Metamorphosis: The Transformation of Jack Bennett
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1. Jack Bennett had just turned six.
2. His birthday was on August 14, 2017.
3. He was born in the year 2017.
4. Jack stood at 3 feet 11 inches tall.
5. He weighed 45 pounds.
6. His hair was a light brown, cut short in a typical boyish style.
7. His eyes were a deep blue.
8. Jack was a white American boy.
9. His mother’s name was Emily Bennett.
10. Emily was 32 years old.
11. Her birthday was on February 2, 1991.
12. She was born in the year 1991.
13. Emily stood at 5 feet 6 inches tall.
14. She weighed 140 pounds.
15. Her hair was a curly auburn, cut just below the shoulders.
16. Emily’s eyes were a soft hazel.
17. Jack’s grandmother was Karen Bennett.
18. Karen was 60 years old.
19. Her birthday was on May 19, 1963.
20. She was born in the year 1963.
21. Karen stood at 5 feet 4 inches tall.
22. She weighed 160 pounds.
23. Her hair was silvery-gray, styled in a neat bob.
24. Karen’s eyes were a light blue, just like Jack’s.
25. Jack was at his friend's house.
26. His friend's name was Lily Harris.
27. Lily was eight years old.
28. Her birthday was on November 11, 2014.
29. She was born in the year 2014.
30. Lily stood at 4 feet 2 inches tall.
31. She weighed 55 pounds.
32. Lily’s hair was a sandy blonde, styled in two long braids.
33. Her eyes were a sparkling green.
34. Lily’s mother was Martha Harris.
35. Martha was 67 years old.
36. Martha’s birthday was on January 25, 1956.
37. She was born in the year 1956.
38. Martha stood at 5 feet 7 inches tall.
39. Martha weighed 370 pounds.
40. Her hair was long and curly, a striking platinum blonde.
41. Martha’s eyes were a steely gray.
42. She was from Chicago, Illinois.
43. Martha was white.
44. Martha wore a hot pink tank top.
45. The tank top had intricate floral patterns swirling up the sides.
46. The neckline was edged with a delicate lace trim.
47. The back featured a bold, crisscross strap design.
48. Her shorts were denim cutoffs.
49. They had frayed edges giving them a rugged look.
50. There were embroidered butterfly patches on the front pockets.
51. The shorts were high-waisted, accentuating her figure.
52. Martha wore a pair of flip flops.
53. They were bright red with glittery straps.
54. The soles had a floral imprint that matched the design on her tank top.
55. Martha’s nails were painted a vibrant red.
56. She had thick silver bracelets on her wrists.
57. Jack and Lily were playing in the living room.
58. They were jumping from couch to couch in an exuberant game of "the floor is lava."
59. Martha didn’t approve of this wild game.
60. She stormed into the room, her flip flops slapping against the wooden floor.
61. “What the hell are you doing, boy!?” she scolded, hands on her hips.
62. Jack froze mid-jump, eyes wide in fear.
63. “You’re gonna break something, you little brat!”
64. Jack stammered, “I-I’m s-sorry…”
65. Martha’s glare did not soften. “If you break anything, it’s your ass on the line!”
66. She turned on her heel and stomped out of the room, muttering curses.
67. Jack felt a pang of guilt as she left.
68. He kicked off his shoes and socks.
69. Jack decided to apologize to Martha directly.
70. He followed her to her room, his little feet padding softly.
71. Just as he stepped in, he tripped over something.
72. He looked down and saw Martha’s bright red flip flops.
73. Without realizing it, he slipped them on in his fall.
74. Jack tried to kick them off but they wouldn’t budge.
75. He felt panic rising as the flip flops seemed to cling tightly to his feet.
76. He watched in horror as his feet began to change.
77. They grew longer and more feminine.
78. His toenails turned red as nail polish magically appeared.
1. His feet cracked and aged as they transformed.
2. The transformation continued painfully.
3. His toes elongated and gained delicate curves.
4. The bones in his feet shifted.
5. His heels became more pronounced.
6. The skin became smoother and softer.
7. Wrinkles formed as the skin aged decades.
8. Red nail polish spread perfectly on every nail.
9. His feet grew the same size as Martha’s.
10. They were now identical to Martha’s feet.
79. Jack tried to speak but was too scared.
80. “H-h-h-help…” he whispered timidly.
81. His legs began to change next.
1. They stretched longer, gaining muscle tone.
2. The bones realigned, becoming more feminine.
3. His thighs and calves shaped into womanly curves.
4. His skin softened and aged.
5. Lines and wrinkles formed.
6. His toes tingled with the aging change.
7. Hair appeared but in soft, delicate strands.
8. His legs became exactly like Martha’s.
9. Panties appeared on him.
10. Denim shorts, identical to Martha’s, covered them.
82. Jack’s torso and body began to morph.
1. His frame elongated, slim but curvaceous.
2. His waist cinched in, creating an hourglass figure.
3. His shoulders narrowed.
4. His back became more slender and flexible.
5. His chest developed into soft, full breasts.
6. Bra cups formed, lifting and supporting him.
7. The lace trim mirrored Martha’s bra exactly.
8. His ribcage adjusted to a more feminine shape.
9. Layers of skin aged, acquiring firmness and softness of an older woman.
10. The pink tank top materialized, fitting like a glove.
83. Next, his arms and hands transformed.
1. They grew slender and elegant.
2. Muscle definition appeared delicately.
3. Aging lines and marks formed gently.
4. The skin softened, becoming more womanly.
5. Wrinkles of age appeared.
6. Red nail polish began to coat his fingernails.
7. The nails elongated to feminine curves.
8. Wrinkles formed on his hands.
9. The skin became soft but firm.
10. His hands were now just like Martha’s.
84. Finally, Jack’s head and face changed completely.
1. His hair grew rapidly, lightening to platinum blonde.
2. Curls formed, cascading down his back.
3. His facial structure shifted.
4. His jawline softened becoming more delicate.
5. His nose refined to an elegant shape.
6. High cheekbones emerged.
7. Eyelashes extended and curled.
8. Eyebrows shaped into perfect arches.
9. Lips plumped and brightened.
10. His skin glowed, a mix of youth and age.
11. Eyes became steely gray.
12. Forehead lines appeared.
13. Wrinkles around his eyes formed.
14. Crow’s feet appeared gently.
15. Expression lines deepened.
16. Freckles scattered.
17. Age spots lightened.
18. Ears redefined.
19. Chin softened.
20. Identical to Martha’s face.
85. Jack no longer existed; only Martha Harris remained.
86. Martha blinked, confusion clouding her eyes.
87. “What was I mad about? Oh, that little shit, making a mess,” she said, her voice in a sassy accent.
88. She had no memory of being Jack Bennett.
89. Martha wondered aloud, “What was I doing in here again?”
90. She clip-clopped to a nearby mirror.
91. “Damn gal, you beautiful,” she said.
92. “Look at you, Martha, aged 67, hot as ever.”
93. “You fine as hell, girl.”
94. “Never let ‘em tell you otherwise.”
95. “67 and still got it!”
96. Martha admired herself, clipping and clopping in front of the mirror.
97. She decided she needed to run a few errands.
98. Martha looked down at her feet, smiling at her polished nails.
99. Grabbing her purse, she swung it over her shoulder.
100. She clip-clopped out to her car.
101. Martha drove to the store, humming along to the radio.
102. She parked and got out, grabbing her purse.
103. As she walked in, she said, “Damn, I look good, I’m one hot Chicago woman.”
104. She grabbed snacks and drinks for Lily.
105. She chose Doritos nacho cheese flavor.
106. Lay's classic potato chips.
107. Hostess Twinkies.
108. Oreos.
109. Coca-cola.
110. Sprite.
111. M&M's.
112. Reese's Peanut Butter Cups.
113. Martha also got a couple of things for herself.
114. She needed help in the liquor section.
115. “Excuse me!” she called, “Can someone help?”
116. A clerk approached her.
117. Martha requested two bottles of Jack Daniel's.
118. She also asked for Bacardi rum.
119. “Where’s your ID?” the clerk asked, smiling.
120. “Are you fuckin’ kidding me?” she snapped.
121. The clerk tried to explain, “Just for the cameras, ma’am.”
122. Martha went off on a rant.
1. “I’m 67, you think I need an ID?”
2. “Back in Chicago, we ain’t doing this bullshit!”
3. “I’ve been buying liquor since before you were born.”
4. “Where do you think I'm from, a child zone?”
5. “Anyone can see I’m old enough.”
6. “This is ridiculous.”
7. “Give me my damn bottles.”
8. “I don’t have time for this crap.”
123. The cashier was apologetic, “I’m sorry, miss. Don’t worry about it.”
124. “You better be sorry!” Martha retorted.
125. She went to the manager.
126. “I feel offended!” she declared, venting her anger.
127. Martha got home, yelling, “Lily! Get your little ass here and help with these groceries!”
128. “And don't you dare touch the snacks until after dinner, young lady.”
129. “You need permission and if I catch you sneaking them, you’ll be grounded!”
130. Lily asked, “Can I please have a Twinkie, Mom?”
131. “Are you fuckin’ kidding me!? Absolutely not!”
132. Martha ranted at Lily.
1. “You kids think you can have everything immediately?”
2. “I said after dinner and I fuckin’ mean it.”
3. “What’s wrong with you?”
4. “No respect for rules.”
5. “Back in Chicago, kids didn’t pester their moms like this!”
6. “I’ve had a long day, don’t make it worse.”
7. “Get upstairs if you can't listen.”
8. “And no Twinkies until I say so.”
133. Martha clip-clopped to her room, muttering to herself.
134. She admired herself assertively in the mirror.
135. “Damn Martha, you still got it.”
136. She continued to rant about the store incident.
137. “Can’t stand those fuckin’ teenagers thinking they know everything.”
138. “And don’t get me started on Jack.”
139. “Damn kids always making my life harder.”
140. Martha never remembered who she used to be.
141. She wandered why she was angrier than usual that day.
142. “What the hell was I up to?” she muttered.
143. She complimented herself assertively.
1. “Martha, you’re a strong woman.”
2. “You don't take shit from nobody.”
3. “Gorgeous and smart!”
4. “67 and fabulous!”
5. “Girl, you’re unstoppable.”
144. She clip-clopped back to her bedroom mirror.
145. She decided she needed to make a few errands again.
146. Martha admired herself again, checking her nails.
147. She grabbed her purse.
148. Throwing it over her shoulder, she left the house.
149. Martha drove to the store.
150. She got out of her car, grabbing her purse.
151. As she walked in, she said, “Damn, I look good. I’m one hot Chicago woman.”
152. She grabbed everything she needed.
153. Martha loudly demanded, “Need help again. Hurry up!”
154. She requested another bottle of Bacardi rum.
155. The cashier once again asked for ID, “Just need a glimpse, ma’am.”
156. Martha started another rant.
1. “Not this again.”
2. “I’m 67, do you need glasses?”
3. “Chicago women don’t get carded!”
4. “You think I’m under 21?”
5. “Been drinking legally longer than you been alive.”
6. “This is an insult.”
7. “Can’t get decent service these days.”
8. “Ridiculous policy!”
157. The cashier quickly apologized. “Don’t worry about it, miss. I’m sorry for offending you.”
158. “Damn right, you’re sorry!”
159. Martha spoke to the manager.
160. “I felt offended by your staff.”
161. She ranted on.
162. Her anger simmered down as she headed home.
163. She unloaded the groceries, yelling for Lily’s help.
164. “Lily, come get these bags, now!”
This story was generated by user manemansteve with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.
Images were generated with OpenAI's AI system, DALL·E 2, or uploaded by the user.
AI Prompts
Prompt: A long and thorough and detailed 240 sentences story in a formatted list of 1 to 240 about a boy who had just turned a very young age with a detailed description of the boy's name, age, birthday, birth year, height, weight, hair color and style and eye color and race being white. Include his mom's name, age, birthday, birth year, height, weight, hair color and style and eye color. Include his grandma's name, age, birthday, birth year, height, weight, hair color and style and eye color. Have him be at his friend's house and include her name, age, birthday, birth year, height, weight, hair color and style and eye color. Include his friend's mom's name, age being 30-35 years older than his mom, birthday, birth year being 30-35 years older than his mom, height, weight being 350-400 pounds, hair color and style being long and curly and eye color and what state she was from being Chicago Illinois and have her be white. Have her be wearing a tank top and shorts and a pair of flip flops and have her nails be painted and include the color being red. Include a detailed description of the tank top being very detailed and include a very detailed description of the shorts being very detailed and include a very detailed description of the flip flops. Have the boy be at his friend's house doing something with his friend that the friend's mom didn't like him doing and include what he was doing and how she responded to him and include it specifically and have her call him out on it and have it be in quoted text being very strict and stern in a sassy accent saying bad words. Have him try to say sorry unable to talk and have it be in quoted text. Have her stomp away angry. Have the boy feel bad as she left the room and have him kick off his shoes and socks following her to her room and have him walk in the room and instantly trip over something. Have him look down to see the same flip flops his friend's mom was wearing earlier and have him try to kick them off unable to. Have him freak out trying to remove them not wanting his friend's mom to see he accidentally slipped them on. Have his feet crack and age turning older and feminine in a formatted list of 1 to 10 as they gained nail polish as well. Have the boy try to talk being too young but scared and have it be in quoted text. Have his legs feminize and age in a formatted list of 1 to 10 as panties and shorts formed on him. Have his torso and body feminize and age in a formatted list of to 10 as a bra and tank top formed on him. Have his arms and hand feminize and age as his nails grew painted the same color as his toes in a formatted list of 1 to 10. Have his head and hair and face change and feminize in a formatted list of 1 to 20 as he became a female. Have his memories change until he only remembered being his friend's mom. Have her blink in confusion as she looked down at herself suddenly continuing to rant about what she was mad about earlier talking about her daughter's friend and have it be in quoted text in a sassy accent. Have her never remember who she used to be and never change back. Have her wonder what she was doing again and have it be in quoted text spelling it in a blunt accent. Have her clip clop to a nearby mirror complimenting herself in 5 different ways in a formatted list of 1 to 5 and have it all be in quoted text in a very blunt accent referring to herself by her first name and age hyping herself up. Have her clip clop over to the mirror looking her outfit over. Have her decide she needed to run a few errands. Have her look down at her feet smiling as she admired her nails. Have her grab her purse throwing it over her shoulder keeping the outfit she was wearing on as she clip clopped out to the car. Have her drive to the store. Have her get to the store and get out grabbing her purse. Have her look down as she walked into the store saying damn i look good i'm one hot Chicago woman. Have her grab 8 snacks and drinks for her daughter in a formatted list of 1 to 8 and have them all be real brands and have her grab a few things for herself too. Have her head over to the liquor cabinet requesting help and have it be in quoted text in an urban angry blunt Chicago accent. Have her ask for 2 bottles and have it all be in quoted text being real brands of liquor in an urban sassy accent. Have the female cashier ask for ID smiling. Have the woman get confused and frustrated and have it be in quoted text saying bad words. Have the female cashier say i just need a glimpse of it ma'am for the cameras and have it be in quoted text smiling. Have the woman go into a rant about why she needed to show ID when she was clearly old enough and have it all be in quoted text in a formatted list of 1 to 8 in a sassy blunt accent mentioning where she was from. Have the cashier apologize saying don't worry about it miss i'm sorry for offending you. Have her tell the cashier off and have it be in quoted text. Have her go to the manager and talk to her about the situation and have it be in quoted text saying she felt offended. Have her get home yelling for her daughter to help bring in the groceries and have it be in quoted text in a sassy blunt voice saying bad words. Have her clarify the snacks and drinks she bought her are only for after dinner and she must ask for permission to touch any of them and have it be in quoted text in a blunt voice clarifying she will be grounded if she's caught sneaking them calling her little girl and young lady. Have her daughter ask for a snack and have it be in quoted text and include what snack she asked for. Have her mom get angry and go on a rant towards her daughter for asking in a formatted list of 1 to 8 and have it all be in quoted text in a sassy Chicago accent being loud and being rude. Have her clip clip to her room admiring herself assertively complimenting herself and have it be in quoted text. Have her continue to rant about the incident at the store and about her daughter's friend and have it be in quoted text saying fucking and damn. Continue the story from here.
Response: 1. Jack Bennett had just turned six. 2. His birthday was on August 14, 2017. 3. He was born in the year 2017. 4. Jack stood at 3 feet 11 inches tall. 5. He weighed 45 pounds. 6. His hair was a light brown, cut short in a typical boyish style. 7. His eyes were a deep blue. 8. Jack was a white American boy. 9. His mother’s name was Emily Bennett. 10. Emily was 32 years old. 11. Her birthday was on February 2, 1991. 12. She was born in the year 1991. 13. Emily stood at 5 feet 6 inches tall. 14. She weighed 140 pounds. 15. Her hair was a curly auburn, cut just below the shoulders. 16. Emily’s eyes were a soft hazel. 17. Jack’s grandmother was Karen Bennett. 18. Karen was 60 years old. 19. Her birthday was on May 19, 1963. 20. She was born in the year 1963. 21. Karen stood at 5 feet 4 inches tall. 22. She weighed 160 pounds. 23. Her hair was silvery-gray, styled in a neat bob. 24. Karen’s eyes were a light blue, just like Jack’s. 25. Jack was at his friend's house. 26. His friend's name was Lily Harris. 27. Lily was eight years old. 28. Her birthday was on November 11, 2014. 29. She was born in the year 2014. 30. Lily stood at 4 feet 2 inches tall. 31. She weighed 55 pounds. 32. Lily’s hair was a sandy blonde, styled in two long braids. 33. Her eyes were a sparkling green. 34. Lily’s mother was Martha Harris. 35. Martha was 67 years old. 36. Martha’s birthday was on January 25, 1956. 37. She was born in the year 1956. 38. Martha stood at 5 feet 7 inches tall. 39. Martha weighed 370 pounds. 40. Her hair was long and curly, a striking platinum blonde. 41. Martha’s eyes were a steely gray. 42. She was from Chicago, Illinois. 43. Martha was white. 44. Martha wore a hot pink tank top. 45. The tank top had intricate floral patterns swirling up the sides. 46. The neckline was edged with a delicate lace trim. 47. The back featured a bold, crisscross strap design. 48. Her shorts were denim cutoffs. 49. They had frayed edges giving them a rugged look. 50. There were embroidered butterfly patches on the front pockets. 51. The shorts were high-waisted, accentuating her figure. 52. Martha wore a pair of flip flops. 53. They were bright red with glittery straps. 54. The soles had a floral imprint that matched the design on her tank top. 55. Martha’s nails were painted a vibrant red. 56. She had thick silver bracelets on her wrists. 57. Jack and Lily were playing in the living room. 58. They were jumping from couch to couch in an exuberant game of "the floor is lava." 59. Martha didn’t approve of this wild game. 60. She stormed into the room, her flip flops slapping against the wooden floor. 61. “What the hell are you doing, boy!?” she scolded, hands on her hips. 62. Jack froze mid-jump, eyes wide in fear. 63. “You’re gonna break something, you little brat!” 64. Jack stammered, “I-I’m s-sorry…” 65. Martha’s glare did not soften. “If you break anything, it’s your ass on the line!” 66. She turned on her heel and stomped out of the room, muttering curses. 67. Jack felt a pang of guilt as she left. 68. He kicked off his shoes and socks. 69. Jack decided to apologize to Martha directly. 70. He followed her to her room, his little feet padding softly. 71. Just as he stepped in, he tripped over something. 72. He looked down and saw Martha’s bright red flip flops. 73. Without realizing it, he slipped them on in his fall. 74. Jack tried to kick them off but they wouldn’t budge. 75. He felt panic rising as the flip flops seemed to cling tightly to his feet. 76. He watched in horror as his feet began to change. 77. They grew longer and more feminine. 78. His toenails turned red as nail polish magically appeared. 1. His feet cracked and aged as they transformed. 2. The transformation continued painfully. 3. His toes elongated and gained delicate curves. 4. The bones in his feet shifted. 5. His heels became more pronounced. 6. The skin became smoother and softer. 7. Wrinkles formed as the skin aged decades. 8. Red nail polish spread perfectly on every nail. 9. His feet grew the same size as Martha’s. 10. They were now identical to Martha’s feet. 79. Jack tried to speak but was too scared. 80. “H-h-h-help…” he whispered timidly. 81. His legs began to change next. 1. They stretched longer, gaining muscle tone. 2. The bones realigned, becoming more feminine. 3. His thighs and calves shaped into womanly curves. 4. His skin softened and aged. 5. Lines and wrinkles formed. 6. His toes tingled with the aging change. 7. Hair appeared but in soft, delicate strands. 8. His legs became exactly like Martha’s. 9. Panties appeared on him. 10. Denim shorts, identical to Martha’s, covered them. 82. Jack’s torso and body began to morph. 1. His frame elongated, slim but curvaceous. 2. His waist cinched in, creating an hourglass figure. 3. His shoulders narrowed. 4. His back became more slender and flexible. 5. His chest developed into soft, full breasts. 6. Bra cups formed, lifting and supporting him. 7. The lace trim mirrored Martha’s bra exactly. 8. His ribcage adjusted to a more feminine shape. 9. Layers of skin aged, acquiring firmness and softness of an older woman. 10. The pink tank top materialized, fitting like a glove. 83. Next, his arms and hands transformed. 1. They grew slender and elegant. 2. Muscle definition appeared delicately. 3. Aging lines and marks formed gently. 4. The skin softened, becoming more womanly. 5. Wrinkles of age appeared. 6. Red nail polish began to coat his fingernails. 7. The nails elongated to feminine curves. 8. Wrinkles formed on his hands. 9. The skin became soft but firm. 10. His hands were now just like Martha’s. 84. Finally, Jack’s head and face changed completely. 1. His hair grew rapidly, lightening to platinum blonde. 2. Curls formed, cascading down his back. 3. His facial structure shifted. 4. His jawline softened becoming more delicate. 5. His nose refined to an elegant shape. 6. High cheekbones emerged. 7. Eyelashes extended and curled. 8. Eyebrows shaped into perfect arches. 9. Lips plumped and brightened. 10. His skin glowed, a mix of youth and age. 11. Eyes became steely gray. 12. Forehead lines appeared. 13. Wrinkles around his eyes formed. 14. Crow’s feet appeared gently. 15. Expression lines deepened. 16. Freckles scattered. 17. Age spots lightened. 18. Ears redefined. 19. Chin softened. 20. Identical to Martha’s face. 85. Jack no longer existed; only Martha Harris remained. 86. Martha blinked, confusion clouding her eyes. 87. “What was I mad about? Oh, that little shit, making a mess,” she said, her voice in a sassy accent. 88. She had no memory of being Jack Bennett. 89. Martha wondered aloud, “What was I doing in here again?” 90. She clip-clopped to a nearby mirror. 91. “Damn gal, you beautiful,” she said. 92. “Look at you, Martha, aged 67, hot as ever.” 93. “You fine as hell, girl.” 94. “Never let ‘em tell you otherwise.” 95. “67 and still got it!” 96. Martha admired herself, clipping and clopping in front of the mirror. 97. She decided she needed to run a few errands. 98. Martha looked down at her feet, smiling at her polished nails. 99. Grabbing her purse, she swung it over her shoulder. 100. She clip-clopped out to her car. 101. Martha drove to the store, humming along to the radio. 102. She parked and got out, grabbing her purse. 103. As she walked in, she said, “Damn, I look good, I’m one hot Chicago woman.” 104. She grabbed snacks and drinks for Lily. 105. She chose Doritos nacho cheese flavor. 106. Lay's classic potato chips. 107. Hostess Twinkies. 108. Oreos. 109. Coca-cola. 110. Sprite. 111. M&M's. 112. Reese's Peanut Butter Cups. 113. Martha also got a couple of things for herself. 114. She needed help in the liquor section. 115. “Excuse me!” she called, “Can someone help?” 116. A clerk approached her. 117. Martha requested two bottles of Jack Daniel's. 118. She also asked for Bacardi rum. 119. “Where’s your ID?” the clerk asked, smiling. 120. “Are you fuckin’ kidding me?” she snapped. 121. The clerk tried to explain, “Just for the cameras, ma’am.” 122. Martha went off on a rant. 1. “I’m 67, you think I need an ID?” 2. “Back in Chicago, we ain’t doing this bullshit!” 3. “I’ve been buying liquor since before you were born.” 4. “Where do you think I'm from, a child zone?” 5. “Anyone can see I’m old enough.” 6. “This is ridiculous.” 7. “Give me my damn bottles.” 8. “I don’t have time for this crap.” 123. The cashier was apologetic, “I’m sorry, miss. Don’t worry about it.” 124. “You better be sorry!” Martha retorted. 125. She went to the manager. 126. “I feel offended!” she declared, venting her anger. 127. Martha got home, yelling, “Lily! Get your little ass here and help with these groceries!” 128. “And don't you dare touch the snacks until after dinner, young lady.” 129. “You need permission and if I catch you sneaking them, you’ll be grounded!” 130. Lily asked, “Can I please have a Twinkie, Mom?” 131. “Are you fuckin’ kidding me!? Absolutely not!” 132. Martha ranted at Lily. 1. “You kids think you can have everything immediately?” 2. “I said after dinner and I fuckin’ mean it.” 3. “What’s wrong with you?” 4. “No respect for rules.” 5. “Back in Chicago, kids didn’t pester their moms like this!” 6. “I’ve had a long day, don’t make it worse.” 7. “Get upstairs if you can't listen.” 8. “And no Twinkies until I say so.” 133. Martha clip-clopped to her room, muttering to herself. 134. She admired herself assertively in the mirror. 135. “Damn Martha, you still got it.” 136. She continued to rant about the store incident. 137. “Can’t stand those fuckin’ teenagers thinking they know everything.” 138. “And don’t get me started on Jack.” 139. “Damn kids always making my life harder.” 140. Martha never remembered who she used to be. 141. She wandered why she was angrier than usual that day. 142. “What the hell was I up to?” she muttered. 143. She complimented herself assertively. 1. “Martha, you’re a strong woman.” 2. “You don't take shit from nobody.” 3. “Gorgeous and smart!” 4. “67 and fabulous!” 5. “Girl, you’re unstoppable.” 144. She clip-clopped back to her bedroom mirror. 145. She decided she needed to make a few errands again. 146. Martha admired herself again, checking her nails. 147. She grabbed her purse. 148. Throwing it over her shoulder, she left the house. 149. Martha drove to the store. 150. She got out of her car, grabbing her purse. 151. As she walked in, she said, “Damn, I look good. I’m one hot Chicago woman.” 152. She grabbed everything she needed. 153. Martha loudly demanded, “Need help again. Hurry up!” 154. She requested another bottle of Bacardi rum. 155. The cashier once again asked for ID, “Just need a glimpse, ma’am.” 156. Martha started another rant. 1. “Not this again.” 2. “I’m 67, do you need glasses?” 3. “Chicago women don’t get carded!” 4. “You think I’m under 21?” 5. “Been drinking legally longer than you been alive.” 6. “This is an insult.” 7. “Can’t get decent service these days.” 8. “Ridiculous policy!” 157. The cashier quickly apologized. “Don’t worry about it, miss. I’m sorry for offending you.” 158. “Damn right, you’re sorry!” 159. Martha spoke to the manager. 160. “I felt offended by your staff.” 161. She ranted on. 162. Her anger simmered down as she headed home. 163. She unloaded the groceries, yelling for Lily’s help. 164. “Lily, come get these bags, now!”
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