Thurman enters and Moxxie explains their history together, and afterwards everyone goes to have dinner. After dinner when Alessio takes the others to their rooms, Moxxie stays at the command of Crimson, where his father physically assaults Moxxie and explains to him that he will be wedded to Chaz. After leaving the dining room Moxxie goes to his room where Chaz attempts to seduce him, but after kicking Chaz out Moxxie looks at pictures on his phone, cries and goes to sleep. The next day at breakfast after Millie leaves to look for Blitzo, Moxxie stands up to his father and refuses to go ahead with the marriage, but is stopped when Alessio tazes him and he falls unconscious. Moxxie is tied, gagged, and put in a wedding dress where he's forced into the marriage until Millie crashes the wedding to rescue him and take him and Blitzo back to the I.M.P office. In the episode "Western Energy", Blitzo gets a call from Stolas to save him, but as he is busy taking Loona to St. An's Hospital for a Hellbie's shot Moxxie and Millie offer to go save him instead. Moxxie drops Blitzo and Loona off at the hospital and drives off. Arriving in the Wrath Ring, Moxxie fills the I.M.P van at a gas station and kills three demon bikers who are angry that their leader and Moxxie's hats are similar before leaving for Striker's hideout. After the van crashes into Striker's mine shaft, Moxxie pulls out a rifle to shoot Striker. Moxxie and Millie become locked in battle against Striker but he makes quick work of the duo. With Millie unable to help, Striker pins Moxxie down and begins choking him until he turns the situation sexual which distracts Striker, allowing Moxxie to get free and fight back. When Striker escapes, Moxxie and Millie find Stolas badly injured and unconscious and rush him to St. An's Hospital for treatment. In the episode "Unhappy Campers", and despite I.M.P not usually taking on investigations, Moxxie is told to handle the job when Blitzo becomes infuriated while busy. Moxxie prepares for the case by planning everything out on a police investigation board, wanting his first mission to be "perfect". Moxxie and Millie arrive at Camp Ivannakummore disguised as sister and brother Moxxine and Millerd Realboy. Despite Millie spotting the obvious suspect, Moxxie becomes upset until Millie gives in and agrees to do the job his way. Moxxie attempts to fit in with the teen girls but gets bombarded with insults. Behind the cabins when Millie wants to kill the target she suggested earlier, Moxxie states he has to do the job right, and Millie concedes, giving him the idea to win over the campers with something he's good at. That night, Moxxie sings a song but the campers scares them and they leave him to enjoy Millie's banjo playing, causing Moxxie to run off crying. Later, Millie comes to check on Moxxie, whose crying in an outhouse, and makes him feel better. Throughout the week Moxxie continues to look for any leads for the investigation, but fails over and over and continuously gets hurt. At the end of the week with no results, Moxxie vents his frustration at Millie and the two get into a heated argument until Millie walks away in tears. Moxxie then realizes he made a mistake and needs to fix it. The next day, Moxxie goes on stage before Millie's concert to introduce her to the stage with a speech about how special she is. After giving Millie the microphone Moxxie goes to the boathouse to kill the target and finish the job. Moxxie bumps into Blitzo in the bushes and the pair enter the boathouse to confront Counselor Jimmy and Barbie Wire. Moxxie attempts to kill Jimmy, but Barbie Wire fights to stop him, and Blitzo attempts to stop them both and the three imps begin to fight until a stray firework kills Jimmy. With the job being done, Moxxie goes to Millie and apologizes for his rudeness, and when she forgives him they end up having sex on stage in front of everyone. Back in I.M.P Headquarters, Blitzo commends Moxxie for his first solo mission, but when Moxxie asks for reaffirmation Blitzo responds that no he didn't and that Moxxie is a total disgrace, much to Moxxie's sadness. In the episode The Full Moon", Moxxie returns from a job with the rest of I.M.P, and is surprised when Blitzo compliments them. Moxxie states Blitzo is in a happy mood and compliments his outfit, while also insulting him. Moxxie questions Blitzo about his sex relationship with Stolas and is disgusted by it. Moxxie explains their current business state has hit a peak and tells Blitzo to fuck him good, which allows Blitzo to tease Moxxie with a sex joke, which Moxxie dislikes. Moxxie is then covered in a pile of overdue paperwork he needs to complete. After following the Cherubs, Moxxie appears from the shadows with as gun initiating a fight with Keenie, but decides to shoot Collin after seeing him shoot a rocket at Millie. He then hides behind a pile of rocks to dodge of one of Keenie's attacks. Moxxie shoots out half of Keenie's visor and holds her at gunpoint, until she grabs him and flies into the sky. Moxxie, Millie, and Keenie fall from the sky after Millie hits Keenie on the back. Loona steps in, shooting a rocket at a nearby building, causing it to collapse and causing Moxxie to kick Keenie out as he and Millie land in the pool and start making out. In the episode "Ghostf**kers", Moxxie, is having a breakdown after staying the night doing a horrendous math calculation to see what they can do to get their finances squared away. When Blitzo and Millie leave to hunt for a supposed ghost (despite the fact that there are rules are when humans die, they either end up in Heaven or Hell and ghosts not existing), Millie asks Loona to keep an eye on Moxxie because he's still going crazy in fear of a bankruptcy, much to Loona's displeasure. Moxxie, after another recalculation, was overjoyed that he managed to figure out the financial math problem that he's been trying to solve until Loona checks his work and points out that he forgot to carry the 2. Moxxie, in a complete breakdown, prepares to douse the office and the stacks of financial with gasoline until Loona interrupts, cooling him down with a blanket, ice cream, and a porn movie called "Ghostf**kers: The Musical". In the YouTube short episode "Hell's Belles", Moxxie comes home and smiles as he sees Sallie May and Millie having a good time laughing together on the couch, he then walks into another room. For Moxxie's preferences (likes and dislikes); he likes cooking, culinary arts, musical theater, classical music, opera, his mother's kindness, being put in charge of missions, and Blitzo's approval as his boss. However, Moxxie dislikes Blitzo prying into his personal life, theme parks, theme park mascots, killing the innocent, pop music, Stolas' wrath, his father's (Crimson) abuse, Loona calling him fat, being the butt of the joke, and Millie stealing his spotlight. The story would be that Moxxie is fed up with the reader (who was at first unaware of the animated characters being self-aware about real life) laughing and viewing Moxxie as a butt of a joke from various things, for example, being joked around by his boss (Blitzo) and being called "fat" by Loona (Blitzo's adopted daughter and a hellhound); to teach the reader a lesson (and by some supernatural means), Moxxie came to the real world from one of the episodes of Helluva Boss and pulled/sent the reader into the world of Helluva Boss, having already strapped the reader into an invention/machine that Moxxie discovered on an alleyway, and he started turning the reader into his identical clone. The reader tries fighting off the physical and mental transformation and tells himself that he is not Moxxie, but is unable to do so, and the original Moxxie gently corrects/tells the reader that he (the reader) is wrong and that he was never human despite what he (the reader) had falsely/wrongly believed (even saying that he was imagining being human all this time, making the reader doubt himself ever being human, and he asks the original Moxxie that is he really Moxxie and asks that is he his brother, before the original Moxxie confirms yes, making the reader realize that the original Moxxie is telling the truth), and the reader really is Moxxie (exactly like the original Moxxie) and they have been together ever since they were born, and the original Moxxie lovingly (in a loving ans brotherly way) encourages and truly helps the reader to remember who he really is and remember his true self (as Moxxie's identical twin brother with a same name). Thus, the reader completely turned into Moxxie's identical twin brother, with the reader (now Moxxie's identical twin brother), after he got out of the invention (after the straps of the machine have automatically removed by themselves), with the reader having no memory of ever being a human and remembered/knowing that he had always been a hellborn demon (more specifically an imp) and his name always being Moxxie (just like the original Moxxie), as well as himself being completely unaware of the transformation that had just happened a moment ago (he doesn't know what just happened a moment ago due to his mind being fuzzy at a moment before he asks the original Moxxie and what he (the reader) was doing, before the original Moxxie told him that he (the reader) was having a headache, probably stressed from I.M.P's last/previous mission, which the reader (the new Moxxie) realizes that he (the reader) did actually had a headache and this actually explains why everything was fuzzy for a moment before his mind became clear), and he now remembers everything that the original Moxxie also remembers since they (the reader and the original Moxxie) both did the same missions and other stuff together (remembering not just one Moxxie himself, but also the reader, more accurately the second Moxxie, as both Moxxies remember living and working together), since they were both born from the same imp parents, hence why they both are completely identical twins, and both Moxxies genuinely love each other in a brotherly way (showing true affection to each other such as hugging), even saying that they love each other (since they're both brothers, being both part of the same family as their loving imp mother), as well as both of the Moxxies truly loving Millie, with both Moxxies having no competition towards each other for the same Millie. The machine, without the other I.M.P members knowing, also gave Blitzo, Millie, Loona, and everyone else the memories of Moxxie having an identical twin brother of the same name (while the humans of the real world forgot all about the human reader ever existing), before the machine (which transformed the reader into Moxxie's Identical twin brother) itself permanently vanishes completely into thin air (with no one having any memory of that machine ever existing, acting like and believing that the machine never existed), and the I.M.P employees all act and believe that Moxxie always had an identical twin brother as if it was normal (which to them, it really is normal and it had always had been this way, they all know that Moxxie always had a twin brother with a same name (with both Moxxie twins genuinely loving each other as well as saying that they love each other), and Millie genuinely loves both Moxxies as her two husbands). The transformation is permanent (meaning it is forever) and is completely irreversible, so the reader will always be Moxxie's Identical twin brother with the same name and knows that he always had been, genuinely loving his twin brother and vice versa (as well as both Moxxies loving Millie herself and vice versa). There should also be quotes from the characters in this story so we know what they're saying and what they're thinking. Also, it is a POV reader story, so it should not be in an author's point of view (my, I, mine, etc), and it should be from the point of view of the reader (you, your, etc).