**Chapter One: A Curious Discovery**
You never thought you'd find something as unique as the Asmodean Crystal on your way back from the library. You and your best friend, Jamie, were just strolling along the park when you tripped over it. The crystal glowed faintly, humming with barely contained energy. Jamie picked it up, her eyes widening in fascination.
"What do you think it does?" she asked, turning it over in her hand.
"No idea," you replied, equally captivated by it. "Looks kind of mystical, doesn't it?"
"Yeah, definitely something you'd read about in one of your fantasy books," Jamie joked, nudging you playfully.
As if responding to your recognition, the crystal glowed brighter until it emitted a blinding flash of light. You both stepped back in shock as a swirling vortex appeared, hovering in the air. The portal shimmered and vibrated, casting eerie reflections all around.
"Should we... try it?" Jamie ventured, her curiosity getting the better of her.
"Why not?" You said, intrigued by the possibilities. "No harm in looking."
You could hear the distant sounds of what seemed to be a bustling city beyond the portal. Taking a deep breath, you gripped Jamie's hand, and together, you stepped through.
---
**Chapter Two: Beneath a Hellish Sky**
The first thing that hit you was the heat. It was stifling, hotter than any summer day you had ever experienced. As you glanced around, you realized you were standing before a tall, elaborate building that seemed to be cobbled together from various architectural styles.
"Is that... a hotel?" Jamie asked in disbelief.
The sign at the top of the building blinked intermittently: "Hazbin Hotel."
"Looks like it," you murmured, squinting to take everything in. "We must be in some kind of alternate dimension."
"Or Hell," Jamie said, glancing warily at the demonic insignias and red-glowing windows.
"Could be," you replied, your pulse quickening with a mix of fear and excitement. "Let's check it out."
---
**Chapter Three: The Taste of Hell**
Entering the hotel's double doors, you found yourself in a grand lounge room. Despite its opulent décor, there was an air of neglect. Dust clung to the furniture, and the chandeliers looked like they hadn't been cleaned in ages.
"Look, there's a table with food!" Jamie exclaimed, pointing to a buffet table loaded with various foods and drinks.
You were both starving. "Do you think it's okay to eat?" Jamie asked, hesitant.
"Probably a buffet," you rationalized. "Why else have so much food?"
After a brief moment of hesitation, you both dug in, relishing the taste and quenching your thirst.
"Best meal we've had in ages," you said, grinning at Jamie, who nodded enthusiastically despite her initial reservations.
---
**Chapter Four: Uninvited Guests**
After satisfying your hunger, you both explored the hotel further, finding various nooks and crannies to hide in. It was almost peaceful until you both felt the urgent need to use the bathroom.
The restroom you found was bizarrely adorned, with more eyes and snake motifs around. Each urinal and stall was an unsettling amalgamation of bones and dark wood. After some awkward laughter about the odd decor, you both relieved yourselves, hoping not to be discovered.
No sooner had you finished than you heard Vaggie's irritated voice echoing in the halls, "What the fuck is that awful smell?!"
"I don't know," Angel Dust chimed in. "But it's worse than Husk's farts!"
"I'm going to kill whoever did this!" Husk's voice growled.
You and Jamie couldn't help but snicker quietly from your hiding spot, feeling a bit guilty but more amused.
---
**Chapter Five: Discovered and Doomed**
You thought you had remained undetected until you heard a high-pitched scream. Niffty found you both huddled behind some crates. "Humans! Real, live humans!" she shrieked, her one eye wide with excitement. She darted off to alert the others.
"Did she just say... humans?" Jamie asked, panic in her voice.
"We need to get out of here!" You grabbed her hand, and you both bolted, but it was too late.
The next thing you knew, you were surrounded. Charlie Morningstar looked bewildered, while Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk were less than pleased.
"Who the fuck ate our food?!" Vaggie demanded.
"And stunk up the place?" Angel Dust added, glaring daggers at you.
"Look, we didn't mean to intrude," you began, but Alastor's smile widened ominously.
Alastor stepped forward, his eyes gleaming with malevolence. "Oh, but this is such delightful chaos! Thank you for the entertainment."
With a flick of his wrist, darkness enveloped you both, and pain unlike anything you'd ever experienced ripped through you. The last thing you saw was his maniacal grin as everything went black.
---
**Chapter Six: A Second Chance**
You awoke in what you now understood was Hell, your bodies altered, your souls marked. You could feel the weight of your new form, sinner demons in the city of Pentagram.
"We need to find a way out of this," you told Jamie, determined.
"Yeah, let's head back to the Hazbin Hotel," she agreed. "Maybe Charlie can help us."
Despite your fear, you stepped into the hotel once more, this time with a resolve to change. Charlie welcomed you both with a hopeful smile.
"We want to be rehabilitated," you said.
"Welcome," she replied warmly. "Let's start your journey to redemption."
And thus began your new life, seeking redemption in the most unexpected of places.
This story was generated by user DylanVsFizzarolli with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.
Images were generated with OpenAI's AI system, DALL·E 2, or uploaded by the user.
Prompt: Write a POV story of two humans (one who is a reader and the other who is his/her friend or sibling), who finds an Asmodean Crystal (which Blitzo (an imp from the adults cartoon/animated series Helluva Boss) accidentally dropped one of them during his mission with the other crewmembers of I.M.P. including Moxxie, Millie, and Loona) and both humans decided, out of innocent curiosity (with no ill intent), to test out the Asmodean Crystal to see what happens. The portal to Hell then opens to reveals the entrance to the Hazbin Hotel (from the namesake adults cartoon/animated series "Hazbin Hotel"), and both humans (with no ill intent and with pure curiosity) enter the portal and into Hell before they both go through the hotel's entrance doors and enter inside the Hazbin Hotel without the hotel's staff or guests/clients/patrons knowing. Here is what the hotel looks like; The Hazbin Hotel exterior is a tall, elaborate amalgamation of arched windows and turrets, one of which seems to be broken. It appears to be at least seven stories tall, with at least five of which being guest floors. Remnants of an airship, an ocean liner, a sailing ship and a carousel litter both sides and appear to have been incorporated into the structure of the building itself; there is also a train with some tracks looping the first and second floor exterior. Located on the top right of the building is a small radio broadcasting room, which is used as the work area for Alastor. Many signs are displayed outside the hotel: One atop the entrance reminiscent of the Hazbin Hotel logo, a large pink one atop the building with the hotel's name in lights, a neon 'HOTEL' sign at the bottom right and atop the building where Alastor's broadcast room is located, a small 'On-Air' sign is visible. Also located on the outer facade are various arrows pointing to the entrance and the broadcast room. The entrance has a tented cover with a booth in the center reminiscent of a circus or theater ticket booth. On either side of the booth are a set of double doors that have stained glass; in the pilot, they once depicted an apple on each one but were destroyed by an explosion due to Sir Pentious blowing up the doors with his airship (prior to Sir Pentious changing ways to become a nicer person before redeeming himself and becoming a saint angel (after his willing sacrifice against the series' main antagonist Adam (the exorcist angel) just before Adam is defeated by Lucifer Morningstar and killed by Niffty) in the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On"). The hotel's interior (prior to this story) was shown to be in a state of disrepair, with wooden boards covering shattered windows, signs warning of asbestos, bloodied tools left lying around, and paintings are shown hanging off the walls (however, just after the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On", these have been fixed after the hotel was rebuilt by Charlie's father Lucifer Morningstar). Much of the furniture in the lobby are strewn around haphazardly or remain boxed up in several large wooden crates. The bar uses skeletons, snakes, and bones as general themes, along with card suits and candles, and advertises itself as a casino. The area the bar in has glowing green wooden walls instead of the usual red wallpaper, with a "Jackpot" sign on the left wall and a Beelzejuice neon sign on the right wall. The word "concierge" can be presumed to be shown above the bar, and Alastor calls it the front desk when talking to Husk, suggesting that it is also the check-in counter. Despite the shabby and poor condition of the hotel, the overall theme of the building remains ornate and regal, with stained glass windows, lavish furniture, and generous usage of gold. Like the rest of Hell, the hotel has a largely red color scheme. There are many apple, snake and circus motifs throughout the hotel's interior, in reference to Charlie Morningstar's royal family, or more specifically, Lucifer Morningstar. Eyes are also a recurring theme throughout the building, appearing on the frame of almost every single painting and several vases and jars. The room the two women (Charlie Morningstar and Vaggie) share is rather large, with a regal look and a large bed, and has a window with a view of Pentagram City. Angel Dust's room has striped wallpaper, a vanity, mirrors, a place to put his wigs, and a bed with several pillows of various design, while beside it is a small bed for Fat Nuggets shaped like a pink heart with a small pillow on top, and with both beds on a single platform with neon lights. The wall behind the bed has photos of him, Cherri, and Fat Nuggets, as well as a couple of his film posters, while the bedside wall has neon lights shaped like webs. The door to his room has neon lights shaped like webs with hearts, and has three photos of him and his friends, and Fat Nuggets. Alastor's room has a mixture between both traditional décor and the fantastical, with one half being a classic "fancy study", complete with tasteful wallpaper and furnishings, the other half being a literal swamp conjured as a dining area. Sir Pentious' room (prior to Sir Pentious' death and sacrifice in the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On") shared his (Sir Pentious') airship's steampunk aesthetics of golden cogs and gears and a red and black color scheme, while his bed was a circular mattress lined with pillows; this room is now currently vacant due to Sir Pentious' invented sacrifice. After going through the hotel's doors, both of the humans (the reader and his/her friend or sibling) find themselves in the hotel's lounge room before finding the food and drinks on the table and consumes some of the food (they both wrongly believes no one will mind this, wrongly believing that the food are for everyone to eat and drink, although the reader's friend/sibling is initially concerned about it being someone else's food before the reader tells his/her friend or sibling that this table may be a buffet table hence why there's so much food, so the reader's friend or sibling is no longer worried), since both of the humans are hungry and thirsty (because they have not eaten for a day, so they need food and something to drink). The human duo then go into hiding within the hotel to avoid being discovered by Charlie Morningstar (founder of the Hazbin Hotel who is the daughter of King Lucifer Morningstar and Queen Lilith Morningstar, and was born in Hell, hence her status as a hellborn demon), Vaggie (lesbian manager of the Hazbin Hotel and Charlie's girlfriend (Vaggie sometimes swears/cusses), formerly an heavenborn exorcist angel but was banished by Lute to Hell for refusing to kill a sinner demon), Angel Dust (a tall and gay spider-like sinner demon (formerly a human but succumbed to an overdose sometime in his early 30s in 1947 and arrived in Hell as a sinner demon), an adult entertainer (he even swears/cusses), and the first volunteer for Charlie's Hazbin Hotel (which is a rehabilitation program)), Alastor (an eccentric sinner demon (who was once a human, but died in 1933 due to a dog-related incident), and one of the overlords of Hell), Husk (an ill-tempered, gambling, alcoholic cat-like sinner demon (he even swears/cusses), who was once a human, but he died in the 1970s after being ambushed with his platoon, captured, tortured, beaten, and possibly from alcohol overdose, and he arrives in Hell as a sinner demon), Niffty (a small, hyperactive cyclops-like sinner demon who was once a human woman from the 1950s before her death and arriving in Hell as a sinner demon), Razzle (a small and winged goat-like demon who serve as Charlie's bodyguard), Fat Nuggets (Angel Dust's demonic pet pig), or KeeKee (Charlie's pet demonic mouthless cyclops cat); none of the demons know who really ate the food minutes, so either Vaggie, Angel Dust, or Husk gets really angry about their food getting eaten (the human doesn't mean to upset anyone, since he/she didn't know the food belonged to the hotel's demons). This makes both of the humans quietly snicker out in amusement (they both find the demons' complaints about the stolen food and drinks kinda funny, even if the human duo feel guilty). The human duo then feel like they have to pee/poop, so they both then use one of the hotel's restrooms to get rid of their pee and poop, while they also do not get caught by the demons; the demons (mainly Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk, but Niffty also is grossed out by the smell) smell the nasty odor, which the human duo don't find too bad unlike the demons, and just like how these demons complained about their food and drinks being eaten earlier, these demons complain about that awful smell coming from the restroom (despite the human duo having already flushed the toilet, the smell still lingers, but the smell is not too terrible (and not that different from Earth and is identical to the smell back on Earth) to the human duo unlike to the demons, which to the demons smells very bad), while these demons do not know it was the human duo who made that smell. This also makes both of the humans quietly snicker out in amusement (they find the demons' complaints about the bathroom's smell kinda funny, even if both the humans feel guilty). However, while both of the humans' secrecy in the Hazbin Hotel have lasted for a long while (either for several days or weeks, despite causing the restroom's smell and the food and drinks being consumed by both of the humans themselves), are then (much to their horror) discovered by one of the Hazbin Hotel's occupants, discovered by either Niffty (who would then smile/grin and scream out of excitement before running off to let the other demons know about the humans being in the hotel), or Razzle (who is completely silent, but will still let the other demons know even without speech), or one of the hotel's pets (Fat Nuggets or KeeKee), leading to rumors of the humans inhabiting the hotel among the demons. Sadly and eventually (either hours or days later after the first demon finds both of the humans), the humans, much to their horror, are found by another demon, who yells/tells other demons about their presence to let them about it. The demons then surround both of the humans (with Charlie Morningstar being confused while Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk being unhappy with the human duo eating their food and stinking up the restroom, whilst also just as confused about the humans being in Hell, just as all other demons being confused about the humans being in Hell, since no human has ever visited or lived in Hell) before one of the demons (most likely Alastor, who enjoys chaos such as this) brutally kills both of the humans (blood and gore involved) either through black magic (using dark magic) or cannibalism (shredding the human duo with his teeth and devouring/eating the human duo). After both of the humans' death, the human duo then manifests in Pentagram City (located in the Pride Ring of Hell) as sinner demons (confirming that they had both died, hence why they are no longer mortal) due to their sinful trespassing into the Hazbin Hotel. Later, both the sinner demon duo (formerly the human reader and his/her friend or sibling) want to be rehabilitated (in short, redeemed) so they both could hopefully one day be accepted by Heaven and manifest in Heaven as saint angels (which are unlike heavenborn angels, which were always born angels, since the saint angels were once humans before they died), so the sinner demon duo (formerly the human duo) enter the Hazbin Hotel (now with purpose) and are welcomed by Charlie Morningstar, and the sinner demon duo (formerly the human duo) start trying to redeem themselves and socialize with the Hazbin Hotel's other clients/patrons in a healthy/positive and non-sinful manner, in hopes that one day they will be redeemed. There should also be quotes (including swear words such as, but not limited to f-bombs, coming from Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk) from the characters in this story so we know what they're saying and what they're thinking. Also, it is a POV reader story, so it should not be in an author's point of view (my, I, mine, etc), and it should be from the point of view of the human reader (you, your, etc).
Response: **Chapter One: A Curious Discovery** You never thought you'd find something as unique as the Asmodean Crystal on your way back from the library. You and your best friend, Jamie, were just strolling along the park when you tripped over it. The crystal glowed faintly, humming with barely contained energy. Jamie picked it up, her eyes widening in fascination. "What do you think it does?" she asked, turning it over in her hand. "No idea," you replied, equally captivated by it. "Looks kind of mystical, doesn't it?" "Yeah, definitely something you'd read about in one of your fantasy books," Jamie joked, nudging you playfully. As if responding to your recognition, the crystal glowed brighter until it emitted a blinding flash of light. You both stepped back in shock as a swirling vortex appeared, hovering in the air. The portal shimmered and vibrated, casting eerie reflections all around. "Should we... try it?" Jamie ventured, her curiosity getting the better of her. "Why not?" You said, intrigued by the possibilities. "No harm in looking." You could hear the distant sounds of what seemed to be a bustling city beyond the portal. Taking a deep breath, you gripped Jamie's hand, and together, you stepped through. --- **Chapter Two: Beneath a Hellish Sky** The first thing that hit you was the heat. It was stifling, hotter than any summer day you had ever experienced. As you glanced around, you realized you were standing before a tall, elaborate building that seemed to be cobbled together from various architectural styles. "Is that... a hotel?" Jamie asked in disbelief. The sign at the top of the building blinked intermittently: "Hazbin Hotel." "Looks like it," you murmured, squinting to take everything in. "We must be in some kind of alternate dimension." "Or Hell," Jamie said, glancing warily at the demonic insignias and red-glowing windows. "Could be," you replied, your pulse quickening with a mix of fear and excitement. "Let's check it out." --- **Chapter Three: The Taste of Hell** Entering the hotel's double doors, you found yourself in a grand lounge room. Despite its opulent décor, there was an air of neglect. Dust clung to the furniture, and the chandeliers looked like they hadn't been cleaned in ages. "Look, there's a table with food!" Jamie exclaimed, pointing to a buffet table loaded with various foods and drinks. You were both starving. "Do you think it's okay to eat?" Jamie asked, hesitant. "Probably a buffet," you rationalized. "Why else have so much food?" After a brief moment of hesitation, you both dug in, relishing the taste and quenching your thirst. "Best meal we've had in ages," you said, grinning at Jamie, who nodded enthusiastically despite her initial reservations. --- **Chapter Four: Uninvited Guests** After satisfying your hunger, you both explored the hotel further, finding various nooks and crannies to hide in. It was almost peaceful until you both felt the urgent need to use the bathroom. The restroom you found was bizarrely adorned, with more eyes and snake motifs around. Each urinal and stall was an unsettling amalgamation of bones and dark wood. After some awkward laughter about the odd decor, you both relieved yourselves, hoping not to be discovered. No sooner had you finished than you heard Vaggie's irritated voice echoing in the halls, "What the fuck is that awful smell?!" "I don't know," Angel Dust chimed in. "But it's worse than Husk's farts!" "I'm going to kill whoever did this!" Husk's voice growled. You and Jamie couldn't help but snicker quietly from your hiding spot, feeling a bit guilty but more amused. --- **Chapter Five: Discovered and Doomed** You thought you had remained undetected until you heard a high-pitched scream. Niffty found you both huddled behind some crates. "Humans! Real, live humans!" she shrieked, her one eye wide with excitement. She darted off to alert the others. "Did she just say... humans?" Jamie asked, panic in her voice. "We need to get out of here!" You grabbed her hand, and you both bolted, but it was too late. The next thing you knew, you were surrounded. Charlie Morningstar looked bewildered, while Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk were less than pleased. "Who the fuck ate our food?!" Vaggie demanded. "And stunk up the place?" Angel Dust added, glaring daggers at you. "Look, we didn't mean to intrude," you began, but Alastor's smile widened ominously. Alastor stepped forward, his eyes gleaming with malevolence. "Oh, but this is such delightful chaos! Thank you for the entertainment." With a flick of his wrist, darkness enveloped you both, and pain unlike anything you'd ever experienced ripped through you. The last thing you saw was his maniacal grin as everything went black. --- **Chapter Six: A Second Chance** You awoke in what you now understood was Hell, your bodies altered, your souls marked. You could feel the weight of your new form, sinner demons in the city of Pentagram. "We need to find a way out of this," you told Jamie, determined. "Yeah, let's head back to the Hazbin Hotel," she agreed. "Maybe Charlie can help us." Despite your fear, you stepped into the hotel once more, this time with a resolve to change. Charlie welcomed you both with a hopeful smile. "We want to be rehabilitated," you said. "Welcome," she replied warmly. "Let's start your journey to redemption." And thus began your new life, seeking redemption in the most unexpected of places.
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