Twist of Human's Redemption in the Hazbin Hotel
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You’ve always loved the eerie glimmer of city streets at twilight, the way the fading light danced across alleys and alcoves. But you certainly didn’t expect your curiosity to lead you here—to this strange crystal and an even stranger portal. Curiosity buzzes in your mind as you give the crystal a little squeeze, and suddenly, the world around you shimmers and twists until you’re standing face to face with an awe-inspiring, bizarrely dark edifice: the Hazbin Hotel.
“What the hell…” you murmur to yourself, taking in the elaborate amalgamation of structures melded into one towering building. Airships, ocean liners, and a carousel seem to be parts of its very walls. You can’t help but laugh at the absurdity.
The portal behind you closes with a dull pop, leaving your only path through the grand double doors of the hotel. With a deep breath, you step forward and push the doors open.
Inside, the grandeur only intensifies. Lavish furniture scattered about like a tornado had hit, stained glass windows casting colorful shards of light, gold accents decorating nearly every corner. Despite the opulence, there's something undeniably eerie about it all—not to mention the strange eyes watching you from various portraits and vases.
Your stomach growls, forcing you to remember you haven’t eaten in what feels like forever. A table in the lounge room catches your eye, laden with various foods and drinks. How convenient, you think, heading straight for it. Fruits, pastries, whimsical drinks in odd-shaped glasses—you rationalize that the food must be meant for guests like yourself, though a part of you knows it’s a bit foolish. Still, you can’t pass up free food. You devour a few slices of what seems to be hypnotically vibrant cake and down a fizzy drink that tickles your senses in the best way.
Feeling a mixture of guilt and amusement, you decide it’s best to hide for a while. You crouch behind a large set of crimson curtains, peeking out now and then. Minutes later, disgruntled voices echo down the hallway.
“Who the fuck ate my big fat cake?! I was saving that for a special occasion!” Angel Dust's voice, high-pitched and grating, bounces off the walls.
“We all have missing food, Angel!” Vaggie retorts, her frustration evident. “Someone’s been in here.”
“Well, I’ll just fuckin’ bet someone’s in here!” Husk snaps, his voice raspy with irritation. “Last thing I need is some freeloadin’ asshole stealin’ my booze.”
You can’t contain a tiny snicker, though the guilt gnaws at you. A horrible, gut-wrenching smell wafts through the air next. You grimace, recalling the necessity you had to use the restroom. Despite your attempts to minimize the evidence, it appears the demons were not pleased with your addition to their world.
“Ugh, who on earth stunk up the bathroom like that?” you hear Niffty groan, sounding almost like nails on a chalkboard.
“Goddammit! Smells like a sewer in there!” shouts Husk. “I’m gonna get whoever did this!”
You snicker again, though you feel guilty about the trouble you’ve caused. Days pass this way, you sneaking about, hiding in various nooks and crannies, trying to remain unseen but still occasionally indulging in the hotel's luxuries.
That’s when it happens. A small, hyperactive Niffty rounds a corner and almost bumps into you. Her single eye widens before she bursts into gleeful excitement.
“A human! There’s a human here!” she shrieks and darts off.
“Oh crap…” you curse and run in the opposite direction. But the alarm has been raised, and demons begin converging upon you from all sides.
Charlie Morningstar's eyes are wide with confusion, but Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk don’t share her puzzled wonder. They’re angry, and rightfully so given the circumstances, though all of them are perplexed as to how a human got into Hell.
“Well, well, well,” purrs a voice as smooth as poisoned honey. Alastor. His grin stretches impossibly wide. “What gift have we here? A little trespasser in our midst?”
“N-no, it’s not what you think, I just—” you begin, but he’s already upon you.
Without hesitation, dark energies swirl around him. He laughs, the sound like the crackle of a deranged radio frequency, and in a horrifying instant, everything goes black.
----
Blinking, you find yourself in the heart of Pentagram City. Your body feels unfamiliar, twisted into a sinner demon's form. The truth is undeniable—you died. And now you’re one of them.
An ache in your chest drives you forward. Despite your grim surroundings, you are undaunted. You want redemption. You want a second chance.
As you approach the Hazbin Hotel, a sense of resolve overcomes you. Charlie greets you with a mix of hope and weariness as you step inside the once more.
“If you’re willing to change,” she says softly, “you’ll always have a place here.”
And so, you begin your journey toward redemption, hoping that one day, Heaven will welcome you with open arms, and the horrors of Hell will merely be a distant memory.
This story was generated by user MeganAndy with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.
Images were generated with OpenAI's AI system, DALL·E 2, or uploaded by the user.
AI Prompts
Prompt: Write a POV story of a human, who finds an Asmodean Crystal (which Blitzo (an imp from an adults cartoon/animated series Helluva Boss) accidentally dropped one of them during his mission with the other crewmembers of I.M.P. (Immediate Murder Professionals) including Moxxie, Millie, and Loona) and decided, out of innocent curiosity, to test out the Asmodean Crystal to see what happens. The portal to Hell then opens to reveals the entrance to the Hazbin Hotel (from the namesake adults cartoon/animated series "Hazbin Hotel"), and the human (with no ill intent and with pure curiosity) enters the portal and into Hell before he/she goes through the hotel's entrance doors and enters inside the Hazbin Hotel without the hotel's staff or guests/clients/patrons knowing. Here is what the hotel looks like; The Hazbin Hotel exterior is a tall, elaborate amalgamation of arched windows and turrets, one of which seems to be broken. It appears to be at least seven stories tall, with at least five of which being guest floors. Remnants of an airship, an ocean liner, a sailing ship and a carousel litter both sides and appear to have been incorporated into the structure of the building itself; there is also a train with some tracks looping the first and second floor exterior. Located on the top right of the building is a small radio broadcasting room, which is used as the work area for Alastor. Many signs are displayed outside the hotel: One atop the entrance reminiscent of the Hazbin Hotel logo, a large pink one atop the building with the hotel's name in lights, a neon 'HOTEL' sign at the bottom right and atop the building where Alastor's broadcast room is located, a small 'On-Air' sign is visible. Also located on the outer facade are various arrows pointing to the entrance and the broadcast room. The entrance has a tented cover with a booth in the center reminiscent of a circus or theater ticket booth. On either side of the booth are a set of double doors that have stained glass; in the pilot, they once depicted an apple on each one but were destroyed by an explosion due to Sir Pentious blowing up the doors with his airship (prior to Sir Pentious changing ways to become a nicer person before redeeming himself and becoming a saint angel (after his willing sacrifice against the series' main antagonist Adam (the exorcist angel) just before Adam is defeated by Lucifer Morningstar and killed by Niffty) in the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On"). The hotel's interior (prior to this story) was shown to be in a state of disrepair, with wooden boards covering shattered windows, signs warning of asbestos, bloodied tools left lying around, and paintings are shown hanging off the walls (however, just after the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On", these have been fixed after the hotel was rebuilt by Charlie's father Lucifer Morningstar). Much of the furniture in the lobby are strewn around haphazardly or remain boxed up in several large wooden crates. The bar uses skeletons, snakes, and bones as general themes, along with card suits and candles, and advertises itself as a casino. The area the bar in has glowing green wooden walls instead of the usual red wallpaper, with a "Jackpot" sign on the left wall and a Beelzejuice neon sign on the right wall. The word "concierge" can be presumed to be shown above the bar, and Alastor calls it the front desk when talking to Husk, suggesting that it is also the check-in counter. Despite the shabby and poor condition of the hotel, the overall theme of the building remains ornate and regal, with stained glass windows, lavish furniture, and generous usage of gold. Like the rest of Hell, the hotel has a largely red color scheme. There are many apple, snake and circus motifs throughout the hotel's interior, in reference to Charlie Morningstar's royal family, or more specifically, Lucifer Morningstar. Eyes are also a recurring theme throughout the building, appearing on the frame of almost every single painting and several vases and jars. The room the two women (Charlie Morningstar and Vaggie) share is rather large, with a regal look and a large bed, and has a window with a view of Pentagram City. Angel Dust's room has striped wallpaper, a vanity, mirrors, a place to put his wigs, and a bed with several pillows of various design, while beside it is a small bed for Fat Nuggets shaped like a pink heart with a small pillow on top, and with both beds on a single platform with neon lights. The wall behind the bed has photos of him, Cherri, and Fat Nuggets, as well as a couple of his film posters, while the bedside wall has neon lights shaped like webs. The door to his room has neon lights shaped like webs with hearts, and has three photos of him and his friends, and Fat Nuggets. Alastor's room has a mixture between both traditional décor and the fantastical, with one half being a classic "fancy study", complete with tasteful wallpaper and furnishings, the other half being a literal swamp conjured as a dining area. Sir Pentious' room (prior to Sir Pentious' death and sacrifice in the season 1's finale episode "The Show Must Go On") shared his (Sir Pentious') airship's steampunk aesthetics of golden cogs and gears and a red and black color scheme, while his bed was a circular mattress lined with pillows; this room is now currently vacant due to Sir Pentious' invented sacrifice. After going through the hotel's doors, the human finds himself/herself in the hotel's lounge room before finding the food and drinks on the table and consumes some of them (he wrongly believes no one will mind this, wrongly believing that the food are for everyone to eat and drink), since he/she is both hungry and thirsty (because he/she has not eaten for a day, so he/she needs food and something to drink). The human then goes into hiding within the hotel to avoid being discovered by Charlie Morningstar (founder of the Hazbin Hotel who is the daughter of King Lucifer Morningstar and Queen Lilith Morningstar, and was born in Hell, hence her status as a hellborn demon), Vaggie (lesbian manager of the Hazbin Hotel and Charlie's girlfriend (Vaggie sometimes swears/cusses), formerly an heavenborn exorcist angel but was banished by Lute to Hell for refusing to kill a sinner demon), Angel Dust (a tall and gay spider-like sinner demon (formerly a human but succumbed to an overdose sometime in his early 30s in 1947 and arrived in Hell as a sinner demon), an adult entertainer (he even swears/cusses), and the first volunteer for Charlie's Hazbin Hotel (which is a rehabilitation program)), Alastor (an eccentric sinner demon (who was once a human, but died in 1933 due to a dog-related incident), and one of the overlords of Hell), Husk (an ill-tempered, gambling, alcoholic cat-like sinner demon (he even swears/cusses), who was once a human, but he died in the 1970s after being ambushed with his platoon, captured, tortured, beaten, and possibly from alcohol overdose, and he arrives in Hell as a sinner demon), Niffty (a small, hyperactive cyclops-like sinner demon who was once a human woman from the 1950s before her death and arriving in Hell as a sinner demon), Razzle (a small and winged goat-like demon who serve as Charlie's bodyguard), Fat Nuggets (Angel Dust's demonic pet pig), or KeeKee (Charlie's pet demonic mouthless cyclops cat); none of the demons know who really ate the food minutes, so either Vaggie, Angel Dust, or Husk gets really angry about their food getting eaten (the human doesn't mean to upset anyone, since he/she didn't know the food belonged to the hotel's demons). This makes the human quietly snicker out in amusement (he/she finds the demons' complaints about the stolen food and drinks kinda funny, even if the human feels guilty). The human then felt like he/she had to pee/poop, so he/she also uses one of the hotel's restrooms to get rid of his/her pee and poop, while he/she also does not get caught by the demons; the demons (mainly Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk, but Niffty also is grossed out by the smell) smell the nasty odor, which the human doesn't find too bad unlike the demons, and just like how these demons complained about their food and drinks being eaten earlier, these demons complain about that awful smell coming from the restroom (despite the human having already flushed the toilet, the smell still lingers, but the smell is not too terrible (and not that different from Earth and is identical to the smell back on Earth) to the human unlike to the demons, which to them smells very bad), while these demons do not know it was the human who made that smell. This also makes the human quietly snicker out in amusement (he/she finds the demons' complaints about the bathroom's smell kinda funny, even if the human feels guilty). However, while the human's secrecy in the Hazbin Hotel has lasted for a long while (either for several days or weeks, despite causing the restroom's smell and the food and drinks being consumed by the human himself/herself), is then (much to his/her horror) discovered by one of the Hazbin Hotel's occupants, discovered by either Niffty (who would then smile/grin and scream out of excitement before running off to let the other demons know about the human being in the hotel), or Razzle (who is completely silent, but will still let the other demons know even without speech), or one of the hotel's pets (Fat Nuggets or KeeKee), leading to rumors of a human inhabiting the hotel among the demons. Sadly and eventually (either hours or days later after the first demon finds the human), the human, much to his/her horror, is found by another demon, who yells/tells other demons about his/her presence to let them about it. The demons then surround the human (with Charlie Morningstar being confused while Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk being unhappy with the human eating their food and stinking up the restroom, whilst also just as confused about the human being in Hell, just as all other demons being confused about the human being in Hell, since no human has ever visited or lived in Hell) before one of the demons (most likely Alastor, who enjoys chaos such as this (plus, Alastor doesn't want the human to spread tales of either Hazbin Hotel or all of Hell's existence)) brutally kills the human (blood and gore involved) either through black magic (using dark magic), either that or through cannibalism (shredding the human's flesh with his teeth and devouring/eating the human). After the human's death, the human then manifests in Pentagram City (located in the Pride Ring of Hell) as a sinner demon (confirming that he/she had died, hence why he/she is no longer mortal) due to his/her sinful trespassing into the Hazbin Hotel. Later, although the sinner demon (formerly the human himself/herself) no longer could come back home on Earth, he/she wants to be rehabilitated (in short, redeemed) so he/she could hopefully one day be accepted by Heaven and manifest in Heaven as a saint angel (which are unlike heavenborn angels, which were always born angels, since the saint angels were once humans before they died), so the sinner demon (formerly the human himself/herself) enters the Hazbin Hotel (now with purpose) and is welcomed by Charlie Morningstar, and the sinner demon (formerly the human himself/herself) starts trying to redeem himself/herself and socializes with the Hazbin Hotel's other clients/patrons in a healthy/positive and non-sinful manner, in hopes that one day he/she will be redeemed and be accepted by Heaven so that he/she will be converted into a saint angel and he/she will live forever in peace in the heavenly afterlife. There should also be quotes (including swear words such as, but not limited to f-bombs, coming from Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk) from the characters in this story so we know what they're saying and what they're thinking. Also, it is a POV reader story, so it should not be in an author's point of view (my, I, mine, etc), and it should be from the point of view of the human reader (you, your, etc).
Response: You’ve always loved the eerie glimmer of city streets at twilight, the way the fading light danced across alleys and alcoves. But you certainly didn’t expect your curiosity to lead you here—to this strange crystal and an even stranger portal. Curiosity buzzes in your mind as you give the crystal a little squeeze, and suddenly, the world around you shimmers and twists until you’re standing face to face with an awe-inspiring, bizarrely dark edifice: the Hazbin Hotel. “What the hell…” you murmur to yourself, taking in the elaborate amalgamation of structures melded into one towering building. Airships, ocean liners, and a carousel seem to be parts of its very walls. You can’t help but laugh at the absurdity. The portal behind you closes with a dull pop, leaving your only path through the grand double doors of the hotel. With a deep breath, you step forward and push the doors open. Inside, the grandeur only intensifies. Lavish furniture scattered about like a tornado had hit, stained glass windows casting colorful shards of light, gold accents decorating nearly every corner. Despite the opulence, there's something undeniably eerie about it all—not to mention the strange eyes watching you from various portraits and vases. Your stomach growls, forcing you to remember you haven’t eaten in what feels like forever. A table in the lounge room catches your eye, laden with various foods and drinks. How convenient, you think, heading straight for it. Fruits, pastries, whimsical drinks in odd-shaped glasses—you rationalize that the food must be meant for guests like yourself, though a part of you knows it’s a bit foolish. Still, you can’t pass up free food. You devour a few slices of what seems to be hypnotically vibrant cake and down a fizzy drink that tickles your senses in the best way. Feeling a mixture of guilt and amusement, you decide it’s best to hide for a while. You crouch behind a large set of crimson curtains, peeking out now and then. Minutes later, disgruntled voices echo down the hallway. “Who the fuck ate my big fat cake?! I was saving that for a special occasion!” Angel Dust's voice, high-pitched and grating, bounces off the walls. “We all have missing food, Angel!” Vaggie retorts, her frustration evident. “Someone’s been in here.” “Well, I’ll just fuckin’ bet someone’s in here!” Husk snaps, his voice raspy with irritation. “Last thing I need is some freeloadin’ asshole stealin’ my booze.” You can’t contain a tiny snicker, though the guilt gnaws at you. A horrible, gut-wrenching smell wafts through the air next. You grimace, recalling the necessity you had to use the restroom. Despite your attempts to minimize the evidence, it appears the demons were not pleased with your addition to their world. “Ugh, who the hell stunk up the bathroom like that?” you hear Niffty groan, sounding almost like nails on a chalkboard. “Goddammit! Smells like a sewer in there!” shouts Husk. “I’m gonna get whoever did this!” You snicker again, though you feel guilty about the trouble you’ve caused. Days pass this way, you sneaking about, hiding in various nooks and crannies, trying to remain unseen but still occasionally indulging in the hotel's luxuries. That’s when it happens. A small, hyperactive Niffty rounds a corner and almost bumps into you. Her single eye widens before she bursts into gleeful excitement. “A human! There’s a human here!” she shrieks and darts off. “Oh shit…” you curse and run in the opposite direction. But the alarm has been raised, and demons begin converging upon you from all sides. Charlie Morningstar's eyes are wide with confusion, but Vaggie, Angel Dust, and Husk don’t share her puzzled wonder. They’re angry, and rightfully so given the circumstances, though all of them are perplexed as to how a human got into Hell. “Well, well, well,” purrs a voice as smooth as poisoned honey. Alastor. His grin stretches impossibly wide. “What gift have we here? A little trespasser in our midst?” “N-no, it’s not what you think, I just—” you begin, but he’s already upon you. Without hesitation, dark energies swirl around him. He laughs, the sound like the crackle of a deranged radio frequency, and in a horrifying instant, everything goes black. ---- Blinking, you find yourself in the heart of Pentagram City. Your body feels unfamiliar, twisted into a sinner demon's form. The truth is undeniable—you died. And now you’re one of them. An ache in your chest drives you forward. Despite your grim surroundings, you are undaunted. You want redemption. You want a second chance. As you approach the Hazbin Hotel, a sense of resolve overcomes you. Charlie greets you with a mix of hope and weariness as you step inside the once more. “If you’re willing to change,” she says softly, “you’ll always have a place here.” And so, you begin your journey toward redemption, hoping that one day, Heaven will welcome you with open arms, and the horrors of Hell will merely be a distant memory.
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