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Forged in Hell: You and Your Friend's Journey of Redemption at the Hazbin Hotel

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**Chapter 1: The Discovery**

You remember the day vividly. It was an ordinary afternoon with your friend by your side when you made the discovery that would change your lives forever. The Asmodean Crystal lay in the grass beside the pathway, shimmering with an otherworldly light.

"Hey, look at this," you said, kneeling to pick it up. Your friend, let's call them Alex, glanced over your shoulder.

"Is that... a crystal?" Alex asked, intrigued.

You nodded, rotating the glowing object in your hand. "It's warm. I wonder where it came from."

As you and Alex examined the crystal, it began to pulse. The ground around you rumbled and a portal materialized before you, swirling with dark energy and the scent of sulfur.

"Uh, should we...?" Alex looked at you, uncertain but curious.

With a deep breath of excitement and trepidation, you stepped forward. "Let's see what happens."

**Chapter 2: Into Hell**

Together, you stepped through the portal and landed in front of a towering, elaborate building. The Hazbin Hotel loomed above you, its neon signs flashing welcomingly, though you felt anything but welcomed.

"This place looks insane," Alex whispered. "Where are we?"

"Only one way to find out," you replied, pulling open the stained-glass doors and stepping inside.

The hotel’s interior, far from the disrepair you may have expected, was lavish and regal, more akin to a grand palace. But it was subtle, peculiar details that made you wary—the dripping red color scheme, the eerie, staring eyes on the paintings, and the unmistakable sense of being watched.

"Holy crap, I'm starving," Alex said, clutching their stomach.

“Me too,” you admitted. “Let’s see if there’s anything to eat.”

The two of you wandered into the hotel's lounge. A table was laden with food and drinks. Alex hesitated.

"Are you sure this food is for everyone?" Alex looked skeptical, eyes darting around nervously.

"Look at the spread, it has to be a buffet," you reassured. "Besides, we haven't eaten all day."

Thus convinced, both of you dug into the mouth-watering spread, devouring fruits, bread, cheese, and washing it down with refreshing drinks.

**Chapter 3: The Stench and the Giggles**

You were careful, but unfortunately, the telltale rumble in your stomachs signaled another human need—finding a restroom. You both found one and relieved yourselves, but it seemed your actions had consequences.

It started with a sound—footsteps approaching. You hurriedly finished, just in time to overhear a voice outside.

"What the fu— Who the hell used our bathroom?" A voice cursed; it was rough and angry. You could only assume it was one of the hotel’s residents.

"Better hide," you whispered to Alex. The two of you ducked behind a stack of crates.

Minutes passed, and it became clear that your presence had been noticed, the demons muttering cross words about their destroyed privy and missing food. Alex elbowed you in the side, stifling a snicker. Despite feeling guilty, you couldn’t help but giggle as well. Their frustration was oddly amusing.

"Goddammit! I just bought that!" another voice yelled, presumably Angel Dust’s based on its campy, high-pitched tone.

"This stinks like a rotting corpse," complained another voice, likely Niffty.

"This isn’t just annoying," the first voice swore. "This is—"

**Chapter 4: Discovery**

Hearing enough, you shifted your position, and that’s when things went downhill. “Oh, new arrivals hiding in crates? Charlie’s going to love this!” A cheerful, almost manic voice piped up nearby. From the shadows emerged a small cyclopean demon—you recognized her from descriptions you'd heard: Niffty.

“Uh, hi?” you stammered, rising from your hiding spot.

“Charlie! Vaggie! You won’t believe this!” Niffty squealed before dashing off at incredible speed.

“Crap,” Alex whispered.

Barely a minute passed before you were surrounded by a cadre of demons—Charlie Morningstar, Vaggie, Angel Dust, Husk, and a grinning Alastor at the front, his aura crackling with dark energy.

"Well, well, what do we have here?" Alastor crooned. "Uninvited guests."

Vaggie pointed threateningly, "You ate our food!"

"And stunk up our restrooms," Husk added, his scowl deepening.

Charlie seemed the most puzzled of all, her brows furrowed. “How the hell did you two get here?”

"I-I’m sorry," you stammer, "We were just curious. We didn't mean any harm."

The apology cut no ice with the demon crowd, increasingly irritated.

"Sorry doesn’t fix my goddamn meal!" Angel Dust exclaimed.

Alastor’s smile widened. "I think this calls for a lesson in Hell’s hospitality." With that, shadows surged around you, the sensation of claws tearing through.

**Chapter 5: Rebirth**

The pain was nothing you could've prepared for—savage, unrelenting. Moments later, darkness claimed you. But death in Hell wasn’t the end.

When your consciousness returned, you awoke in the squalid, ever burning streets of Pentagram City. You and Alex exchanged glances, both transformed. Your mortal skin replaced by a demonic facsimile, your reflection in nearby broken mirrors showing the sinfulness manifesting in your new forms.

“This...this is Hell,” Alex muttered, their voice quaking.

"But...” You clung to hope. “Maybe we can still do good here. Charlie wanted to rehabilitate demons, right?”

Finding resolve, you both trudged back to the Hazbin Hotel. Once more, you stood at its gates, now with a new purpose.

Charlie greeted you differently this time, kinder, with a welcoming warmth. "You’re back, and you want to be redeemed?”

You nodded. “Take us in. We want to try.”

The process wouldn’t be easy, but with every painful step towards redemption, you buried the past and hoped for a future that might one day bring about your acceptance in Heaven, the goal all sinners sought at Hazbin Hotel.

This story was generated by user DylanVsFizzarolli with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.

Images were generated with OpenAI's AI system, DALL·E 2, or uploaded by the user.

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Prompt: Write the POV story of two humans (one who is the reader and the other who is his/her friend or sibling), who finds an Asmodean Crystal (which Blitzo (an imp from an adults cartoon/animated series Helluva Boss) accidentally dropped one of them during his mission with the other crewmembers of I.M.P. including Moxxie, Millie, and Loona) and both humans decided, out of innocent curiosity (with no ill intent), to test out the Asmodean Crystal to see what happens. The portal to Hell then opens to reveals the entrance to the Hazbin Hotel (from the namesake adults cartoon/animated series "Hazbin Hotel"), and both humans (with no ill intent and with pure curiosity) enter the portal and into Hell before they both go through the hotel's entrance doors and enter inside the Hazbin Hotel without the hotel's staff or guests/clients/patrons knowing. Here is what the hotel looks like; The Hazbin Hotel exterior is a tall, elaborate amalgamation of arched windows and turrets, one of which seems to be broken. It appears to be at least seven stories tall, with at least five of which being guest floors. Remnants of an airship, an ocean liner, a sailing ship and a carousel litter both sides and appear to have been incorporated into the structure of the building itself; there is also a train with some tracks looping the first and second floor exterior. Located on the top right of the building is a small radio broadcasting room, which is used as the work area for Alastor. Many signs are displayed outside the hotel: One atop the entrance reminiscent of the Hazbin Hotel logo, a large pink one atop the building with the hotel's name in lights, a neon 'HOTEL' sign at the bottom right and atop the building where Alastor's broadcast room is located, a small 'On-Air' sign is visible. Also located on the outer facade are various arrows pointing to the entrance and the broadcast room. The entrance has a tented cover with a booth in the center reminiscent of a circus or theater ticket booth. On either side of the booth are a set of double doors that have stained glass; in the pilot, they once depicted an apple on each one but were destroyed by an explosion due to Sir Pentious blowing up the doors with his airship (prior to Sir Pentious changing ways to become a nicer person before redeeming himself and becoming a saint angel (after his willing sacrifice against the series' main antagonist Adam (the exorcist angel) just before Adam is defeated by Lucifer Morningstar and killed by Niffty) in the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On"). The hotel's interior (prior to this story) was shown to be in a state of disrepair, with wooden boards covering shattered windows, signs warning of asbestos, bloodied tools left lying around, and paintings are shown hanging off the walls (however, just after the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On", these have been fixed after the hotel was rebuilt by Charlie's father Lucifer Morningstar). Much of the furniture in the lobby are strewn around haphazardly or remain boxed up in several large wooden crates. The bar uses skeletons, snakes, and bones as general themes, along with card suits and candles, and advertises itself as a casino. The area the bar in has glowing green wooden walls instead of the usual red wallpaper, with a "Jackpot" sign on the left wall and a Beelzejuice neon sign on the right wall. The word "concierge" can be presumed to be shown above the bar, and Alastor calls it the front desk when talking to Husk, suggesting that it is also the check-in counter. Despite the shabby and poor condition of the hotel, the overall theme of the building remains ornate and regal, with stained glass windows, lavish furniture, and generous usage of gold. Like the rest of Hell, the hotel has a largely red color scheme. There are many apple, snake and circus motifs throughout the hotel's interior, in reference to Charlie Morningstar's royal family, or more specifically, Lucifer Morningstar. Eyes are also a recurring theme throughout the building, appearing on the frame of almost every single painting and several vases and jars. The room the two women (Charlie Morningstar and Vaggie) share is rather large, with a regal look and a large bed, and has a window with a view of Pentagram City. Angel Dust's room has striped wallpaper, a vanity, mirrors, a place to put his wigs, and a bed with several pillows of various design, while beside it is a small bed for Fat Nuggets shaped like a pink heart with a small pillow on top, and with both beds on a single platform with neon lights. The wall behind the bed has photos of him, Cherri, and Fat Nuggets, as well as a couple of his film posters, while the bedside wall has neon lights shaped like webs. The door to his room has neon lights shaped like webs with hearts, and has three photos of him and his friends, and Fat Nuggets. Alastor's room has a mixture between both traditional décor and the fantastical, with one half being a classic "fancy study", complete with tasteful wallpaper and furnishings, the other half being a literal swamp conjured as a dining area. Sir Pentious' room (prior to Sir Pentious' death and sacrifice in the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On") shared his (Sir Pentious') airship's steampunk aesthetics of golden cogs and gears and a red and black color scheme, while his bed was a circular mattress lined with pillows; this room is now currently vacant due to Sir Pentious' invented sacrifice. After going through the hotel's doors, both of the humans (the reader and his/her friend or sibling) find themselves in the hotel's lounge room before finding the food and drinks on the table and consumes some of the food (they both wrongly believes no one will mind this, wrongly believing that the food are for everyone to eat and drink, although the reader's friend/sibling is initially concerned about it being someone else's food before the reader tells his/her friend or sibling that this table may be a buffet table hence why there's so much food, so the reader's friend or sibling is no longer worried), since both of the humans are hungry and thirsty (because they have not eaten for a day, so they need food and something to drink). The human duo then go into hiding within the hotel to avoid being discovered by Charlie Morningstar (founder of the Hazbin Hotel who is the daughter of King Lucifer Morningstar and Queen Lilith Morningstar, and was born in Hell, hence her status as a hellborn demon), Vaggie (lesbian manager of the Hazbin Hotel and Charlie's girlfriend (Vaggie sometimes swears/cusses), formerly an heavenborn exorcist angel but was banished by Lute to Hell for refusing to kill a sinner demon), Angel Dust (a tall and gay spider-like sinner demon (formerly a human but succumbed to an overdose sometime in his early 30s in 1947 and arrived in Hell as a sinner demon), an adult entertainer (he even swears/cusses), and the first volunteer for Charlie's Hazbin Hotel (which is a rehabilitation program)), Alastor (an eccentric sinner demon (who was once a human, but died in 1933 due to a dog-related incident), and one of the overlords of Hell), Husk (an ill-tempered, gambling, alcoholic cat-like sinner demon (he even swears/cusses), who was once a human, but he died in the 1970s after being ambushed with his platoon, captured, tortured, beaten, and possibly from alcohol overdose, and he arrives in Hell as a sinner demon), Niffty (a small, hyperactive cyclops-like sinner demon who was once a human woman from the 1950s before her death and arriving in Hell as a sinner demon), Razzle (a small and winged goat-like demon who serve as Charlie's bodyguard), Fat Nuggets (Angel Dust's demonic pet pig), or KeeKee (Charlie's pet demonic mouthless cyclops cat); none of the demons know who really ate the food minutes, so either Vaggie, Angel Dust, or Husk gets really angry about their food getting eaten (the human doesn't mean to upset anyone, since he/she didn't know the food belonged to the hotel's demons). This makes both of the humans quietly snicker out in amusement (they both find the demons' complaints about the stolen food and drinks kinda funny, even if the human duo feel guilty). The human duo then feel like they have to pee/poop, so they both then use one of the hotel's restrooms to get rid of their pee and poop, while they also do not get caught by the demons; the demons (mainly Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk, but Niffty also is grossed out by the smell) smell the nasty odor, which the human duo don't find too bad unlike the demons, and just like how these demons complained about their food and drinks being eaten earlier, these demons complain about that awful smell coming from the restroom (despite the human duo having already flushed the toilet, the smell still lingers, but the smell is not too terrible (and not that different from Earth and is identical to the smell back on Earth) to the human duo unlike to the demons, which to the demons smells very bad), while these demons do not know it was the human duo who made that smell. This also makes both of the humans quietly snicker out in amusement (they find the demons' complaints about the bathroom's smell kinda funny, even if both the humans feel guilty). However, while both of the humans' secrecy in the Hazbin Hotel have lasted for a long while (either for several days or weeks, despite causing the restroom's smell and the food and drinks being consumed by both of the humans themselves), are then (much to their horror) discovered by one of the Hazbin Hotel's occupants, discovered by either Niffty (who would then smile/grin and scream out of excitement before running off to let the other demons know about the humans being in the hotel), or Razzle (who is completely silent, but will still let the other demons know even without speech), or one of the hotel's pets (Fat Nuggets or KeeKee), leading to rumors of the humans inhabiting the hotel among the demons. Sadly and eventually (either hours or days later after the first demon finds both of the humans), the humans, much to their horror, are found by another demon, who yells/tells other demons about their presence to let them about it. The demons then surround both of the humans (with Charlie Morningstar being confused while Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk being unhappy with the human duo eating their food and stinking up the restroom, whilst also just as confused about the humans being in Hell, just as all other demons being confused about the humans being in Hell, since no human has ever visited or lived in Hell) before one of the demons (most likely Alastor, who enjoys chaos such as this) brutally kills both of the humans (blood and gore involved) either through black magic (using dark magic) or cannibalism (shredding the human duo with his teeth and devouring/eating the human duo). After both of the humans' death, the human duo then manifests in Pentagram City (located in the Pride Ring of Hell) as sinner demons (confirming that they had both died, hence why they are no longer mortal) due to their sinful trespassing into the Hazbin Hotel. Later, both the sinner demon duo (formerly the human reader and his/her friend or sibling) want to be rehabilitated (in short, redeemed) so they both could hopefully one day be accepted by Heaven and manifest in Heaven as saint angels (which are unlike heavenborn angels, which were always born angels, since the saint angels were once humans before they died), so the sinner demon duo (formerly the human duo) enter the Hazbin Hotel (now with purpose) and are welcomed by Charlie Morningstar, and the sinner demon duo (formerly the human duo) start trying to redeem themselves and socialize with the Hazbin Hotel's other clients/patrons in a healthy/positive and non-sinful manner, in hopes that one day they will be redeemed. There should also be quotes (including swear words such as, but not limited to f-bombs, coming from Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk) from the characters in this story so we know what they're saying and what they're thinking. Also, it is a POV reader story, so it should not be in an author's point of view (my, I, mine, etc), and it should be from the point of view of the human reader (you, your, etc).

Response: **Chapter 1: The Discovery** You remember the day vividly. It was an ordinary afternoon with your friend by your side when you made the discovery that would change your lives forever. The Asmodean Crystal lay in the grass beside the pathway, shimmering with an otherworldly light. "Hey, look at this," you said, kneeling to pick it up. Your friend, let's call them Alex, glanced over your shoulder. "Is that... a crystal?" Alex asked, intrigued. You nodded, rotating the glowing object in your hand. "It's warm. I wonder where it came from." As you and Alex examined the crystal, it began to pulse. The ground around you rumbled and a portal materialized before you, swirling with dark energy and the scent of sulfur. "Uh, should we...?" Alex looked at you, uncertain but curious. With a deep breath of excitement and trepidation, you stepped forward. "Let's see what happens." **Chapter 2: Into Hell** Together, you stepped through the portal and landed in front of a towering, elaborate building. The Hazbin Hotel loomed above you, its neon signs flashing welcomingly, though you felt anything but welcomed. "This place looks insane," Alex whispered. "Where are we?" "Only one way to find out," you replied, pulling open the stained-glass doors and stepping inside. The hotel’s interior, far from the disrepair you may have expected, was lavish and regal, more akin to a grand palace. But it was subtle, peculiar details that made you wary—the dripping red color scheme, the eerie, staring eyes on the paintings, and the unmistakable sense of being watched. "Holy crap, I'm starving," Alex said, clutching their stomach. “Me too,” you admitted. “Let’s see if there’s anything to eat.” The two of you wandered into the hotel's lounge. A table was laden with food and drinks. Alex hesitated. "Are you sure this food is for everyone?" Alex looked skeptical, eyes darting around nervously. "Look at the spread, it has to be a buffet," you reassured. "Besides, we haven't eaten all day." Thus convinced, both of you dug into the mouth-watering spread, devouring fruits, bread, cheese, and washing it down with refreshing drinks. **Chapter 3: The Stench and the Giggles** You were careful, but unfortunately, the telltale rumble in your stomachs signaled another human need—finding a restroom. You both found one and relieved yourselves, but it seemed your actions had consequences. It started with a sound—footsteps approaching. You hurriedly finished, just in time to overhear a voice outside. "What the fu— Who the hell used our bathroom?" A voice cursed; it was rough and angry. You could only assume it was one of the hotel’s residents. "Better hide," you whispered to Alex. The two of you ducked behind a stack of crates. Minutes passed, and it became clear that your presence had been noticed, the demons muttering cross words about their destroyed privy and missing food. Alex elbowed you in the side, stifling a snicker. Despite feeling guilty, you couldn’t help but giggle as well. Their frustration was oddly amusing. "Goddammit! I just bought that!" another voice yelled, presumably Angel Dust’s based on its campy, high-pitched tone. "This stinks like a rotting corpse," complained another voice, likely Niffty. "This isn’t just annoying," the first voice swore. "This is—" **Chapter 4: Discovery** Hearing enough, you shifted your position, and that’s when things went downhill. “Oh, new arrivals hiding in crates? Charlie’s going to love this!” A cheerful, almost manic voice piped up nearby. From the shadows emerged a small cyclopean demon—you recognized her from descriptions you'd heard: Niffty. “Uh, hi?” you stammered, rising from your hiding spot. “Charlie! Vaggie! You won’t believe this!” Niffty squealed before dashing off at incredible speed. “Shit,” Alex whispered. Barely a minute passed before you were surrounded by a cadre of demons—Charlie Morningstar, Vaggie, Angel Dust, Husk, and a grinning Alastor at the front, his aura crackling with dark energy. "Well, well, what do we have here?" Alastor crooned. "Uninvited guests." Vaggie pointed threateningly, "You ate our food!" "And stunk up our restrooms," Husk added, his scowl deepening. Charlie seemed the most puzzled of all, her brows furrowed. “How the heck did you two get here?” "I-I’m sorry," you stammer, "We were just curious. We didn't mean any harm." The apology cut no ice with the demon crowd, increasingly irritated. "Sorry doesn’t fix my goddamn meal!" Angel Dust exclaimed. Alastor’s smile widened. "I think this calls for a lesson in Hell’s hospitality." With that, shadows surged around you, the sensation of claws tearing through. **Chapter 5: Rebirth** The pain was nothing you could've prepared for—savage, unrelenting. Moments later, darkness claimed you. But death in Hell wasn’t the end. When your consciousness returned, you awoke in the squalid, ever burning streets of Pentagram City. You and Alex exchanged glances, both transformed. Your mortal skin replaced by a demonic facsimile, your reflection in nearby broken mirrors showing the sinfulness manifesting in your new forms. “This...this is Hell,” Alex muttered, their voice quaking. "But...” You clung to hope. “Maybe we can still do good here. Charlie wanted to rehabilitate demons, right?” Finding resolve, you both trudged back to the Hazbin Hotel. Once more, you stood at its gates, now with a new purpose. Charlie greeted you differently this time, kinder, with a welcoming warmth. "You’re back, and you want to be redeemed?” You nodded. “Take us in. We want to try.” The process wouldn’t be easy, but with every painful step towards redemption, you buried the past and hoped for a future that might one day bring about your acceptance in Heaven, the goal all sinners sought at Hazbin Hotel.

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