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"Baptism of Humiliation"

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Fear, Humiliation, Helpless, Embarrassment, Identity in the style of Monet
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Kyle’s greatest fear wasn’t the broken vase; it wasn’t even the watered-down punishment dished out by his grandmother. It was trying to face another torturous Sunday service in the full glare of the elderly congregation. He had forgotten just how fragile his autonomy was until he found himself dressed in the frilliest, most humiliating attire his grandmother could conjure.

The elderly church bus creaked and groaned under the weight of timeworn bodies as it made its way toward St. Hilda’s Church. Each pothole and bump mirrored the sinking feeling in Kyle’s stomach. He had tried to fight against his grandmother's absurd punishment, but she had always been surprisingly strong for her age. His struggle was futile—his limbs heavy, his resolve shattered.

When they finally boarded the bus, the collective gasps and cooing from the elderly ladies seemed deafening. With each patronizing pinch on his cheeks and each red lipstick kiss left on what little dignity he had, Kyle felt smaller and more helpless. His grandmother explained to the bemused faces why Kyle was trapped in this bizarre get-up, speaking in such normalcy as if discussing the weather.

"Adorable!" one elderly lady exclaimed. "He looks just like my great-granddaughter in that same bonnet!" another chimed in, their voices overlapping and suffocating him with saccharine sentiments.

The bus ride, however excruciating, was only the prelude. The true ordeal awaited at St. Hilda’s, where whispers turned to laughter, and laughter into an uproar as his grandmother paraded him down the aisle. He winced at the sight of familiar faces—people he had grown up with, some who had known him since birth. Their eyes widened and mouths curled into smiles of disbelief.

A young boy, no more than six or seven, pointed and laughed, calling him names in verse as cruel as nursery rhymes. "Baby, baby, haha! Poopie diaper baby waby!" His voice echoed in Kyle’s ears, each syllable digging a deeper trench of humiliation.

The old priestess smirked down at him, not even attempting to mask her amusement. Kyle’s heart sank as she began the farce of a baptism ceremony. His grandmother’s voice rang out clearly, declaring the absurd name that would replace his own: "Precious Widdle Cutesie Patootie Sissy Schnookums Kins."

Every eye in the church was on him, laughter blended with faux-sympathetic cooing as the priestess announced his new identity with mock solemnity. "In the eyes of God, you are now born anew."

The ceremony ended, but Kyle's embarrassment was only amplified. Bound in the baby harness sling, he could barely move as his grandmother thanked everyone for their participation. She forced a baby bottle into his mouth, her patronizing voice drilling into his already crushed spirit.

“Awww, Cutesie Patootie, don't worry! Do Granny Gran need to give you your baba?” Her words were steeped in condescension.

Outside, the congregation gathered, continuing the charade. Grandmother Fielding met with her friends, who congratulated her on her ‘new widdle grandson.’ Kyle tried to squirm away but was pinned by the collective strength and determination of the old ladies now tickling his chin and pinching his cheeks.

"Here comes the choo-choo train!" his grandmother teased. Despite his every attempt to retreat into himself, the relentless attention left him feeling utterly exposed. He couldn’t cry out, couldn’t resist—his identity, at least for these interminable moments, had been stripped away, replaced by a feeble and infantilized version of himself.

Kyle’s anger simmered beneath the surface, merging with a deep-seated feeling of helplessness. But as minutes dragged painfully into hours, he knew that there was nothing he could do. The world had a new name for him, and it laughed in his face.

This story was generated by user michael9 with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.

Images were generated with OpenAI's AI system, DALL·E 2, or uploaded by the user.

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Prompt: Kyle is17 years old. He is brought to church by his grandmother in the elderly church buss. Since it's an extra long service, and she wants to diciplin kyle for ruining her vase. She force him into a frilly diaper, a frilly bonnet , a frilly tutu, and frilly booties. Kyle tries to fight but is too weak. When he tries to complain she slaps a pacifier in his mouth and she then put him in a baby harness sling on her chest, so he can't run anywhere. When the other old church ladies on the buss sees him they find him absolutely adorable. They coos at him in baby talk and shower him with red lipstick kisses and pinch his cheek while his grandmother explains why he is dressed like that and why he is in a aby harnnes on her chest. The most embarressing is that his grandmother had made a deal with the priest to baptize him again and change his name. When his grandmother gets up and walks down the aisle to the alter, all the people the church can't believe it, when they see kyle a 17 year old boy, dressed as a baby girl and sitting in a harnnes on his grandmothers chest. Kyle tries to break free from her chest, when he sees the people laughing and pointing at him. A boy only about 6 or 7 years old laughs at him and saying:" Baby, baby haha, poopie diaper baby waby". His grandmother is to strong and with a swap on his but, Kyle gives up. The priest is an old woman and snickers at kylees baby attire and start to baptize him. The priest then says:" What is this boys new name?". His grandmother answers with a smile:" Precious Widdle Cutesie Patootie Sissy Schnookums Kins". The priest and the people can't help but laugh and coos at Kyle. The priest the annonce:"Precoius Widdle Cutesie Patootie Sissy Schnokum Kins, you are now a born a new, in the eyes of god". The cermony is now over and Kylse is furious and red with humiliation. He tries to get free from his grandmothers chest, but she is to strong and she says:" Awww Cutesie Patootie, don't worry i got you parents permison, so why are you fussing, do granny gran need to give you your baba, awww do widdle schnookums need his baba". She then meet with the other old ladys outside, who congraulate her on her new widdle grandson. She thanks them as she starts to force a baby bottle in Kyles mouth, while saying:" Here comes the choo choo train". Shen then explaning that Cutesie patootie is a bit fussy but that the ladies are welcome to pinch his cheek or tickle him under the chin chin. Kyle was furious and angry, but couldn't do anything. These old ladys was too strong and he tried to squirm but i dosen't help.

Response: Kyle’s greatest fear wasn’t the broken vase; it wasn’t even the watered-down punishment dished out by his grandmother. It was trying to face another torturous Sunday service in the full glare of the elderly congregation. He had forgotten just how fragile his autonomy was until he found himself dressed in the frilliest, most humiliating attire his grandmother could conjure. The elderly church bus creaked and groaned under the weight of timeworn bodies as it made its way toward St. Hilda’s Church. Each pothole and bump mirrored the sinking feeling in Kyle’s stomach. He had tried to fight against his grandmother's absurd punishment, but she had always been surprisingly strong for her age. His struggle was futile—his limbs heavy, his resolve shattered. When they finally boarded the bus, the collective gasps and cooing from the elderly ladies seemed deafening. With each patronizing pinch on his cheeks and each red lipstick kiss left on what little dignity he had, Kyle felt smaller and more helpless. His grandmother explained to the bemused faces why Kyle was trapped in this bizarre get-up, speaking in such normalcy as if discussing the weather. "Adorable!" one elderly lady exclaimed. "He looks just like my great-granddaughter in that same bonnet!" another chimed in, their voices overlapping and suffocating him with saccharine sentiments. The bus ride, however excruciating, was only the prelude. The true ordeal awaited at St. Hilda’s, where whispers turned to laughter, and laughter into an uproar as his grandmother paraded him down the aisle. He winced at the sight of familiar faces—people he had grown up with, some who had known him since birth. Their eyes widened and mouths curled into smiles of disbelief. A young boy, no more than six or seven, pointed and laughed, calling him names in verse as cruel as nursery rhymes. "Baby, baby, haha! Poopie diaper baby waby!" His voice echoed in Kyle’s ears, each syllable digging a deeper trench of humiliation. The old priestess smirked down at him, not even attempting to mask her amusement. Kyle’s heart sank as she began the farce of a baptism ceremony. His grandmother’s voice rang out clearly, declaring the absurd name that would replace his own: "Precious Widdle Cutesie Patootie Sissy Schnookums Kins." Every eye in the church was on him, laughter blended with faux-sympathetic cooing as the priestess announced his new identity with mock solemnity. "In the eyes of God, you are now born anew." The ceremony ended, but Kyle's embarrassment was only amplified. Bound in the baby harness sling, he could barely move as his grandmother thanked everyone for their participation. She forced a baby bottle into his mouth, her patronizing voice drilling into his already crushed spirit. “Awww, Cutesie Patootie, don't worry! Do Granny Gran need to give you your baba?” Her words were steeped in condescension. Outside, the congregation gathered, continuing the charade. Grandmother Fielding met with her friends, who congratulated her on her ‘new widdle grandson.’ Kyle tried to squirm away but was pinned by the collective strength and determination of the old ladies now tickling his chin and pinching his cheeks. "Here comes the choo-choo train!" his grandmother teased. Despite his every attempt to retreat into himself, the relentless attention left him feeling utterly exposed. He couldn’t cry out, couldn’t resist—his identity, at least for these interminable moments, had been stripped away, replaced by a feeble and infantilized version of himself. Kyle’s anger simmered beneath the surface, merging with a deep-seated feeling of helplessness. But as minutes dragged painfully into hours, he knew that there was nothing he could do. The world had a new name for him, and it laughed in his face.

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